Comparison: It’s What You Make of It

There’s this song by Britt Nicole that I absolutely love: “Work of Art.” In it, Britt sings: “Comparing is poison/That’s killing you and me/The lies of perfection/We ain’t gonna believe.”

I was thinking about this song the other day while I was writing my “Nine Truths Writers Need to Remember” post, where I talked about how you shouldn’t compare your writing journey against anyone else’s because yours was unique.

You’ve probably heard that a tool is just a tool–neutral. It’s just what you do with it that makes it good or bad. A shovel, a knife, an axe can be used in a positive way or a negative way.

It’s the same with comparison. Comparison is not, in itself, good or bad. It’s just a tool. A tool that can be helpful or harmful, depending on how you use it.

The instructors at the Young Writer’s Workshop put a heavy emphasis on this. They say that the only person you should be comparing against is your past self and not other people.

For example: A while back (I’d say 2018), I took a creative writing class at my homeschool co-op. For one assignment, I wrote flash fiction about a girl at a military funeral. Recently, I found it in my desk drawer and reread it, and let me tell you, it was terrible.

But that’s actually a good thing, because it shows me how far I’ve come since then. I compared my writing against something that I had written, and it actually encouraged me–proof that comparison isn’t bad in and of itself.

So next time you think “She’s so much better than me” or “I can’t write as well as him,” stop. Shove that thought out of your brain like it’s a hot potato. The only person you should be comparing against is your former self.

I hope you find comfort and solace in this, and I hope that if you remember nothing else that I have said, at least you will carry this little tidbit with you for the rest of your life.

Callie: A Short Story

Head down, hood up, I recite in my head. Act casual, look casual. This isn’t out of the ordinary.

Carrying a bouquet of daisies and forget-me-nots, I walk out of the store. I haven’t paid for them, of course; if I paid for every bouquet I took, I would have been bankrupt long before now.

A part of me twinges with guilt, but I shrug it off and walk towards the cemetery. The same routine, every day.

Once I reach her grave, I brush yesterday’s flowers off of the headstone and lay today’s on it. Like yesterday, and the day before, I trace my fingers over the epitaph, reciting it in my head. Like yesterday, and the day before, I close my eyes and remember her. Like yesterday, and the day before, I stay with her until the sun goes down.

The next day is the same. Into the store, choose a bouquet. Walk out—

“So it’s you.”

I turn. A pang hits me. I’ve been caught.

The shopkeeper, a pudgy, balding man maybe in his 50’s or so, stands there, hands on hips. In all the time I’ve been stealing from here, I’ve never talked to him, but I know his schedule probably better than he does. It’s why I’ve been so successful.

“You’re the one who’s been stealing my flowers.”

What do I do? Run? Confess? I settle for standing there in silence.

“Who’s the girl?” the shopkeeper asks.

This, at least, takes me by surprise. “What?”

He cracks a smile. “A boy like you, stealing flowers every day? Must be for some girl. Is she pretty?”

“I, ah, that is, ah,” I stammer. I mean, I am, but not the kind of girl he expects me to be stealing for. “I mean—”

The shopkeeper cuts me off with a wave of his hand. “Take me with you to meet her. Then we’ll decide your punishment.”

“Are you gonna call the cops on me?” I blurt. It’s the only sentence I can form. Besides, I need to stall him.

“Boy, I just told you.” He chuckles. “Take me to her.”

Hands sweating, heart thumping, I lead him down the street, all the while wondering how I’m going to break the news to him. What a picture we make—a nervous young guy holding a bouquet of flowers and babbling incoherently to a middle-aged guy in an apron, who’s chuckling condescendingly as I try to explain.

He frowns when I push open the cemetery’s gates. “Is this a shortcut or something?”

I shake my head wordlessly and make my way over to her grave, where I sweep yesterday’s flowers off of the headstone, my cheeks burning as the shopkeeper’s gaze travels over the weathered bouquets on the ground. Still, he doesn’t say anything.

A moment passes. Two. Then, in a hushed voice, the shopkeeper says, “So this is who it is.”

I nod. “Callie.” Just saying her name out loud hurts, like swallowing broken glass.

Quietly, the shopkeeper crouches down and reads the epitaph, his eyes flicking back and forth. He traces his finger across the engraved lily. I want to scream at him to stop, stop touching it, stop defiling it. But I stay mute and close my eyes.

When he stands, his voice is hoarse and throaty. “How long?”

“Sixteen months on Friday.” The tears threaten to spill over. I sniff. But once I start talking, I can’t stop. “She was coming home from college, and it was late at night. The driver of the bus she was on fell asleep. The bus slammed into the guardrail.” I swallow. “There were no survivors.”

