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{ "annotator": 9300, "digressive": null, "edits": [ { "correct_sentence": "These are my parents.", "correction": "These are my parents", "error": "This is my parent", "error_description": "① Pronoun Error: The pronoun 〈This〉 is singular, while 『parents』 is plural, thus it needs to be changed to the pronoun 『These』 to match the plural noun; ② Subject-verb Agreement Error: Since the subject 『These』 refers to a plural noun, the be verb should use the plural form, thus changing 〈is〉 to 『are』 to maintain subject-verb agreement; ③ Noun Number Error: 〈parent〉 is the singular form, but according to the following sentence 〈They works at school〉, the meaning refers to the plural parents, thus 〈parent〉 needs to be changed to 『parents』.", "error_sentence": "This is my parent.", "error_severity": 4, "error_type": "Subject-Verb Agreement Error", "index": 0 }, { "correct_sentence": "They work at school.", "correction": "work", "error": "works", "error_description": "Subject-verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈They〉 is a plural personal pronoun, referring to 〈parents〉 in the previous sentence; here 〈works〉 is the third-person singular form of the predicate verb, which is inconsistent with the subject 〈they〉, therefore 〈works〉 is changed to the plural form 『work』 in the simple present tense to maintain subject-verb agreement.", "error_sentence": "They works at school.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Subject-Verb Agreement Error", "index": 1 }, { "correct_sentence": "She is so cute.", "correction": "cute", "error": "cult", "error_description": "Spelling Error: The word 〈cult〉 as an adjective means \"fanatically revered,\" which does not match the semantics. According to the context, using the adjective 〈cult〉 to describe 〈my little sister〉 is inappropriate; it is presumed to be a spelling error, therefore 〈cult〉 is modified to 『cute』 to express the characteristic of 〈my little sister〉 being lovely.", "error_sentence": "She is so cult.", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Spelling Error", "index": 2 } ], "index": 1, "question_id": 244781, "question_prompt": "Assume you are Emily. Below is your family photo. Please introduce your family members based on the picture. Requirement: Write at least 6 sentences.", "source": "Hi! I'm Emily. This is my family. This is my parent. They works at school. And this is my little sister. She is so cult. I love my family.", "summary": null, "target": "Hi! I'm Emily. This is my family. These are my parents. They work at school. And this is my little sister. She is so cute. I love my family." }
{ "annotator": 10479, "digressive": null, "edits": [ { "correct_sentence": "Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is very cheap now.", "correction": "Cool", "error": "cool", "error_description": "Case Error: The prompt clearly states the store name 『Mr. Cool's Clothes Store』. As a proper noun, the first letter of 『cool』 should be capitalized to match the store name in the prompt and follow the rules for proper nouns. Therefore, the correct form should be 『Mr. Cool's』. This modification adheres to the writing conventions for proper nouns.", "error_sentence": "Mr. cool's Clothes Store is very cheap now.", "error_severity": 1, "error_type": "Case Error", "index": 0 }, { "correct_sentence": "Sweaters of all colors only sell for 30 yuan.", "correction": "sell for", "error": "need", "error_description": "Verb Choice Error: The verb 〈need〉 indicates demand rather than the price of goods, which does not fit the sentence context. 〈sell for〉 should be used to indicate the selling price of the goods. Therefore, changing 〈need〉 to 『sell for』 more accurately describes the product price and fits the semantics.", "error_sentence": "Sweaters of all colors only need 30 yuan.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Verb Choice Error", "index": 1 }, { "correct_sentence": "Shorts sell for 20 yuan.", "correction": "Shorts sell for", "error": "", "error_description": "Sentence Structure Error: The original phrase 〈20 yuan in shorts〉 lacks a subject and a predicate verb, making the sentence structure incomplete and unable to clearly express the meaning. To make it a complete sentence conforming to English grammatical norms, a subject and predicate verb need to be added. By adding 『Shorts sell for』, a complete subject-verb structure can be formed, resulting in the sentence 『Shorts sell for 20 yuan』. This modification not only corrects the sentence grammar but also clearly conveys the meaning 'shorts sell for 20 yuan', meeting the basic structural requirements of an English declarative sentence.", "error_sentence": "Sweaters of all colors only need 30 yuan. 20 yuan in shorts.", "error_severity": 4, "error_type": "Sentence Structure Error", "index": 2 }, { "correct_sentence": "Shorts sell for 20 yuan.", "correction": ".", "error": "in shorts. 25 yuan in", "error_description": "Sentence Redundancy Error: Other modifications here have already changed the sentence to the correct 'Shorts sell for 20 yuan.' and 'T-shirts sell for 25 yuan.', fully expressing the meaning 'shorts sell for 20 yuan, shirts 25 yuan', so directly replacing 〈in shorts. 25 yuan in〉 with 『.』 here ensures sentence fluency.", "error_sentence": "20 yuan in shorts. 25 yuan in T-shirt.", "error_severity": 4, "error_type": "Sentence Redundancy Error", "index": 3 }, { "correct_sentence": "T-shirts sell for 25 yuan.", "correction": "shirts sell for 25 yuan", "error": "shirt", "error_description": "① Sentence Structure Error: The original phrase lacks a subject and predicate verb, resulting in an incomplete sentence. To express the meaning 'a certain product sells for a certain price', the subject-verb structure 『sell for』 needs to be added to form a grammatically correct complete sentence; ② Noun Number Error: The product name 〈T-shirt〉 here represents a category of goods, not a single item, so the plural form 『T-shirts』 is needed to accurately express the concept of category.", "error_sentence": "25 yuan in T-shirt.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Sentence Structure Error", "index": 4 }, { "correct_sentence": "Big bags sell for 35 yuan and small bags sell for 20 yuan.", "correction": "bags sell for", "error": "bag is", "error_description": "① Noun Number Error: 〈Big bag〉 is a singular countable noun form, which usually does not appear alone. The intended meaning here is a general reference to 'big bags', so using the plural form is more appropriate. Therefore, change 〈bag〉 to 『bags』 to represent this category of goods; ② Verb Choice Error: The linking verb 〈is〉 cannot indicate the product pricing and does not fit the sentence context. 『sell for』 should be used to indicate the selling price of the goods. Therefore, changing 〈is〉 to 『sell for』 more accurately describes the product price and fits the semantics.", "error_sentence": "Big bag is 35 yuan and small bag is 20 yuan.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Verb Choice Error", "index": 5 }, { "correct_sentence": "Big bags sell for 35 yuan and small bags sell for 20 yuan.", "correction": "bags sell for", "error": "bag is", "error_description": "① Noun Number Error: When referring to a category of goods rather than a single item, the plural form should be used. Therefore, for the product name 〈bag〉, we need to use the plural form 『bags』 to represent this category of goods; ② Verb Choice Error: The linking verb 〈is〉 cannot indicate the product pricing and does not fit the sentence context. 『sell for』 should be used to indicate the selling price; the subject 'Big bags' is plural, and the predicate verb should also be changed to the plural form 『sell for』 according to the subject change. Therefore, changing 〈is〉 to 『sell for』 more accurately describes the product price and fits the semantics.", "error_sentence": "Big bag is 35 yuan and small bag is 20 yuan.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Verb Choice Error", "index": 6 }, { "correct_sentence": "And there are so many shoes and dresses there.", "correction": "", "error": "in", "error_description": "① Preposition Error: The adverb of place 〈there〉 in the existential 'there be' sentence pattern does not require a preceding preposition; the preposition 〈in〉 in the sentence is redundant. Deleting it does not affect the sentence meaning, thus removing 〈in〉 enhances the clarity and fluency of the expression.", "error_sentence": "And there are so many shoes and dresses in there.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Preposition Error", "index": 7 } ], "index": 8, "question_id": 246928, "question_prompt": "Using the information provided in Chinese and referring to the picture, write a short essay.\nMr. Cool's Clothes Store is having a big sale with great discounts. Sweaters in various colors are only 30 yuan, shorts are only 20 yuan, and shirts are only 25 yuan. Large bags sell for 35 yuan, and small bags for 20 yuan. There are also many beautiful shoes and skirts available. Welcome to shop.", "source": "Mr. cool's Clothes Store is very cheap now. Sweaters of all colors only need 30 yuan. 20 yuan in shorts. 25 yuan in T-shirt. Big bag is 35 yuan and small bag is 20 yuan. And there are so many shoes and dresses in there. Welcome to Mr. Cool's Clothes Store.", "summary": null, "target": "Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is very cheap now. Sweaters of all colors only sell for 30 yuan. Shorts sell for 20 yuan. T-shirts sell for 25 yuan. Big bags sell for 35 yuan and small bags sell for 20 yuan. And there are so many shoes and dresses there. Welcome to Mr. Cool's Clothes Store." }
