The newest guest editor for the Haiku Foundation’s Haiku Dialogue column is Carole MacRury, who lives in Point Roberts, Washington. She has chosen as her theme Sanctuary of the Senses. With her first prompt, Carole, wrote the following:
“As haiku poets, we are familiar with being out in nature, living in the present moment awake to all sensory input, sight, sound, scent, touch, and taste. Sensory experiences can regulate the nervous system and support physical and mental health. Sensory practices and rituals can strengthen mind-body connections and regulate hormones to ease anxiety. I, myself, found ways to utilize the senses to remove debilitating anxiety attacks in my youth. Today, children identified as having sensory sensitivities receive treatment early on to help them process what can be overwhelming or underwhelming sensory responses. My own grandchild successfully underwent sensory processing treatment as a toddler.
A sanctuary is a place of refuge that offers safety and respite from the stresses of our lives, be it within our own homes, a bird sanctuary, a holy place, or at the kitchen table of a dear friend. A sanctuary is personal to each of us. We bring to these sanctuaries our senses whether it is our favorite color, a hot bath, a massage, favorite music, a cup of warm tea, or a hug from a loved one. Our ways and means are endless and unique. Our two prompts will invite you to discover the ways you create your own sanctuary of the senses to cope with the daily stresses of life and to enhance your own well-being.”
Her first prompt was touch and/or taste, and her long list was extensive and can be found here https://thehaikufoundation.org/haiku-dialogue-sanctuary-of-the-senses-touch-and-or-taste-long-list/ There were haiku written by poets from over twenty nations on five continents.
Carole’s short list, which included commentary on twelve haiku, was prefaced with the following:
“My gratitude to those who responded to our first “Sanctuary of the Senses” prompt. The long list was extensive, and I hope you enjoyed reading how others handled the prompt.
It wasn’t easy choosing this short list as many on the long list were beautifully written and invited commentary as well. I will say this was not just a prompt on taste or touch, but a prompt focused on how these senses offer a place of sanctuary. Each of the following poems offered me a feeling of sanctuary through the poets’ words.
These poems also reflect certain attributes in haiku that I am particularly drawn to. There are many Japanese aesthetics that I enjoy, but at the top of the list is the sense of ma, the unspoken, the silence, the breathing space that allows the reader to experience the poem on more than one level. There is also a feeling of authenticity that breaks through many of these poems giving me a sense of universality and connection to human experience. This is why haiku bridges cultures so successfully.
Each of these poems evoked an emotional response first, followed by an appreciation of language, tone, form and imagery. While some may appear deceptively simple or brief, they offer so much more between the lines. Thank you poets for the opportunity to share my thoughts on your poems.”
This pedometer geek poet feels both fortunate and surprised to have had one of my haiku selected for the short list. The haiku as well as Carole’s commentary is as follows:
plush bathrobe
the cat jumps up
into my lapNancy Brady
“This cat haiku stood out from the rest because of the use of an adjective. Imagine that when we are often cautioned against the use of adjectives. Not just any bathrobe, but a ‘plush bathrobe’. I felt strongly that the sense of sanctuary was reciprocal between the cat and the poet making this one special to me. A moment of peace shared by both cat and poet. I could imagine the cat kneading the plushness of the robe, the poet stroking and bringing forth purrs of pleasure from the cat. I appreciate poems that allow me to read between the lines.”
Thanks, Carole, for selecting my haiku for commentary for the prompt. To read all the haiku as well as her commentary on the other poets, check out https://thehaikufoundation.org/haiku-dialogue-sanctuary-of-the-senses-touch-and-or-taste-commentary/
In other news, this pedometer geek is still working toward completing my Healthcode.org’s Million Mile Month goal. With a little less than a week to go, I have 22 miles to go. The global community has completed 212,804 miles of the million mile goal. There’s still time to join although the goal is of a million miles looks bleak; however, Healthcode.org also has another month of Million Mile Month in May.
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