My voice breaks on the last sentence. “I didn’t get to say goodbye.”

Then I bury my face in my hands, letting the tears flow freely.

I don’t know how long it is before I dry the tears from my face and look up—five, ten minutes, maybe? The shopkeeper waits patiently, staring at the headstone. I think I even see him crying a little.

He clears his throat. “I…I think we can make a deal.”

“Like what?” I ask. My voice sounds like sandpaper—feels like it, too.

“How about….” He hesitates. “Come work for me. We’ll figure out a schedule. Callie can have her flowers.”

I stick my hand out. “Deal.” The shopkeeper looks a little surprised, but he shakes on it.

After all, this is Callie.

Anything for Callie.

The Liebster Award (Times Two!)

(image in graphic belongs to me)

Hello, everyone, and welcome back to Quote, Unquote!

Today, I have the ultimate honour to participate in the Liebster Blog Award–twice! Hannah over at A Reading Writer tagged me, then Mia at Windows tagged me again. So I have two lovely sets of questions to answer today.

Let’s jump right in!

The Rules

  1. Thank the person who nominated you, include a link to their blog, and add the Liebster Award badge to your blog and/or post. (Thank you, Mia and Hannah!)
  2. Answer the eleven questions from the person who nominated you.
  3. Give eleven random facts about yourself.
  4. Nominate 5-11 fellow bloggers with less than 200 followers.
  5. Notify your nominees that you nominated them for the Liebster Award.
  6. Ask your nominees eleven questions.

Hannah’s Questions

1. If you could switch places with any author, who would you pick and why?

Ooh…this is a hard question. I’d probably pick Kara Swanson, because her audience and the support she receives seems fantastic to me.

2. What is your favourite era?

Right now, I’m fascinated with the early 1900s, in particular 1912-1914. I’ve been studying the Titanic recently for a research project, and the customs of that era have pulled me in.

3. What is your favourite region of the world?

Well, I’m rather partial to Michigan, especially farther north, but I suppose I’m biased.

Canada! I don’t know why. Just–Canada! (Eh?)

I also love Scandinavia, Greece, and Rome, mostly because of the history there.

4. If you went to a bazaar and could only buy one thing, what would you buy?

*looks up bazaar*

I mean…it would really depend on what they had at the bazaar. I’d probably come out of it with a funky new pair of earrings to add to my ever-growing collection. Probably dangly ones. Probably sparkly.

5. What fictional character would you want to befriend?

Wait, I have to choose one? Can it be my own?

Fé. A thousand times Fé.

For those of you who don’t know, Fé is my fox-shapeshifter character from my fantasy novel As the Night Falls. She is completely awesome, and I love her so much. No matter that she’s my own creation. It counts.

6. Would you rather live without electricity or running water?

Electricity, because: A) you get to work by candlelight all the time! B) we live close to the library, so we can use computers and stuff there, and C) then you can still take hot baths all the time.

7. What was your first serious WIP (work in progress)?

Ummm. This is embarrassing.

The very first WIP I had was a Minecraft fanfiction. (I was nine, okay?) It was kind of stupid and dumb, but I loved writing it nonetheless. I had several chapters before I lost interest.

Then, in May, when I rediscovered my love of writing, I started one about four girls at camp. It was very heavily *cough* influenced by a book I had recently read, The Girls of Firefly Cabin. I never got past the first couple of chapters, though I think I might be able to salvage some of it.

8. If your dominant hand stopped working, how would that affect your writing?

Well, maybe I’d be able to write in notebooks like a normal person for once. (I’m left-handed.) I’d probably struggle at first while I adjusted, because I do hand-write a fair amount, but I would definitely adapt over time.

9. If you had to write from the perspective of a president, which one would you write from?

Honestly? I think Trump. It would present unique challenges. Or maybe John Adams, who was trying to pick up the pieces of Washington’s highly successful career. Either would require a lot of research.

10. If you could only use one sense to describe surroundings, which sense would you pick?

Touch. Eyes deceive you, and ears deceive you, and you can’t always taste or smell things, but touch is rarely fooled.

11. And lastly, what is your perfect character?

My perfect character is the one with flaws. My perfect character knows it’s okay to break and cry sometimes, but strikes a balance between being a total wimp and being unrealistically tough-guy. My perfect character is one I can relate to.


Mia’s Questions

1. What food do you want to like, but just can’t?

Sausage. My entire family loves sausage, and I just cannot stomach it. I’m sorry. Ew. No.

I feel like a failure of a German.

2. If you could go anywhere in the world, where would you go?

Canada! Eh.