{ "annotator": 10478, "digressive": null, "edits": [ { "correct_sentence": "On Saturday, I will do my homework at 9:30 and watch TV at 11:00.", "correction": "Saturday", "error": "saturday", "error_description": "Case Error: The first letter of the proper noun 〈saturday〉 needs to be capitalized, so there is a case error here; 〈saturday〉 should be changed to 『Saturday』 to conform to the spelling rules for English proper nouns.", "error_sentence": "On saturday, I do my homework 9:30, watch TV 11:00.", "error_severity": 1, "error_type": "Case Error", "index": 0 }, { "correct_sentence": "On Saturday, I will do my homework at 9:30 and watch TV at 11:00.", "correction": "will", "error": "", "error_description": "Verb Tense Error: The sentence describes future activities, so the simple future tense of the verb should be used; there is a verb tense error here, 〈do〉 should be changed to 『will do』 to conform to the standard expression of the future tense in English.", "error_sentence": "On saturday, I do my homework 9:30, watch TV 11:00.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Verb Tense Error", "index": 1 }, { "correct_sentence": "On Saturday, I will do my homework at 9:30 and watch TV at 11:00.", "correction": "at 9:30 and", "error": "9:30,", "error_description": "① Preposition Error: Specific time points need to be preceded by the preposition 『at』, so the time expression 〈9:30〉 should be changed to 『at 9:30』 to comply with English expression norms; ② Conjunction Error: 〈do homework〉 and 〈watch TV〉 are two actions performed by the subject 〈I〉, and they are in a parallel relationship, requiring the conjunction 『and』 without a comma; therefore, 〈, 〉 should be changed to 『and』 to comply with English grammar rules.", "error_sentence": "On saturday, I do my homework 9:30, watch TV 11:00.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Conjunction Error", "index": 2 }, { "correct_sentence": "On Saturday, I will do my homework at 9:30 and watch TV at 11:00.", "correction": "at", "error": "", "error_description": "Preposition Error: In English, specific time points need to be preceded by 'at', so there is a preposition error here; the preposition 『at』 needs to be added before 〈11:00〉 to indicate the specific time point, complying with English expression norms.", "error_sentence": "On saturday, I do my homework 9:30, watch TV 11:00.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Preposition Error", "index": 3 }, { "correct_sentence": "My friends and I are going to the park in the afternoon.", "correction": "My friends and I", "error": "I and my frends", "error_description": "① Word Order Error: In English, the standard order for coordinating personal pronouns places the third person before the first person out of politeness, so 〈I and my frends〉 should be changed to 『My friends and I』 to comply with English expression norms; ② Spelling Error: The plural form of the countable noun 'friend' is 'friends', so 〈frends〉 should be changed to 『friends』 to comply with English word spelling rules.", "error_sentence": "I and my frends are going to the park in the afternoon.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Word Order Error", "index": 4 }, { "correct_sentence": "On Sunday, I will clean my room at 10:30 and play basketball at 14:00.", "correction": "Sunday", "error": "sunday", "error_description": "Case Error: The first letter of the proper noun 〈sunday〉 must be capitalized, so there is a case error here; 〈sunday〉 should be changed to 『Sunday』 to comply with English word spelling rules.", "error_sentence": "On sunday, I clean my room 10:30 and play my basketball 14:00.", "error_severity": 1, "error_type": "Case Error", "index": 5 }, { "correct_sentence": "On Sunday, I will clean my room at 10:30 and play basketball at 14:00.", "correction": "will", "error": "", "error_description": "Verb Tense Error: The sentence describes future activities, so there is a verb tense error here; the English simple future tense needs to be used, changing 〈clean〉 to 『will clean』 to conform to the English verb's simple future tense.", "error_sentence": "On sunday, I clean my room 10:30 and play my basketball 14:00.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Verb Tense Error", "index": 6 }, { "correct_sentence": "On Sunday, I will clean my room at 10:30 and play basketball at 14:00.", "correction": "at", "error": "", "error_description": "Preposition Error: In English, specific time points need to be preceded by 'at', so there is a preposition error here; 『at』 should be added within 〈clean my room 10:30〉, changing it to 『clean my room at 10:30』 to comply with English grammar rules.", "error_sentence": "On sunday, I clean my room 10:30 and play my basketball 14:00.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Preposition Error", "index": 7 }, { "correct_sentence": "On Sunday, I will clean my room at 10:30 and play basketball at 14:00.", "correction": "basketball at", "error": "my basketball", "error_description": "① Word Redundancy Error: The fixed English phrase for 'play basketball' is 'play basketball'; the possessive adjective 〈my〉 here is redundant and should be deleted, changing it to 『play basketball』 to comply with the English fixed phrase; ② Preposition Error: In English, specific time points need to be preceded by 'at', so 『at』 needs to be added before 〈14:00〉 to better comply with English expression norms.", "error_sentence": "On sunday, I clean my room 10:30 and play my basketball 14:00.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Word Redundancy Error", "index": 8 }, { "correct_sentence": "I will have a bath at 18:00.", "correction": "will", "error": "", "error_description": "Verb Tense Error: The sentence describes future activities, so there is a verb tense error here; the simple future tense needs to be used, adding the auxiliary verb 『will』 before 〈have〉 to change it to 『will have』 to conform to the English verb's simple future tense.", "error_sentence": "I have a bath 18:00.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Verb Tense Error", "index": 9 }, { "correct_sentence": "I will have a bath at 18:00.", "correction": "at", "error": "", "error_description": "Preposition Error: In English, specific time points need to be preceded by 'at', so 『at』 needs to be added before 〈18:00〉 to comply with English expression norms.", "error_sentence": "I have a bath 18:00.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Preposition Error", "index": 10 }, { "correct_sentence": "This is a two-day life for me.", "correction": "a two-day", "error": "two days", "error_description": "① Determiner Error: According to the meaning, the following noun 'life' is singular, so the indefinite article 『a』 needs to be added after 〈is〉 for determination to comply with English grammar rules; ② Adjective Error: A hyphen connects a number and a noun to form a compound adjective, and the noun connected by the hyphen needs to be in singular form, so 〈two days〉 should be changed to 『two-day』 to comply with English compound adjective spelling rules.", "error_sentence": "This is two days life for me.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Adjective Error", "index": 11 } ], "index": 12, "question_id": 246671, "question_prompt": "Written Expression.\nUsing the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay.\nBased on the information provided by Tom below, and referring to the picture, describe Tom's activities for next weekend using the simple future tense:\nWriting hints:\nOn Saturday: do his homework 9:30; watch TV 11:00; go to the park in the afternoon\nOn Sunday: clean his room 10:00; play basketball 14:00; have a bath 18:00", "source": "On saturday, I do my homework 9:30, watch TV 11:00. I and my frends are going to the park in the afternoon. On sunday, I clean my room 10:30 and play my basketball 14:00. I have a bath 18:00. This is two days life for me.", "summary": null, "target": "On Saturday, I will do my homework at 9:30 and watch TV at 11:00. My friends and I are going to the park in the afternoon. On Sunday, I will clean my room at 10:30 and play basketball at 14:00. I will have a bath at 18:00. This is a two-day life for me." }
{ "annotator": 10478, "digressive": null, "edits": [ { "correct_sentence": "Last Sunday, my friends and I went to the park.", "correction": "", "error": "I with", "error_description": "① Word Order Error: English convention for coordinate subjects places the third person before the first person out of respect; here, 〈I with〉 should be removed from 〈I with my friends〉, and 『and I』 should be added after 〈my friends〉 to conform to standard English expression.", "error_sentence": "Last Sunday, I with my friends w3nt to park .", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Word Order Error", "index": 0 }, { "correct_sentence": "Last Sunday, my friends and I went to the park.", "correction": "and I went to the", "error": "w3nt to", "error_description": "① Conjunction Error: 『my friends and I』 is the standard English expression, so the preposition 〈with〉 needs to be changed to the conjunction 『and』 to better conform to standard English expression; ② Spelling Error: According to the context, this describes a past action, so 〈w3nt〉 should be spelled as 『went』, which is the correct past tense form of the verb; ③ Determiner Error: In English, \"go to the park\" is a fixed phrase, so the definite article 〈the〉 needs to be added here to form the complete structure 『went to the park』, conforming to the fixed English phrase.", "error_sentence": "Last Sunday, I with my friends w3nt to park .", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Conjunction Error", "index": 1 }, { "correct_sentence": "In the afternoon, it was rainy, but I didn't have an umbrella, so I got wet.", "correction": "In the afternoon, it", "error": "Afternoon", "error_description": "① Preposition Error: The word afternoon cannot stand alone at the beginning of a sentence as a time adverbial; the fixed phrase in English for \"in the afternoon\" is the prepositional phrase 『in the afternoon』 used as a time adverbial. The preposition 『in』 is missing here, so 〈Afternoon〉 needs to be changed to 『In the afternoon』 to conform to English grammar rules and fixed phrases; ② Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, when afternoon serves as a time adverbial, the fixed phrase is 『in the afternoon』, requiring the determiner 『the』 before 〈Afternoon〉 to ensure the standard expression of the time adverbial; ③ Sentence Structure Error: The meaning here is \"it rained in the afternoon.\" The sentence lacks a subject. In English, 『it』 is commonly used as the subject when describing weather conditions, so 『, it 』 should be added before 〈was〉 to form a complete subject-verb-object structure, conforming to English syntactic rules.", "error_sentence": "Afternoon was rainy, I did't have umbrella, I geted wet.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Sentence Structure Error", "index": 2 }, { "correct_sentence": "In the afternoon, it was rainy, but I didn't have an umbrella, so I got wet.", "correction": "but I didn't have an", "error": "I did't have", "error_description": "① Conjunction Error: According to the context, there should be a semantic contrast, \"It was rainy, but I didn't have an umbrella,\" so the conjunction 『but 』 should be added before 〈I〉 to indicate the contrast and make the sentences more coherent; ② Contraction Error: The correct contraction for the past tense auxiliary verb 〈did't〉 should be 『didn't』 to conform to English spelling rules; the letter \"n\" was omitted; ③ Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, the singular countable noun 〈umbrella〉 requires the indefinite article 『an』 before it for modification, conforming to English grammar rules.", "error_sentence": "Afternoon was rainy, I did't have umbrella, I geted wet.