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A decades of life reduced to a few lines.


THE QUIET DARK

As a fledgling adult, I preferred the cacophony:

I thrilled to feel the energy
of the loud proud mishmash of noise
roiling in the public square.

But soon the commotion infested my head
and I wasn’t able to hear
my thoughts and feelings clearly—
a problem indeed

when choices must be made.
I was struggling to decide
which way was the best way for me.

I was told:
listen to your intuition.
But when I tried
I soon discovered
just how obtuse I’d become
from being in the blare so long.

In search of what I’d lost
I then delved down into the quiet dark.

Deep within
I could feel what I truly felt
and see the trouble in my thoughts.

Then of course, I wanted to find
what was behind
those thoughts and feelings.
And so I continued to explore.

No, I didn’t always like what I found inside
but good or bad, the discoveries amazed me.

Antarctica has already been mapped.
So I’m probing this other strange continent.

However
I’m still obliged to participate
in the cacophony outside.
And since I must, I might as well
open myself fully to the experience:
I’ll grin as I squint into the blare’s bold wind
and let my monkey dance in the mad parade.

I can still enjoy the superficial noise—
I just need to remind myself:
the show is not the substance.

I can play as a child
without becoming infantile
as long as I stay connected
to the wise one I’ve found
below the surface—
in the recesses of the quiet dark.


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© 2026, Michael R. Patton

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“Life is woof.”  
	– anonymous dog


THE HIGH-PITCHED VOICE

As I travel this convoluted path
I’m accompanied by a strong dog
that growls when it senses danger. 

But if a voice inside then says “go forward”
I’ll force myself to ignore the dog
and accept unreasonable risk

while enduring people
who see my way as haphazard.  

Yes, I worry 
when the dog begins to whimper in fear 
but
a dream once promised me
if I went where I needed to go
no matter where that might be
I’d eventually arrive at a garden.

When I awoke I felt a deep desire 
to find that paradise.
But how I could know where I needed to go?
I would not go until I knew.

A voice I did not recognize
then said: 
“stand and walk and do as instructed.”  

That sudden turn spun my head.
Hooked by mystery and myth--
I decided to trust.  
I stood up and began to walk.

Obviously 
I haven’t yet found the garden
but now I can see
this twisted path
spirals up a mountain.

So today I still feel 
a grand sense of purpose.

Nonetheless 
sometimes when I’m led into trouble
I will join with the dog 
and bark back at 
that maddening high-pitched voice.

Common Courage: poetry book
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© 2023, Michael R. Patton
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I learned the way I often learn: the hard way.


ONLY A FOOL ARGUES WITH STONE

Long ago a clever storyteller saw 
the features of a human face 
on the gray stone of the bluff
overlooking the bend in the river

then invented the tale  
of the wise woman spirit 
who sees all who pass as her children
and warns them with an echo:
steer away from the rocky shore.

A legend we love because
both young and old 
want to feel protected by Mother.

Many of those who canoe 
down the river today
will slow their paddles at the bluff 
and ask that stone sage for guidance.

And the ones who truly listen  
may discern an answer
buried within
the distorted amplification
booming back across the water. 

I’ve known people who refused to accept
what they needed to do
until they heard the woman of stone say:
you know the truth.

But you need not travel to our river
when burdened with a question.
I say:
wise stone spirits can be found
all over this planet

and if we approach with reverence
they will tell us
what we need to know--
even if they don’t echo
we can hear their thoughts
if we quiet our hearts.

I myself have sometimes received
an answer of truth
from a cliffside or a boulder
or even a rock in the sand.

And though I often want
to reject that wisdom
I don’t because I’ve learned:

only a fool
argues with stone.

Listening to Silence: poetry book 
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© 2023, Michael R. Patton
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To all the Noahs out there.


AN ARK BUILDER OVERCOMES REASONABLE DOUBT WITH REASON

As a child when I heard 
the story of Noah
I firmly decided:
you must obey higher guidance
even if people doubt you.

Ah, but my resolution slipped
when, years later
the voice of wisdom spoke to me
as I tried to quiet my heart
during a time of confusion. 

Like the command Noah heard
the message I received 
seemed to go against common sense.

Nonetheless, I might have believed--
if the voice had boomed down from the clouds.
But no
the answer rose softly
from a place deep within me

and so
governed by doubt
I went against the guidance

and soon realized
I should’ve heeded that advice.

And oh--
the advice didn’t stop--
because in curiosity, I strained to hear 
the next message and the next
and the next.

Though in short time, I learned 
I should obey what I heard
I still worried about 
rejecting my reasonable doubt--
after all
I didn’t want to lose my reason--
reason is good!  

Fortunately, I eventually
I developed a strategy:

when I begin to fret about
some major building instruction
I counter my doubt
with this reasonable argument:

maybe I am 
making a grand mistake

but if I act with courage and love 
that mistake will be
wonderfully grand. 

Common Courage: poetry book
dream steps blog
myth steps blog
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© 2023, Michael R. Patton

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