3. Excluding any instruments that you might play, what is your favourite instrument?

I really, really love trumpet, but I play it, so that doesn’t count.

Probably cello or viola. They’re so deep and rich, and I love the sounds that come out of both instruments. It reminds me of melted dark chocolate for some reason.

4. What is the funniest thing that has ever happened to you?

Once I was at a movie night with my youth group, and I was sitting next to my friend. We were at a particularly tense part, and the bomb was counting down, so I was all scrunched up on the couch, tensed up. Just as it hit zero, my friend leaned over and yelled “BOO!” in my ear. I screamed loud enough to wake the dead!

It wasn’t funny at the time, but I can laugh now. And maybe it’s not the funniest thing that’s ever happened to me, but my brain has failed me.

5. What is your favourite day of the week?

Thursday or Wednesday. Thursday because I usually have nothing going on, and Wednesday because I have youth group and my posts go out that day.

6. What is something random that you like to do?

I love making jewelry! Usually out of Shrinky Dinks or polymer clay. Which may explain why I have so many earrings.

7. Early bird or night owl?

Yes.

8. On a scale of one to ten, how excited were you for this nomination?

Eight, probably?

9. You have the opportunity to go on an all-expenses-paid trip to see your favourite singer perform, but it happens at the same time as something else you’ve always wanted to do. What is the other thing, and which would you choose?

The other thing would be a trip on the Titanic II when it sails in 2022! I would definitely pick that. I’m sorry, Au/Ra, but Titanic wins.

10. When did you decide you wanted to start a blog?

Early September of 2020, I think. I’m not exactly sure, but I know I spent two weeks daydreaming about it and thinking up colour schemes and such and then another two weeks spending every spare minute on it before I launched on October 1.

Although…before Quote, Unquote was a terrible blog on Blogspot that my sister and I had in 2017. It. Was. Awful. I remember being so proud of it at the time. We posted for about four months and then it just ground to a halt. It’s still out there.

And no, I’m not giving you the link. I don’t need that floating around the Internet, thank you very much.

11. And the question for the win, how many other blogs are you following?

My WordPress Reader says 35, plus…two Wix blogs, I think, so 37.

Wow. Maybe I should cut back.


Eleven Random Facts

This is going to be hard.

  1. I used to love coding and building games on Scratch. Sometimes I still build little websites with HTML for the sheer fun of it.
  2. I know five people that I consider my best friends, and I’ve never even met two of them in person.
  3. Sometimes, people call me Lies or Lies!.
  4. Four is my favourite number.
  5. I’m obsessed with foxes.
  6. Sometimes, I sign off emails with the emojis ❤🐧🥔.
  7. I love pineapple on pizza.
  8. I have a giant periodic table of elements that I made myself on my bedroom wall.
  9. I am a veritable fount of Minecraft information–I’ve been playing since I was probably eight years old. Sometimes I read the wiki for fun.
  10. I love paint colours for some reason. I have an enormous deck of paint chips, and sometimes I flip through it for no reason.
  11. My first serious story was about a scientist who had to escape a mutation in a lab. It was set in Canada, of course. (Eh.)

I nominate:

Sarah @ A Day in the Life

Esther @ Esther Josephine Writes

Mikayla @ Kingdom Seekers First

Cynthia @ achinty

Kameron @ Corner of Bubbles

Your questions:

  1. What’s the best speech you’ve ever read/heard?
  2. What’s your favourite number? Why?
  3. What’s something you want to do or think would be cool to do but you can’t or won’t for whatever reason?
  4. Do you believe in coincidences?
  5. What colour do you think you are most like?
  6. If you only had to ask two questions to know someone fully, what two questions would you ask?
  7. What makes you laugh when your day isn’t going right?
  8. What’s a movie that holds special nostalgic significance for you?
  9. Describe your perfect afternoon.
  10. What’s a small thing that you love?
  11. How did you pick your blog name?

Thank you again, Mia and Hannah! Thank you for reading, everybody, and I’ll see you next Wednesday.

50 Awesome Fiction Prompts to Get Your Inspiration Flowing

I know that sometimes it’s hard to get inspiration for a new story or even for one in progress. Thankfully, we have fiction prompts to turn to! I’ve compiled a list of 50 of my favourite fiction prompts from my good friends on the Young Writers Workshop. The ones you find may be dialogue, a concept, or a scene. Go get inspired!

Content warnings: There may be blood, murder, death, etc. discussed in these. What can I say? We’re writers.


“I’m not very fond of this idea.”

“Well, I’m not very fond of you right now. Just put it on and get in the car!”


“And they rode away into the sunset…”

“What’s a sunset?”