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Conjunction Error", "index": 3 }, { "correct_sentence": "In the afternoon, it was rainy, but I didn't have an umbrella, so I got wet.", "correction": "so I got", "error": "I geted", "error_description": "① Conjunction Error: Based on the context, the meaning is \"because I didn't have an umbrella, so I got wet,\" therefore the conjunction 『so 』 should be added before 〈I〉 to indicate the cause-and-effect relationship between the two clauses, making the logic clearer; ② Spelling Error: The simple past tense of the verb get is got, so 〈geted〉 should be changed to 『got』 to conform to English spelling rules.", "error_sentence": "Afternoon was rainy, I did't have umbrella, I geted wet.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Conjunction Error", "index": 4 }, { "correct_sentence": "I was cold and had a headache.", "correction": "cold and had a", "error": "cool and", "error_description": "① Adjective Error: According to the sentence's meaning, cool means \"pleasantly low temperature,\" often used in neutral or positive contexts, while cold means \"uncomfortably low temperature.\" It's clear the author felt unwell, so 〈cool〉 does not fit the intended meaning of \"cold\" and should be changed to 『cold』 to match the context; ② Verb Choice Error: Following the subject \"I,\" there is a subject-complement structure and a subject-verb-object structure. A predicate verb is needed. The English verb phrase for headache is 『have a headache』. Since this is in the simple past tense, 『had a』 should be added before 〈headache〉 to fit the context and meaning; ③ Determiner Error: The fixed phrase for having a headache is 『have a headache』, so 『a 』 needs to be added before 〈headache〉 to conform to the fixed English phrase.", "error_sentence": "I was cool and headache.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Adjective Error", "index": 5 }, { "correct_sentence": "My friends took me to the hospital.", "correction": "took me to the", "error": "with me went to", "error_description": "① Verb Choice Error: According to the context, the meaning is \"my friends took me to the hospital.\" 〈with〉 is a preposition, so a predicate verb is missing. The prepositional phrase 〈with me〉 should be changed to the verb phrase 『took me』 to match the original meaning; ② Word Redundancy Error: The fixed English phrase for taking someone somewhere is \"take somebody to somewhere.\" Here, 〈went〉 is redundant and needs to be deleted to conform to the fixed phrase, resulting in the correct expression 『took me to』; ③ Determiner Error: The fixed English phrase for going to the hospital is \"go to the hospital,\" so the definite article 『the 』 needs to be added before 〈hospital〉 in the original sentence to conform to the fixed English phrase.", "error_sentence": "My friends with me went to hospital.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Word Redundancy Error", "index": 6 }, { "correct_sentence": "The doctor said I had a fever, and he gave me medicine.", "correction": "The doctor said I had a fever, and he gave me", "error": "Doctor said me is fever. And he give", "error_description": "① Determiner Error: The noun doctor, referring to a profession, requires a definite article for modification, and since it's at the beginning of the sentence, 〈Doctor〉 should be changed to 『The doctor』; ② Sentence Structure Error: In 〈said me〉, said introduces an object clause. The subject-verb-object structure of the following object clause should be complete, so it should be changed to 『said I had a fever』 to conform to English syntactic rules; ③ Determiner Error: The fixed English phrase for having a fever is \"have a fever,\" so the indefinite article 『a』 needs to be added before 〈fever〉 to conform to the fixed English phrase; ④ Verb Tense Error: This describes a past action, requiring the simple past tense of the verb, so 〈give〉 should be changed to the simple past form 『gave』 to conform to English verb tense rules; ⑤ Punctuation Error: According to the sentence meaning, the actions in 〈Doctor said me is fever. And he give medicine.〉 are sequential, so the period 〈.〉 should be changed to a comma 『,』 and the capitalization adjusted to 『, and』; ⑥ Pronoun Error: This involves a double object structure introduced by give. The fixed English pattern is \"give somebody something.\" Here, 〈medicine〉 corresponds to something, so 『me』 needs to be added before 〈medicine〉 to complete the double object structure.", "error_sentence": "Doctor said me is fever. And he give medicine.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Subject-Verb Agreement Error", "index": 7 } ], "index": 13, "question_id": 254637, "question_prompt": "Based on the given hints and referring to the picture, write a short essay.\nLast Sunday, I went for a picnic in the park with my friends. It started raining in the afternoon. I forgot my umbrella and got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to go home and rest well.\nWriting hints: picnic; rain; umbrella; get wet; hospital; fever; medicine.", "source": "Last Sunday, I with my friends w3nt to park . Afternoon was rainy, I did't have umbrella, I geted wet. I was cool and headache. My friends with me went to hospital. Doctor said me is fever. And he give medicine.", "summary": null, "target": "Last Sunday, my friends and I went to the park. In the afternoon, it was rainy, but I didn't have an umbrella, so I got wet. I was cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever, and he gave me medicine." }
{ "annotator": 10478, "digressive": null, "edits": [ { "correct_sentence": "This is Tom's plan for next weekend.", "correction": "plan for", "error": "", "error_description": "① Word Order Error: The fixed English noun phrase structure is 『plan for next weekend』, meaning 'plan about next weekend'. The original sentence has a word order error; 〈next weekend plan〉 should be changed to 『plan for next weekend』 to conform to the fixed English collocation; ② Preposition Error: When expressing 'plan for...', the noun 'plan' should be followed by the preposition 『for』 and then a noun to form a possessive relationship; therefore, it needs to be changed to 『plan for next weekend』 to conform to English morphological structure.", "error_sentence": "This is Tom's next weekend plan.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Word Order Error", "index": 0 }, { "correct_sentence": "This is Tom's plan for next weekend.", "correction": "", "error": "plan", "error_description": "Word Redundancy Error: The fixed English collocation 'plan for + noun' means 'plan for xxx'. After 'plan', the prepositional phrase introduced by 'for' acts as a post-modifier explaining 'plan'. After adjusting the word order in the previous sentence, 〈plan〉 in 〈next weekend plan〉 needs to be deleted to conform to the fixed English collocation.", "error_sentence": "This is Tom's next weekend plan.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Word Redundancy Error", "index": 1 }, { "correct_sentence": "On Saturday, Tom is going to do his homework at nine thirty and watch TV at eleven o'clock.", "correction": "Saturday", "error": "Saterday", "error_description": "Spelling Error: The English proper noun for 'Saturday', 〈Saterday〉, has a clear spelling error. It should be changed to 『Saturday』 to comply with English spelling rules.", "error_sentence": "On Saterday, Tom is going to do his homework at nine thirty, going to watch TV at eleven o'clock .", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Spelling Error", "index": 2 }, { "correct_sentence": "On Saturday, Tom is going to do his homework at nine thirty and watch TV at eleven o'clock.", "correction": "and", "error": ", going to", "error_description": "① Conjunction Error: The two verb phrases 〈do his homework〉 and 〈watch TV〉 share the auxiliary 'going to', so 'going to' should only appear once. They need to be connected by the conjunction 『and』; 〈going to〉 should be changed to 『and』 to comply with English syntax rules; ② Punctuation Error: When 'and' connects two parallel verb phrases in a sentence, a comma is not needed; therefore, the comma 〈,〉 should be deleted here to comply with English syntax rules.", "error_sentence": "On Saterday, Tom is going to do his homework at nine thirty, going to watch TV at eleven o'clock .", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Conjunction Error", "index": 3 }, { "correct_sentence": "On Sunday, Tom is going to clean his room at ten o'clock, play basketball at 14:00, and have a bath at six pm.", "correction": "clean", "error": "cleaning", "error_description": "Nonfinite Verb Form Error: In English, the structure 〈be going to〉 should be followed by the base form of the verb. Therefore, there is a nonfinite verb form error here; the gerund 〈cleaning〉 needs to be changed to the base form 『clean』 to comply with English grammar rules.", "error_sentence": "On Sunday , Tom is going to cleaning his room at ten o'clock.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Nonfinite Verb Form Error", "index": 4 }, { "correct_sentence": "On Sunday, Tom is going to clean his room at ten o'clock, play basketball at 14:00, and have a bath at six pm.", "correction": ",", "error": ". going to", "error_description": "① Punctuation Error: Multiple parallel verb phrases within the same sentence should be separated by commas. Therefore, there is a punctuation error here; the period 〈.〉 should be changed to a comma 『,』 to connect the different verb phrases, forming a coherent compound sentence structure which better conforms to English syntax rules; ② Word Redundancy Error: The several parallel verb phrases here can share the auxiliary 'going to', making repetition unnecessary. Therefore, the redundant 〈going to〉 (before 'play basketball') needs to be deleted to conform to standard English expression.", "error_sentence": "On Sunday , Tom is going to cleaning his room at ten o'clock. going to play basketball at 14:00 and going to have a bath at six o'clock p.m..", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Word Redundancy Error", "index": 5 }, { "correct_sentence": "On Sunday, Tom is going to clean his room at ten o'clock, play basketball at 14:00, and have a bath at six pm.", "correction": ", and", "error": "and going to", "error_description": "① Word Redundancy Error: 〈play basketball〉 and 〈have a bath〉 are the last two of three parallel verb phrases appearing in the same sentence. The three parallel verb phrases can share the auxiliary 'going to', so the 〈going to〉 before 〈have a bath〉 is redundant and should be deleted; ② Punctuation Error: The clause introduced by 〈have a bath〉, being the last of three parallel clauses, should be separated from the preceding clause by a comma when placed at the end of the sentence; therefore, a comma 『, 』 should be added before 〈and〉 to comply with English syntax rules.", "error_sentence": "going to play basketball at 14:00 and going to have a bath at six o'clock p.m..", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Word Redundancy Error", "index": 6 }, { "correct_sentence": "On Sunday, Tom is going to clean his room at ten o'clock, play basketball at 14:00, and have a bath at six pm.", "correction": "pm.", "error": "o'clock p.m..", "error_description": "① Word Redundancy Error: In English expression, 〈o'clock〉 and 〈p.m.〉 cannot be used simultaneously. According to the prompt, the time here is 'six o'clock in the afternoon' (18:00), so 〈o'clock〉 should be deleted, keeping 『six p.m.』 to match the original meaning; ② Punctuation Error: Double periods cannot be used at the end of a sentence; one period should be deleted, ending with 『pm.』 to comply with English syntax rules.", "error_sentence": "going to play basketball at 14:00 and going to have a bath at six o'clock p.m..", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Word Redundancy Error", "index": 7 } ], "index": 14, "question_id": 246671, "question_prompt": "Written Expression.