Sometimes I go crazy and get super sad for no real reason. When I feel like that I always need to spend some time cooling down, and the easiest, best way to do that is to write poetry. This one, of course, also had the bonus of relieving some pressure because I had to finish it for my Creative Writing class, but you know, that’s probably okay.
If I get more than one of these suckers, I’ll snap up a poetry section.
Anyway, I’ve babbled on enough. I’ll do myself a favor and hush up and let you guys enjoy.
Soul – Star – Hope
A freeverse poem by Sam Oliver [Eris]
—
The stars burn
Bright
Like shining frozen
Shapes–
In the rain
And
Always too far
They
Said it was enough
But
Their words snake
Down
Dodge the drops–
With
You I won’t
Drown
Inside.
Listen to your heart
While it still beats free
Listen to the rain
Drumming on me
A shower’d molten glass
Will not the world compare
With every song in brass
The echoes draw me near
Closer
Like the fire
Embers
In my hair
Whipping
Through the wind
I can
Feel the stare
Of sun
On my head
I will
Not be slain
By ice
In the vein
Of my heart.
Listen to your soul
While it flows for me
Listen to the pain
When it tears you free
Feel every voice
Aching to be heard
Still your every need
A caged, little bird
To sin wherein it
Stands
Like a tall tower
To hate wherein it
Sways
Unfazed by love’s power
To fearsome bitter
Cold
Swept from my heart
To frost on fingers’
Nails
Like iron in the dark.
Listen to your mind
While it sings so sweet
Listen to your hope
Arrested in its sleep
Cry for every love
Taken back unkempt
But live for who you are
And not for who you’ve dreamt
You should be.
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Comments, questions, critiques? C’mon, I love hearing feedback! If you don’t put it out here, I can’t very well answer it now, can I?
Not that I want you to feel pressured. If you really don’t have anything to say and you just thought it was nice, feel free to snap that on too, I always like encouragement. On the other hand, if you think it’s total crap, TELL ME WHY PLEASE and tell it to me straight. I don’t like flame any more than the next gal/guy, but I’m a firm believer in honesty and I don’t aim to please everyone. I’d rather know the flaws so I can correct them than stay ignorant of them, and I need perspectives of all types in order to improve! I thrive on criticism and encouragement!
Anyway, I hope you enjoyed it at least, since it was such a joy to write.
-Eris