“Well, I don’t know, but my granddad saw one once.”


“Look, there’s even a statue dedicated to you!” 

“Yes, but I’ve never been here before.”


When he produced two syringes of clear fluid, she knew what lay ahead. Pulling up her sleeve, she could only hope everything would turn out as it should.


“You did what?

“It was an accident!”

“How do you blow up an entire building on accident!?”


“Stop glaring at my mark.”

“I’ve lived too long under that symbol to ignore it.”

“And I’ve lived over you for too long to enjoy you disobeying me. But we don’t always get what we want, do we?”


“My heart is made of stone and covered in a pretty layer of ice.”


The antagonist has kidnapped two of the protagonist’s loved ones and is holding them hostage. Could be a sibling, a boyfriend/girlfriend, a parent, a best friend. The protagonist has to choose which one dies and which one lives. Who dies? Who lives? Does the protagonist save them? Does the protagonist sacrifice one of them? What are the outcomes?


The traffic was painfully slow as the cab reached the airport. She couldn’t leave, not without me telling her that I love her.

When I finally reached the airport, I knew I had missed my shot–but something else was wrong. Emergency services were everywhere. A plane had crashed.

Her plane.


“You didn’t have to throw it!”

“It was a cat. Why wouldn’t I throw it?”


There is nothing quite like an unfamiliar place in the dark.  Especially when you can’t see the blood, just smell it.


“This is your prophecy, young one. You must use the map to–”

“I, uh, may have lost the map. Is there a backup?”


“There’s something about you I can’t quite replace…”

“Don’t you mean explain?”

“No, I mean replace.”


“Is he…?”

“He is.”


“She has built an empire of driftwood. All I’ll need is a little spark…”


“Oh, is that true? Too bad I’ll have to kill you now…”


A character is a woman with the power to draw magic from the night sky, one star at the time. When her significant other/a family member/a friend gets sick, she has to drain the Milky Way to cure them. She is now known as “The Sky Thief”.


“You have the heart of a rebel.”

“I’ll take that as a compliment.”


“Gotta love skylights. No one ever thinks to guard them.”


The villain shook their head. “What a pity…”

“Let me go!” begged the protagonist again. “Please,” she sobbed. “Please.”

“You could have been Queen. It’s a pity you chose this path instead.”

The villain lifted their dagger.


Lindsay first saw the ghost at the bus stop.


Once upon a time, I died. And that’s what started this whole mess.


“You’re brave, but you don’t have a conscience. Therefore, you act like an idiot.”


“I don’t trust you.”

“Dude, then why did you do the trust fall with me?”

“Because I knew that if you dropped me, I would have an excuse for missing my chemistry class. Plus, they always give me suckers at the doctor’s office.”


“You know we’re not all born with the ability to throw fireballs, right?”


Person 1: “What is your current mental state?”

Person 2: spins around in an office chair while staring off into space

Person 1: “That isn’t a–“

Person 3: “No, no, he’s got a point.”


He showed up at my cell in a purple robe. Leaning on the bars, he sighed. “Hey Emily, would you sing?”

“You want your hostage to sing to you? Are you threatening me?”

He rubbed his fluffy hair. “No. It’s late. I can’t sleep. I like your singing voice. That’s it.”

I snorted. “Well, I’m so sorry, but you’re not going to hear it.”

“I’ll get you a pastry or something in the morning.” He shrugged.

I crossed my arms. “Okay, fine.”


I always thought the phrase “My mind is elsewhere” was an expression.

Well, I was dead wrong.


I was dead.

My life flashed before my eyes.

Everything leading up to this event replayed itself in my mind.

All of it slowly leading up to this moment.

I was so dead.

“Please turn in your Algebra homework.“


My body screamed in pain.

Unfortunately for it, I only speak English and sarcasm.


“Well, one good thing came out of that.”

“What is it?”

“I can cross it off my bucket list!”


“That’s a terrible idea. What time?”


The phone rings. The voice on the other end says “We need you again,” then hangs up.


The evil queen keeps a diary. Write her first entry, then her 12th, then her last.


Suddenly, all over the world, all children start drawing the same thing over and over again.


Your antagonist has died. Who leaves flowers on their grave?


He shook his head. “That’s like trying to stop a volcano with a cork.”


My sister inherited my mother’s high cheekbones and wavy flaxen hair. My brother inherited my father’s tall frame and smiling periwinkle eyes.

And me?

I inherited the family’s guilt.

Or that may have been acquired.


For the longest time, I have loved the stars.


“Sorry about that,” he says apologetically, reaching down a hand to help me up.