\nUsing the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay.\nBased on the information provided by Tom below, and referring to the picture, describe Tom's activities for next weekend using the simple future tense:\nWriting hints:\nOn Saturday: do his homework 9:30; watch TV 11:00; go to the park in the afternoon\nOn Sunday: clean his room 10:00; play basketball 14:00; have a bath 18:00", "source": "This is Tom's next weekend plan. On Saterday, Tom is going to do his homework at nine thirty, going to watch TV at eleven o'clock . He is going to the park in the afternoon. On Sunday , Tom is going to cleaning his room at ten o'clock. going to play basketball at 14:00 and going to have a bath at six o'clock p.m..", "summary": null, "target": "This is Tom's plan for next weekend. On Saturday, Tom is going to do his homework at nine thirty and watch TV at eleven o'clock. He is going to the park in the afternoon. On Sunday, Tom is going to clean his room at ten o'clock, play basketball at 14:00, and have a bath at six pm." }
{ "annotator": 9300, "digressive": null, "edits": [ { "correct_sentence": "At 3:00 pm in the market, customers are shopping.", "correction": "3:00 pm in", "error": "3:00pm n", "error_description": "① Space Error: According to English writing conventions, when 〈pm〉 indicates a time in the afternoon, it should be separated from the preceding time by a space, so a space should be added between 〈3:00〉 and 〈pm〉 to conform to standard time format; ② Spelling Error: Based on the following 〈the market〉, it is known that the intended expression here is the adverbial phrase of place 'in the market', therefore 〈n〉 is a spelling error of the preposition and should be completed as 『in』 to form the correct adverbial phrase of place.", "error_sentence": "At 3:00pm n the market costumers are shopping .", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Spelling Error", "index": 0 }, { "correct_sentence": "At 3:00 pm in the market, customers are shopping.", "correction": ", customers", "error": "costumers", "error_description": "① Punctuation Error: According to English expression habits, when an adverbial of time/place is placed at the beginning of a sentence, it is generally separated from the main clause by a comma 『,』 to make the sentence structure clearer. Therefore, since 『At 3:00 pm in the market』 is an adverbial of time and place at the beginning of the sentence, a punctuation mark is missing between it and the following main clause; a comma 『,』 should be added before the subject of the main clause 『customers』 to conform to English writing norms; ② Spelling Error: 〈costumers〉 means 'suppliers of theatrical costumes'; based on the following 〈are shopping〉, it is inferred that 〈costumers〉 is a spelling error for 『customers』, so 〈costumers〉 is corrected to 『customers』 to make the sentence meaning coherent and logical.", "error_sentence": "At 3:00pm n the market costumers are shopping .", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Punctuation Error", "index": 1 }, { "correct_sentence": "One little girl is buying some food for dinner.", "correction": "is", "error": "", "error_description": "Auxiliary Error: From the context, it is known that the tense for actions throughout the text is present continuous. According to the rules for expressing the present continuous tense of verbs, the complete structure should include a be verb (am/is/are) + present participle; the original sentence is missing the corresponding be verb for 〈buying〉. Since the subject 〈One little girl〉 is third-person singular, the third-person singular form of the be verb 『is』 needs to be added before the present participle 〈buying〉 to form the complete verb tense structure.", "error_sentence": "One little girl buying some food for dinner .", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Auxiliary Error", "index": 2 }, { "correct_sentence": "A young lady is looking at a dress.", "correction": "A", "error": "", "error_description": "Determiner Error: Based on the following 〈is looking〉, it is known that the subject of the sentence should be third-person singular. To meet this condition, the singular countable noun 〈young lady〉 is missing a determiner before it, and since it does not refer to a specific lady, the indefinite article 『A』 should be added before 〈young lady〉 to comply with English grammar rules.", "error_sentence": "One little girl buying some food for dinner . young lady looking at a dress.", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Determiner Error", "index": 3 }, { "correct_sentence": "A young lady is looking at a dress.", "correction": "is", "error": "", "error_description": "Auxiliary Error: From the context, it is known that the tense for actions throughout the text is present continuous. According to the rules for expressing the present continuous tense of verbs, the complete structure should include a be verb (am/is/are) + present participle; the original sentence is missing the corresponding be verb for 〈looking〉. Since the subject 『A young lady』 is third-person singular, the third-person singular form of the be verb 『is』 needs to be added before the present participle 〈looking〉 to form the complete present continuous verb structure.", "error_sentence": "young lady looking at a dress.", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Auxiliary Error", "index": 4 }, { "correct_sentence": "In the shoe shop, Linda's mother is trying on the shoes, and at the same time, Linda's father is staying on the sofa and waiting for Linda's mother to come back.", "correction": "the shoe shop,", "error": "shoes market", "error_description": "① Determiner Error: 『shoe shop』 is a singular countable noun, missing a determiner for modification here, so the definite article 『the』 is added to form the complete noun phrase 『the shoe shop』; ② Noun Number Error: According to English expression rules, when countable noun A modifies noun B as an attribute, the singular form of noun A should be used, thus the noun 〈shoes〉 in 〈shoes market〉 in the original sentence has a number error, and 〈shoes〉 should be changed to the singular 『shoe』 to modify 『shop』 as an attribute to conform to norms; ③ Noun Error: According to the prompt 'what Linda sees and hears at the mall', the intended meaning here should be 'shoe shop'; the phrase 〈shoes market〉 in the original sentence means 'shoe market/bazaar', which does not fit the sentence's meaning, indicating a noun choice error; 〈market〉 should be changed to 『shop』 to better fit the sentence's logic.", "error_sentence": "In shoes market Linda's mothrer trying the shoes, at the same time, Linda's father staying on the sofa and waiting for Linda's mother come back.", "error_severity": 4, "error_type": "Noun Error", "index": 5 }, { "correct_sentence": "In the shoe shop, Linda's mother is trying on the shoes, and at the same time, Linda's father is staying on the sofa and waiting for Linda's mother to come back.", "correction": "mother is trying on", "error": "mothrer trying", "error_description": "① Spelling Error: According to the prompt 'Linda's mother', it is known that the subject 〈mothrer〉 in the original sentence is a misspelling of 『mother』, so 〈mothrer〉 should be changed to 『mother』 to correctly express the meaning of 'mother'; ② Auxiliary Error: From the context, it is known that the tense for actions throughout the text is present continuous. According to the rules for expressing the present continuous tense of verbs, the complete structure should include a be verb (am/is/are) + present participle; the original sentence is missing the corresponding be verb for 〈trying〉. Since the subject 〈Linda's mother〉 is third-person singular, the third-person singular form of the be verb 『is』 needs to be added before the present participle 〈trying〉 to form the complete verb tense structure; ③ Preposition Error: According to 'try on the shoes' provided in the prompt, the phrasal verb 'try on' is a fixed expression meaning 'to try on (shoes)', therefore the original sentence is missing a preposition; the preposition 『on』 needs to be added before 〈the shoes〉 to meet the prompt's requirement.", "error_sentence": "In shoes market Linda's mothrer trying the shoes, at the same time, Linda's father staying on the sofa and waiting for Linda's mother come back.", "error_severity": 4, "error_type": "Auxiliary Error", "index": 6 }, { "correct_sentence": "In the shoe shop, Linda's mother is trying on the shoes, and at the same time, Linda's father is staying on the sofa and waiting for Linda's mother to come back.", "correction": "and", "error": "", "error_description": "Conjunction Error: 〈Linda's mother is trying on the shoes〉 and 〈Linda's father is staying on the sofa and waiting for Linda's mother to come back〉 each have independent predicate verbs and are two independent clauses. Since these two independent clauses are separated by a comma, a conjunction is missing here. Based on the meaning, the two sentences have a coordinate relationship, so the conjunction 『and』 should be added before 〈at〉 to comply with English grammar rules and clarify the logical relationship between the two sentences.", "error_sentence": "In shoes market Linda's mothrer trying the shoes, at the same time, Linda's father staying on the sofa and waiting for Linda's mother come back.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Conjunction Error", "index": 7 }, { "correct_sentence": "In the shoe shop, Linda's mother is trying on the shoes, and at the same time, Linda's father is staying on the sofa and waiting for Linda's mother to come back.", "correction": "is", "error": "", "error_description": "Auxiliary Error: From the context, it is known that the tense for actions throughout the text is present continuous. According to the rules for expressing the present continuous tense of verbs, the complete structure should include a be verb (am/is/are) + present participle; the original sentence is missing the corresponding be verb for 〈staying〉. Since the subject 『Linda's father』 is third-person singular, the third-person singular form of the be verb 『is』 needs to be added before the present participle 〈staying〉 to form the complete present continuous verb structure.", "error_sentence": "In shoes market Linda's mothrer trying the shoes, at the same time, Linda's father staying on the sofa and waiting for Linda's mother come back.", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Auxiliary Error", "index": 8 }, { "correct_sentence": "In the shoe shop, Linda's mother is trying on the shoes, and at the same time, Linda's father is staying on the sofa and waiting for Linda's mother to come back.", "correction": "to", "error": "", "error_description": "Nonfinite Verb Form Error: From the context, it is known that the original sentence intends to express the fixed phrase 'wait for someone to do something'; 〈Linda's mother〉 corresponds to 'someone' introduced by the preposition 〈for〉, and 〈come back〉 corresponds to 'do something', which should appear in the infinitive form. Therefore, there is a nonfinite verb form error here; 『to』 should be added before the original verb 〈come〉 to form the correct infinitive phrase.", "error_sentence": "In shoes market Linda's mothrer trying the shoes, at the same time, Linda's father staying on the sofa and waiting for Linda's mother come back.", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Nonfinite Verb Form Error", "index": 9 } ], "index": 15, "question_id": 243010, "question_prompt": "Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. It is 3 PM. Based on the information provided below about Linda, use the present continuous tense to describe what Linda sees and hears at the mall:\nWriting hints:\nA little girl: buy some food\nA young lady: look at a dress\nLinda's mother: try on the shoes\nLinda's father: stay on the sofa; wait for", "source": "At 3:00pm n the market costumers are shopping . One little girl buying some food for dinner . young lady looking at a dress. In shoes market Linda's mothrer trying the shoes, at the same time, Linda's father staying on the sofa and waiting for Linda's mother come back.", "summary": null, "target": "At 3:00 pm in the market, customers are shopping. One little girl is buying some food for dinner. A young lady is looking at a dress. In the shoe shop, Linda's mother is trying on the shoes, and at the same time, Linda's father is staying on the sofa and waiting for Linda's mother to come back." }
{ "annotator": 9300, "digressive": null, "edits": [ { "correct_sentence": "Gao Feng is a soccer fan.", "correction": "Feng", "error": "feng", "error_description": "Case Error: According to the Chinese prompt, '高峰' is a name. Following English writing conventions, English names should be separated by spaces and have capitalized initial letters. The original 〈feng〉, used as a name, lacks capitalization; it should be changed to 『Feng』 to comply with English proper noun writing standards.", "error_sentence": "Gao feng is a soccer fans .", "error_severity": 1, "error_type": "Case Error", "index": 0 }, { "correct_sentence": "Gao Feng is a soccer fan.", "correction": "fan", "error": "fans", "error_description": "Noun Number Error: The subject 『Gao Feng』 is third-person singular, so the predicate noun following the verb 『is』 should also be singular. Additionally, in the original phrase 〈a soccer fans〉, the indefinite article 〈a〉 modifies a singular countable noun. Therefore, 〈soccer fans〉 contains a noun number error; 〈fans〉 should be changed to 『fan』 to make the sentence grammatically correct.", "error_sentence": "Gao feng is a soccer fans .", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Noun Number Error", "index": 1 }, { "correct_sentence": "He has got four footballs.", "correction": "footballs", "error": "soccers", "error_description": "Noun Error: According to English dictionary definitions, 〈soccer〉 is an uncountable noun referring to the sport. To denote the physical object, 『football』 or 'soccer ball' should be used; this indicates a noun choice error. Also, since the number 〈four〉 should be followed by a plural countable noun, 〈soccers〉 should be changed to the plural countable noun 『footballs』 to fit the meaning.", "error_sentence": "He has got four soccers.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Noun Error", "index": 2 }, { "correct_sentence": "He has some soccer stars' photos.", "correction": "stars'", "error": "start's", "error_description": "① Spelling Error: The context suggests the intended meaning is 'photos of soccer stars', making 〈start〉 a spelling error for 『star』. Since the countable noun 『star』 lacks a determiner before it, it should be pluralized to 『stars』; ② Noun Possessive Error: According to English spelling rules, since 『stars』 already ends in 's', the 's' after the apostrophe 〈'〉 should be omitted in the possessive form. Therefore, the final 's' in 〈start's〉 is omitted, changing 〈start's〉 to 『stars'』 to conform to English writing standards.", "error_sentence": "He has some soccer start's photos.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Noun Possessive Error", "index": 3 }, { "correct_sentence": "But he only watches soccer competitions at home.", "correction": "watches soccer competitions", "error": "watch soccer competiton", "error_description": "① Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈he〉 is third-person singular, but the verb 〈watch〉 does not agree with it. The verb 〈watch〉 should be changed to the third-person singular form 『watches』 to maintain subject-verb agreement; ② Spelling Error: The context indicates the intended meaning is 'soccer competitions', so 〈competiton〉 is a misspelling of 『competition』. 〈competiton〉 needs to be corrected to 『competition』 for clarity; ③ Noun Number Error: Here, 〈soccer competiton〉 refers to 'soccer competitions'. 『competition』 is a countable noun. Since 〈soccer competiton〉 is not preceded by a determiner and it generally refers to 'soccer competitions', the plural form should be used. Therefore, 〈competiton〉 should be changed to the plural form 『competitions』 to fit the context.", "error_sentence": "But he only watch soccer competiton at home .", "error_severity": 4, "error_type": "Subject-Verb Agreement Error", "index": 4 }, { "correct_sentence": "Mike and Dave are Gao Feng's friends.", "correction": "are Gao Feng's friends", "error": "is Gao feng friend", "error_description": "① Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈Mike and Dave〉 is plural, so the third-person singular verb 〈is〉 should be changed to the plural form 『are』 to maintain subject-verb agreement; ② Case Error: According to the Chinese prompt, '高峰' is a name. Following English writing conventions, English names should be separated by spaces and have capitalized initial letters. The original 〈feng〉, used as a name, lacks capitalization; it should be changed to 『Feng』 to comply with English proper noun writing standards; ③ Noun Possessive Error: 〈Gao feng friend〉 aims to express 'Gao Feng's friends'. The possessive form should be used, changing 〈Gao feng〉 to 『Gao Feng's』 to indicate possession; ④ Noun Number Error: Both the subject 〈Mike and Dave〉 and the verb 『are』 are plural, so the predicate noun should also be plural. Thus, 〈friend〉 needs to be changed to 『friends』 to conform to grammatical rules.", "error_sentence": "Mike and Dave is Gao feng friend.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Subject-Verb Agreement Error", "index": 5 }, { "correct_sentence": "Mike likes playing basketball but doesn't like ping-pong.", "correction": "likes", "error": "like", "error_description": "Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈Mike〉 is third-person singular, but the verb 〈like〉 does not agree with it. 〈like〉 needs to be changed to the third-person singular form 『likes』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.", "error_sentence": "Mike like playing basketball.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Subject-Verb Agreement Error", "index": 6 }, { "correct_sentence": "Mike likes playing basketball but doesn't like ping-pong.", "correction": "but", "error": ".", "error_description": "Conjunction Error: 〈Mike like playing basketball.〉 and 〈doesn't like ping-pong〉 contain independent verbs, but 〈doesn't like ping-pong〉 lacks a subject and cannot stand alone as a sentence, indicating a missing conjunction between the two clauses. Based on the meaning, the two clauses form a compound sentence with a contrasting relationship. The conjunction 〈but〉 should be used to connect the contrasting ideas. Therefore, the original period 〈.〉 should be replaced with 『but』 to link the two sentences with opposite meanings.", "error_sentence": "Mike like playing basketball.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Conjunction Error", "index": 7 }, { "correct_sentence": "He feels that it is so boring.", "correction": "He feels that it", "error": "he feel that", "error_description": "① Case Error: 〈he〉 is the first word of the sentence and should be capitalized; it is changed to 『He』; ② Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈he〉 is third-person singular, but the verb 〈feel〉 does not agree with it. 〈feel〉 needs to be changed to the third-person singular form 『feels』 to maintain subject-verb agreement; ③ Pronoun Error: The object clause introduced by 〈that〉 lacks a subject. The pronoun 〈it〉, referring back to 〈ping-pong〉, needs to be added after 〈that〉 to complete the clause structure, resulting in 『it』.", "error_sentence": "he feel that is so boring.", "error_severity": 4, "error_type": "Subject-Verb Agreement Error", "index": 8 }, { "correct_sentence": "And Dave likes soccer, too.", "correction": "likes", "error": "like", "error_description": "Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈Dave〉 is third-person singular, and the context indicates the present simple tense. Therefore, the verb 〈like〉 does not agree with the subject; it should be changed to the third-person singular form 『likes』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.", "error_sentence": "And Dave like soccer, too.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Subject-Verb Agreement Error", "index": 9 }, { "correct_sentence": "The reason why he doesn't like it is that he finds it difficult.", "correction": "is that he finds", "error": ", that is he fell", "error_description": "① Sentence Structure Error: 'The reason why... is that...' is a fixed pattern meaning 'the reason for... is...'. The main clause 'The reason...is...' is missing its verb. The unnecessary comma 〈,〉 should be deleted, and 『is』 should be added before 〈that〉 to complete the structure of the predicate clause; ② Verb Choice Error: The context suggests the meaning 'he finds it difficult'. The verb 〈fell〉 ('to drop') does not fit the meaning and should be changed to 『find』 to express the subjective judgment 'finds' or 'thinks'; ③ Verb Tense Error: The context indicates the present simple tense should be used. The past simple tense 〈fell〉 is incorrect. Since the subject 〈he〉 is third-person singular, the corrected verb 『find』 should be in the third-person singular present simple form 『finds』 for grammatical correctness.", "error_sentence": "The reason why he doesn't like it, that is he fell it difficult.", "error_severity": 4, "error_type": "Sentence Structure Error", "index": 10 } ], "index": 16, "question_id": 253341, "question_prompt": "Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the table, write a short essay.\nGao Feng is a football fan. He owns four footballs and many photos of soccer stars, but he never plays football; he only watches games on TV. He has two friends, Mike and Dave. Based on the table hints, introduce the hobbies of Gao Feng and his two friends in about 50 words.\n________\n________\n________\n________", "source": "Gao feng is a soccer fans . He has got four soccers. He has some soccer start's photos. But he only watch soccer competiton at home . Mike and Dave is Gao feng friend. Mike like playing basketball. doesn't like ping-pong . he feel that is so boring. And Dave like soccer, too. He doesn't like baseball. The reason why he doesn't like it, that is he fell it difficult.", "summary": null, "target": "Gao Feng is a soccer fan. He has got four footballs. He has some soccer stars' photos. But he only watches soccer competitions at home. Mike and Dave are Gao Feng's friends. Mike likes playing basketball but doesn't like ping-pong. He feels that it is so boring. And Dave likes soccer, too. He doesn't like baseball. The reason why he doesn't like it is that he finds it difficult." }