“That’s okay,” I reply, taking his hand and hoisting myself up. I dust myself off. “I’m used to it.”


You stand on the stage, your stomach fluttering and your knees knocking. Any moment now your form will be announced, the form you will get to shape-shift into.

The announcer turns towards you and booms into his microphone, “This young student is diligent, smart and hardworking! Their form will be one in the mollusk family…!”

You tune out. What could be worse…


The year is a 3021. Writers now struggle to make a living. They are esteemed but almost all of the ideas have been hashed. In order to keep books from dying, the government picks the most elite writers and sets out recycling bin for ideas. Most people don’t write anymore and are paid for their ideas.

Your job as the janitor is to empty the ideas into the vault, where they are sorted. The ideas in bright yellow are fresh and valuable, the dark green less valuable and the burnt crimson unusable. The writers then pick the best ones and write them. You are a little figure behind the scenes, but you don’t mind. You don’t get noticed either.

Until one day when the brightest yellow idea you have ever seen escapes from the vault and runs away. You chase it, expecting to lose your job if you don’t catch it. Little did you realize how much more you risked–and how much you could gain.


I opened my eyes. A breathtakingly beautiful woman was leaning over me, anxiously scrutinizing my face.

“Who are you?” My throat felt scratchy.

Her eyes widened.


You go over the list of things you need to do while you pet sit.

  1. Dust two times a week
  2. Bring any mail or packages in
  3. Water the cat
  4. Feed the plants

“That’s got to be a typo, right?” you ask the cat. Suddenly, the cat bursts into flames.


“So what are you in for?”

She looks up at me with glowing amber eyes. “You don’t want to know.”


Boy:

She screws up her eyes, wrinkles her nose, and presses a hand to her already bruising temple. She could cry. I wouldn’t mind. It hurts more to try not to. I can tell she’s in pain. She bites her bottom lip and clenches her fists, but she doesn’t cry. I admire her for it.

Girl:

He watches as I try not to cry out in pain. I’m afraid that if I cry, he will laugh. I can feel his eyes on me and I want to shrink away. I meet his gaze and he smiles at me. One tear drips down my cheek.  He doesn’t look away or laugh. I admire him for it.


As much as I told myself I hated her completely, I couldn’t believe it. I knew I would love her as much as I hated her. No matter how much she annoyed the crap out of me, I was overcome with the desire to stay by her side.

Forever.


Everyone in the world has the ability to read thoughts. Except for one person.


You are one of the mechanics on the first-ever self-flying airplane.


Your pen pal lives on the opposite side of the universe.


I laughed in the face of death.

And Death laughed right back at me.


She had been called many things in her life.

Thief, vagabond, exile, outcast.

Now she would be called empress.


I hope you enjoyed those prompts! Which one was your favorite? Did one spark an idea for you?

Book Review: The Bruised Dream by Alabama Rose

“It could be the social services!” she reminded him.

As much as she hated children being taken from their homes, she looked forward to the idea of having young children to care for.

“You say that literally every time the phone rings,” Kyle said.

He made a good point, but she couldn’t lose heart. She knew the day would come, but couldn’t it hurry up a little?

Synopsis

(Taken from Amazon)

With love comes great sacrifice, but how will Sofia know where to draw the line?

Thirteen-year-old Sofia Anderson can’t wait for her parents to open their home to children who find themselves in foster care. But when weeks go by without a call from the agency, she wonders if her family will even get the chance.

Finally, the call comes, along with the opportunity for Sofia’s family to foster two small boys. However, neither she nor her family know how much that decision will cost them.

When Sofia finds herself alone and struggling to trust God, she wonders how she’ll ever get out of the mess that’s been created. How can she forgive the same people who heartlessly try to tear her life apart?

Opinions

I was very eager to read this book, and it did not let me down.

The Bruised Dream is a heartfelt portrayal of foster families and the challenges they face. My family has never fostered, but Alabama certainly described the process in such a way that I could see clearly what it was like. While a rather quick read, the pacing was perfect and made the story stretch in a manageable way. And the plot twist! (You’ll have to read it to find out what I’m talking about. I’m not spoiling anything.)

I think my favourite part about this story was the characters. The main character, Sofia, goes through an incredible arc while she learns about the harsh realities of the world around her. I loved the strong familial bond in the Anderson family and how they all lean on their Savior to support them.

All in all, an excellent debut from Alabama Rose. Definitely worth what I paid for. I can’t wait to see what Alabama will write next!

Stats

Pages: 65
Genre: contemporary
Year of publication: 2019
My rating: 8/10

If you liked this book, you also might like Ruby Holler by Sharon Creech.

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