{ "annotator": 9300, "digressive": null, "edits": [ { "correct_sentence": "I get up at 6:00 a.m.", "correction": "at 6:00 a.m.", "error": "aat 6:00a. m", "error_description": "① Spelling Error: Based on the context, 〈aat〉 is a misspelling of the preposition 『at』; it is corrected to 『at』 to introduce the time adverbial; ② Space Error: According to English writing rules, time expressions require a space between the number and 〈a.m.〉; therefore, a space is added after 〈6:00〉 to make it 『6:00 a.m.』; ③ Space Error: According to English writing rules, the time expression for \"morning\" 『a.m.』 does not contain a space; therefore, the space in 〈a. m.〉 is removed to make it 『a.m.』; ④ Punctuation Error: The sentence “I get up at 6:00 a.m” has an independent subject-verb structure and should end with a period 『.』; therefore, a period 『.』 is added at the end to comply with English writing conventions.", "error_sentence": "I get up aat 6:00a. m", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Punctuation Error", "index": 0 }, { "correct_sentence": "and I have a bath.", "correction": "a", "error": "", "error_description": "Determiner Error: According to the sentence meaning, the countable noun 〈bath〉 here expresses 'take a bath' and should be in singular form; therefore, the indefinite article 『a』 needs to be added before the singular countable noun 〈bath〉 to conform to English grammar rules.", "error_sentence": "and I have bath.", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Determiner Error", "index": 1 }, { "correct_sentence": "I have breakfast at 6:30 a.m.", "correction": "6:30 a.m.", "error": "6:30a.m.", "error_description": "Space Error: According to English writing rules, time expressions require a space between the number and 〈a.m.〉; therefore, a space is added after 〈6:30〉 to make it 『6:30 a.m.』.", "error_sentence": "I have breakfast at 6:30a.m.", "error_severity": 1, "error_type": "Space Error", "index": 2 }, { "correct_sentence": "I begin to have lessons at 7:30 a.m.", "correction": "to", "error": "", "error_description": "Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to the sentence meaning and English grammar rules, the verb 〈begin〉 here should be followed by the infinitive 'to do' to express 'start doing something'; therefore, the base form verb 〈have〉 is changed to 『to have』 to form the correct collocation.", "error_sentence": "I begin have lessons at 7:30a.m.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Nonfinite Verb Form Error", "index": 3 }, { "correct_sentence": "I begin to have lessons at 7:30 a.m. I draw pictures and read books.", "correction": "7:30 a.m. I draw", "error": "7:30a.m.I am drawing", "error_description": "① Space Error: The time 〈7:30〉 and the morning indicator 〈a.m.〉 are separate words and should be separated by a space; therefore, a space is added to change it to 『7:30 a.m.』; ② Space Error: 〈I begin to have lessons at 7:30 a.m.〉 is a complete sentence, and a space should follow the period at the end to separate it from the next sentence; therefore, 〈a.m.I〉 is changed to 『a.m. I』 by adding a space to comply with English writing conventions; ③ Verb Tense Error: Describing daily activities should use the simple present tense 『draw』, not the present continuous tense 〈am drawing〉.", "error_sentence": "I begin have lessons at 7:30a.m. I am drawing pictures and reading books.", "error_severity": 4, "error_type": "Verb Tense Error", "index": 4 }, { "correct_sentence": "I draw pictures and read books.", "correction": "read", "error": "reading", "error_description": "Verb Tense Error: Based on the context, the entire passage describes daily activities rather than a specific moment; therefore, the present participle 〈reading〉 should be changed to the simple present tense 『read』 to maintain consistent tense and ensure smooth expression.", "error_sentence": "I am drawing pictures and reading books.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Verb Tense Error", "index": 5 }, { "correct_sentence": "I have lunch at 12:00.", "correction": "", "error": "o'clock", "error_description": "Word Redundancy Error: According to English expression conventions, 〈12:00〉 already clearly indicates the hour on the dot; 〈o'clock〉 is redundant as it repeats the meaning of 〈:00〉. Therefore, 〈o'clock〉 needs to be deleted, keeping only 『12:00』 to conform to modern English usage habits.", "error_sentence": "I have lunch at 12:00 o'clock.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Word Redundancy Error", "index": 6 }, { "correct_sentence": "In the afternoon, I play with balls and toys.", "correction": "with", "error": "", "error_description": "Preposition Error: According to the sentence meaning, 〈play balls〉 here does not refer to a specific ball game; both 〈balls〉 and 〈toys〉 are objects of play. Here, 〈play〉 is used as an intransitive verb meaning 'to play', and the preposition 『with』 needs to be added after it to introduce the objects of play, conforming to English expression habits.", "error_sentence": "In the afternoon, I play balls and toys.", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Preposition Error", "index": 7 }, { "correct_sentence": "And then I go back home at 5:00 p.m.", "correction": "5:00 p.m.", "error": "5:00p.m.", "error_description": "Space Error: According to English writing rules, time expressions require a space between the number and 〈p.m.〉; therefore, a space needs to be added after 〈5:00〉 to make it 『5:00 p.m.』 to comply with writing conventions.", "error_sentence": "And then I go back home at 5:00p.m.", "error_severity": 1, "error_type": "Space Error", "index": 8 }, { "correct_sentence": "And I go to sleep at 9:00 p.m.", "correction": "9:00 p.m.", "error": "9:00p.m.", "error_description": "Space Error: According to English writing rules, time expressions require a space between the number and 〈p.m.〉; therefore, a space needs to be added after 〈9:00〉 to make it 『9:00 p.m.』 to comply with writing conventions.", "error_sentence": "And I go to sleep at 9:00p.m.", "error_severity": 1, "error_type": "Space Error", "index": 9 } ], "index": 17, "question_id": 244244, "question_prompt": "Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Assume you are Tina; introduce your Monday routine to everyone. Writing hints: get up; have breakfast; go to school; begin; have lunch; go home.", "source": "I'm Tina and I am very busy on Monday. I get up aat 6:00a. m and I have bath. I have breakfast at 6:30a.m.And then I go to school with my friends. I begin have lessons at 7:30a.m.I am drawing pictures and reading books. I have lunch at 12:00 o'clock. In the afternoon, I play balls and toys. And then I go back home at 5:00p.m.And I go to sleep at 9:00p.m.", "summary": null, "target": "I'm Tina and I am very busy on Monday. I get up at 6:00 a.m. and I have a bath. I have breakfast at 6:30 a.m. And then I go to school with my friends. I begin to have lessons at 7:30 a.m. I draw pictures and read books. I have lunch at 12:00. In the afternoon, I play with balls and toys. And then I go back home at 5:00 p.m. And I go to sleep at 9:00 p.m." }
{ "annotator": 9300, "digressive": null, "edits": [ { "correct_sentence": "My father is a teacher, and my mother is a nurse.", "correction": "a", "error": "", "error_description": "Determiner Error: According to grammar rules, the singular countable noun 〈nurse〉 requires a determiner before it; based on the sentence meaning, an indefinite article should be added here to indicate profession, therefore the indefinite article 『a』 needs to be inserted between 〈is〉 and 〈nurse〉, conforming to English article usage rules.", "error_sentence": "My father is a teacher, and my mother is nurse.", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Determiner Error", "index": 0 }, { "correct_sentence": "In the summer holiday, I am going to Beijing with my family.", "correction": "the", "error": "", "error_description": "Determiner Error: The fixed phrase 〈summer holiday〉 is a countable noun phrase, requiring a definite article when referring to a specific time period; based on the sentence meaning, it refers to a specific 'summer holiday', thus the definite article 『the』 needs to be added before the countable noun 〈summer holiday〉 to conform to expression habits and clarify the specific holiday period.", "error_sentence": "In summer holiday, I am going to the beijing with my family.", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Determiner Error", "index": 1 }, { "correct_sentence": "In the summer holiday, I am going to Beijing with my family.", "correction": "Beijing", "error": "the beijing", "error_description": "① Determiner Error: The proper noun 『Beijing』 does not require an article before it, therefore the redundant determiner 『the』 in 〈the beijing〉 needs to be deleted to conform to English place name writing conventions; ② Case Error: The proper noun 『Beijing』, as a city name, requires its first letter to be capitalized, therefore 〈beijing〉 needs to be changed to 『Beijing』 to conform to English place name writing conventions.", "error_sentence": "In summer holiday, I am going to the beijing with my family.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Determiner Error", "index": 2 }, { "correct_sentence": "There are many famous places, such as Tian'anmen Square and the Palace Museum.", "correction": "places", "error": "", "error_description": "Noun Error: According to English grammar rules, the 'there be' structure should be followed by a noun, hence a noun is missing after the adjective 〈famous〉 in the original sentence. Based on the sentence meaning, it can be inferred that the intention is to express 'famous places', therefore the plural countable noun 『places』 needs to be added after 〈many famous〉 to make the sentence structure complete.", "error_sentence": "There are many famous, such as Tian'anmen Square, the Palace Museum.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Noun Error", "index": 3 }, { "correct_sentence": "There are many famous places, such as Tian'anmen Square and the Palace Museum.", "correction": "and", "error": ",", "error_description": "Conjunction Error: According to English expression conventions, when listing multiple items, a conjunction is needed between the last two items; based on the sentence meaning, 〈Tian'anmen Square〉 and 〈the Palace Museum〉 are in a parallel relationship, therefore the comma in 〈Square, the〉 needs to be replaced with 『and』 to conform to English expression habits.", "error_sentence": "There are many famous, such as Tian'anmen Square, the Palace Museum.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Conjunction Error", "index": 4 }, { "correct_sentence": "And there is much yummy food, for example, Beijing Roast Duck.", "correction": "there is", "error": "the there are", "error_description": "① Word Redundancy Error: According to grammar rules, the 'there be' structure expresses 'there is/are' and does not require the determiner 〈the〉 before it, therefore 〈the〉 before 〈there〉 needs to be deleted to conform to grammatical norms; ② Subject-Verb Agreement Error: Here, in the 'there be' structure, the subject is the uncountable noun 〈food〉, so the verb needs to be in the third-person singular form; 〈there are〉 needs to be changed to 『there is』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.", "error_sentence": "And the there are much yummy food, for example, Beijing Roast Duck.", "error_severity": 4, "error_type": "Word Redundancy Error", "index": 5 } ], "index": 18, "question_id": 253453, "question_prompt": "Written Expression. Assume you are Lin Chen and have just made a new pen pal named Ted. Please write a letter to him describing your personal background, family situation, and your plan to visit Beijing over the summer. Writing hints: Tian'anmen Square, the Palace Museum, Beijing Roast Duck.\nDear Ted,\n________\nWelcome to China. Have a good day!\nYours,\nLin Chen", "source": "My name is Lin Chen. My father is a teacher, and my mother is nurse. Now, this is my plan for the summer holiday. In summer holiday, I am going to the beijing with my family. Beijing is a perfect place. There are many famous, such as Tian'anmen Square, the Palace Museum. And the there are much yummy food, for example, Beijing Roast Duck.", "summary": null, "target": "My name is Lin Chen. My father is a teacher, and my mother is a nurse. Now, this is my plan for the summer holiday. In the summer holiday, I am going to Beijing with my family. Beijing is a perfect place. There are many famous places, such as Tian'anmen Square and the Palace Museum. And there is much yummy food, for example, Beijing Roast Duck." }
{ "annotator": 10479, "digressive": null, "edits": [ { "correct_sentence": "My classmate is very smartly dressed today.", "correction": "dressed", "error": "dreessed", "error_description": "Spelling Error: Based on the context, the intended meaning is 'dressed'. The word 〈dreessed〉 in the original sentence is misspelled; the extra letter 〈e〉 should be removed and the letter order adjusted to 『dressed』.", "error_sentence": "My classmate is very smartly dreessed today.", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Spelling Error", "index": 0 }, { "correct_sentence": "She wears a pure white shirt and blue shoes.", "correction": "She wears a pure", "error": "Her wear a puer", "error_description": "① Pronoun Error: In the original sentence 〈Her wears a pure white shirt and blue shoes.〉, 〈Her〉 is in the subject position, but it is an object pronoun. It should be changed to the subject pronoun 『She』 to comply with English grammar rules; ② Subject-verb Agreement Error: The correct subject of the sentence is the third-person pronoun 『She』. To maintain subject-verb agreement, the verb 〈wear〉 needs to be changed to the third-person singular form 『wears』 for grammatical correctness; ③ Spelling Error: Based on the context, the intended meaning is 'pure'. The word 〈puer〉 in the original sentence is misspelled; it should be changed to 『pure』 to ensure correct spelling.", "error_sentence": "Her wear a puer white shirt and blue shoes.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Subject-Verb Agreement Error", "index": 1 }, { "correct_sentence": "And she really likes her red dress.", "correction": "she really likes her", "error": "her very like", "error_description": "① Pronoun Error: In the original sentence, 〈Her〉 is in the subject position, but it is an object pronoun. It should be changed to the subject pronoun 『She』 to comply with English grammar rules; ② Adverb Error: Based on the context, the intended meaning is 'very' or 'really'. The original sentence uses the adverb 〈very〉 to modify the verb 〈like〉, meaning 'very like', which does not conform to English grammar rules. It needs to be changed to the adverb 『really』 to make the expression more accurate and fluent; ③ Subject-verb Agreement Error: The correct subject of the sentence is the third-person pronoun 『She』, which is singular. To maintain subject-verb agreement, the verb 〈like〉 needs to be changed to the third-person singular form 『likes』 to ensure grammatical correctness and fluency; ④ Determiner Error: In the original sentence, the countable noun 〈red dress〉 cannot stand alone. The determiner 『her』 is added here to indicate possession ('her red dress'), making the meaning more complete.", "error_sentence": "And her very like red dress.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Subject-Verb Agreement Error", "index": 2 }, { "correct_sentence": "I really love the way she looks in her dress.", "correction": "really", "error": "vrey", "error_description": "Adverb Error: Based on the context, the intended meaning is 'very' or 'really'. The original sentence uses the adverb 〈vrey〉 to modify the verb 〈love〉, meaning 'very love', which does not conform to English grammar rules, and 〈very〉 is misspelled. It needs to be changed to the adverb 『really』 to make the expression more accurate and fluent.", "error_sentence": "I vrey love the way she looks in her dress.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Adverb Error", "index": 3 } ], "index": 20, "question_id": 255734, "question_prompt": "Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.\nWriting hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like", "source": "My classmate is very smartly dreessed today. Her wear a puer white shirt and blue shoes. And her very like red dress. I vrey love the way she looks in her dress.", "summary": null, "target": "My classmate is very smartly dressed today. She wears a pure white shirt and blue shoes. And she really likes her red dress. I really love the way she looks in her dress." }
{ "annotator": 10479, "digressive": null, "edits": [ { "correct_sentence": "This is my photo.", "correction": "is", "error": "", "error_description": "Verb Choice Error: The original sentence 〈This my photo.〉 lacks the necessary predicate verb 『is』, making it grammatically incomplete and unclear; the linking verb 『is』 should be added to connect the subject 〈This〉 with the predicative 〈my photo〉, forming a complete declarative sentence.", "error_sentence": "This my photo.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Verb Choice Error", "index": 0 }, { "correct_sentence": "They are my father, mother, brother, and me.", "correction": "They are", "error": "Thay was", "error_description": "① Spelling Error: Based on the sentence's meaning, the intended word is '他们' 『They』; the original sentence uses 〈Thay〉, which is a spelling error; 〈a〉 should be changed to 〈e〉, so the correct form is 『They』, a pronoun referring to a plural subject; ② Verb Tense Error: The verb 〈was〉 in the sentence is used improperly because the context describes a current fact or state, not something that happened in the past. Therefore, 〈was〉 should be changed to 『are』 to agree with the plural subject 『They』 and accurately express the current situation.", "error_sentence": "Thay was my father, mother, bother and I.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Verb Tense Error", "index": 1 }, { "correct_sentence": "They are my father, mother, brother, and me.", "correction": "brother, and me.", "error": "bother and I.", "error_description": "① Spelling Error: Based on the sentence's meaning, the intended word is '兄弟' 『brother』; the original sentence uses 〈bother〉, which is a spelling error; the letter 〈r〉 should be added, so the correct spelling is 『brother』; ② Punctuation Error: According to English writing conventions, when listing three or more items, a comma ',' should separate each item, and 『, and』 should connect the last two items; therefore, a ',' should be added before 『and』 here to conform to writing standards; ③ Pronoun Error: In the original sentence 〈They are my father, mother, brother and I.〉, 〈I〉 functions as an object within the parallel structure, so the objective case pronoun 『me』 should be used instead of the subjective case 〈I〉.", "error_sentence": "Thay was my father, mother, bother and I.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Pronoun Error", "index": 2 }, { "correct_sentence": "My father is strong and healthy.", "correction": "is", "error": "was", "error_description": "Verb Tense Error: Based on the context, the intended meaning is that 'the father is currently still strong', indicating a present state; the original text uses the past tense 〈was〉, expressing a past state, which is a verb tense error; it needs to be changed to the simple present tense 『is』 to fit the context.", "error_sentence": "My father was strong and heath.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Verb Tense Error", "index": 3 }, { "correct_sentence": "My father is strong and healthy.", "correction": "healthy", "error": "heath", "error_description": "① Spelling Error: Based on the context, it is inferred that the intended word is 'health', thus 〈heath〉 is a spelling error for 'health'; ② PoS Confusion Error: The original sentence 〈My father is strong and health.〉 intends to express 'My father is strong and healthy'; using the noun 〈heath〉 is a morphology error/PoS confusion; it needs to be changed to the adjective 『healthy』 to modify the subject 〈My father〉 and accurately describe his state.", "error_sentence": "My father was strong and heath.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "PoS Confusion Error", "index": 4 }, { "correct_sentence": "I want to be a good man like him.", "correction": "good man like him", "error": "goodman like he", "error_description": "① Space Error: The original sentence incorrectly spells 〈goodman〉 as a single compound noun; in English, 『good man』 is a phrase composed of the adjective 〈good〉 and the noun 〈man〉, meaning 'a good person'; merging these two words into 〈goodman〉 leads to grammatical and semantic inaccuracy; therefore, the correct form should be the separate words 『good man』; ② Pronoun Error: In the original sentence 〈I want to be a good man like he.〉, 〈he〉 serves as the object of the preposition 〈like〉 and requires the objective case 『him』, not the subjective case 〈he〉; the sentence contains a pronoun error, requiring the subjective pronoun 〈he〉 to be changed to the objective pronoun 『him』 to comply with grammatical rules.", "error_sentence": "I want to be a goodman like he.", "error_severity": 4, "error_type": "Pronoun Error", "index": 5 } ], "index": 24, "question_id": 244781, "question_prompt": "Assume you are Emily. Below is your family photo. Please introduce your family members based on the picture. Requirement: Write at least 6 sentences.", "source": "This my photo. Thay was my father, mother, bother and I. My father was strong and heath. I want to be a goodman like he.", "summary": null, "target": "This is my photo. They are my father, mother, brother, and me. My father is strong and healthy. I want to be a good man like him." }
{ "annotator": 10074, "digressive": null, "edits": [ { "correct_sentence": "The weekend is coming. What are students going to do?", "correction": ". What", "error": ", what", "error_description": "① Punctuation Error: 〈The weekend is coming〉 and 〈what are students going to do〉 contain independent predicate structures/subject-verb structures and can stand as separate sentences. In English grammar, sentences should be separated by a period 『.』, not simply connected by a comma 〈,〉; ② Case Error: After sentence segmentation, the interrogative sentence 〈what are students going to do〉 is a complete independent sentence, so its first letter needs to be capitalized, meaning 〈what〉 should be changed to the capitalized form 『What』.", "error_sentence": "The weekend is coming, what are students going to do?", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Punctuation Error", "index": 0 }, { "correct_sentence": "The room will be very tidy.", "correction": "will", "error": "would", "error_description": "Verb Tense Error: According to the entire passage, the simple future tense is used throughout. Therefore, when describing the future action in the original sentence 〈The room would be tidy〉, the auxiliary verb should be in the simple future tense 『will』, not the past future tense 〈would〉. Thus, 〈would〉 is changed to 『will』 to maintain tense consistency.", "error_sentence": "The room would be very tidy.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Verb Tense Error", "index": 1 }, { "correct_sentence": "We will have a big and delicious lunch.", "correction": "We will", "error": "we would", "error_description": "① Case Error: Since this is an independent declarative sentence, the pronoun 〈we〉 at the beginning of the sentence needs to be capitalized as 『We』 to comply with English writing conventions; ② Verb Tense Error: According to the context, this sentence 〈we would have a big and delicious lunch.〉 describes a planned future action, so the predicate verb needs to be in the simple future tense, meaning 〈would〉 should be changed to 『will』.", "error_sentence": "we would have a big and delicious lunch.", "error_severity": 4, "error_type": "Verb Tense Error", "index": 2 }, { "correct_sentence": "In the afternoon, my family is going to fly kites. It will be very fun.", "correction": ". It will be", "error": ", it is", "error_description": "① Punctuation Error: The sentences 〈my family is going to fly kites〉 and 〈it is very fun〉 are two independent declarative sentences and should be separated by a period 『.』, not connected by a comma 〈,〉; ② Case Error: When 〈it is very fun.〉 functions as an independent sentence, the initial pronoun 〈it〉 needs to be capitalized as 『It』; ③ Verb Tense Error: According to the tense of the text, this sentence should be in the simple future tense, but 〈is〉 indicates the present tense, which does not match the future scenario described; it needs to be changed to 『will be』 to maintain consistency with the context's tense.", "error_sentence": "In the afternoon, my family is going to fly kites, it is very fun.", "error_severity": 4, "error_type": "Verb Tense Error", "index": 3 }, { "correct_sentence": "We will have a good time!", "correction": "We will", "error": "we", "error_description": "① Case Error: According to English writing conventions, when the pronoun 〈we〉 is at the beginning of an independent sentence, its first letter needs to be capitalized as 『We』; ② Verb Tense Error: According to the tense of the text, this sentence should be in the simple future tense, whereas 〈we have a good time !〉 indicates the simple present tense, which does not align with the simple future tense requirement of the original text and prompt; therefore, 〈we have〉 needs to be changed to 『We will have』 to maintain tense consistency with the context.", "error_sentence": "we have a good time !", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Verb Tense Error", "index": 4 } ], "index": 25, "question_id": 270915, "question_prompt": "The weekend is coming. Classmates, what are you planning to do? Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay of about 60 words about your plans for the weekend.\nWriting hints: be going to; do cleaning; visit grandparents; have a good time", "source": "The weekend is coming, what are students going to do? I am looking forward to the weekend. On Saturday morning, I will get up early. I am going to do my homework at 8:30. And my mother will help me with my homework. After lunch, I am going to do cleaning with my mother. The room would be very tidy. On Sunday, my family is going to visit my grandparents. They miss my family very much. we would have a big and delicious lunch. In the afternoon, my family is going to fly kites, it is very fun. we have a good time !", "summary": null, "target": "The weekend is coming. What are students going to do? I am looking forward to the weekend. On Saturday morning, I will get up early. I am going to do my homework at 8:30. And my mother will help me with my homework. After lunch, I am going to do cleaning with my mother. The room will be very tidy. On Sunday, my family is going to visit my grandparents. They miss my family very much. We will have a big and delicious lunch. In the afternoon, my family is going to fly kites. It will be very fun. We will have a good time!" }
{ "annotator": 10074, "digressive": null, "edits": [ { "correct_sentence": "At 7:00 pm, Linda and her family are at home.", "correction": "At 7:00 pm,", "error": "In the 7:00pm", "error_description": "① Preposition Error: According to the original phrase 〈In the 7:00pm〉, the intention is to use a specific time point as an adverbial of time, but the preposition 〈In〉 is used for periods of time, not specific time points; 『At』 should be used to indicate a specific time point, hence it should be changed to 『At 7:00 pm』; ② Determiner Error: According to determiner usage, the definite article 〈the〉 is not needed when describing a specific time point; the correct expression is the preposition 『At』 directly followed by the time point; ③ Space Error: According to English writing conventions, the time format should have a space between the number and pm, so it is corrected to 『7:00 pm』; ④ Punctuation Error: According to English writing conventions, when the time adverbial 『At 7:00 pm』 is at the beginning of a sentence, it is usually followed by a 『,』.", "error_sentence": "In the 7:00pm Linda and her family at home Linda is helping mother do housework grandparents are watching TV", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Preposition Error", "index": 0 }, { "correct_sentence": "At 7:00 pm, Linda and her family are at home.", "correction": "are", "error": "", "error_description": "Verb Choice Error: From the original phrase 〈Linda and her family at home〉, it can be seen that the sentence structure should be subject-verb-complement, but the linking verb is missing after the subject. Therefore, a linking verb needs to be added. Since the subject 〈Linda and her family〉 is plural, 『are』 should be added after 〈Linda and her family〉 to form a complete sentence structure.", "error_sentence": "In the 7:00pm Linda and her family at home Linda is helping mother do housework grandparents are watching TV", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Verb Choice Error", "index": 1 }, { "correct_sentence": "At 7:00 pm, Linda and her family are at home.", "correction": ".", "error": "", "error_description": "Punctuation Error: From the original sentence 〈In the 7:00pm Linda and her family at home〉, it can be seen that this is an independent and complete sentence, and the following sentence 〈Linda is helping mother do housework〉 is also a complete main clause. The original text joins two independent main clauses directly without punctuation between them, so a 『.』 needs to be added after 〈home〉 to separate the two independent main clauses.", "error_sentence": "In the 7:00pm Linda and her family at home Linda is helping mother do housework grandparents are watching TV", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Punctuation Error", "index": 2 }, { "correct_sentence": "Linda is helping her mother do housework.", "correction": "her", "error": "", "error_description": "Determiner Error: In the original description 〈Linda is helping mother〉, the possessive pronoun 『her』 needs to be added before 〈mother〉 to specify the singular countable noun and clarify the kinship relationship; omitting the determiner 『her』 could lead to ambiguity of general reference, thus it needs to be changed to 『Linda is helping her mother』.", "error_sentence": "In the 7:00pm Linda and her family at home Linda is helping mother do housework grandparents are watching TV", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Determiner Error", "index": 3 }, { "correct_sentence": "Linda is helping her mother do housework. Grandparents are watching TV.", "correction": ". Grandparents", "error": "grandparents", "error_description": "① Punctuation Error: From the original sentence 〈Linda is helping mother do housework〉, it can be seen that this is an independent and complete sentence, and the following sentence 〈grandparents are watching TV〉 is also a complete main clause. The original text joins two independent main clauses directly without a conjunction or punctuation between them, so a 『.』 needs to be added after 〈housework〉 to separate the two independent main clauses; ② Case Error: According to English writing rules, the first letter of a sentence needs to be capitalized, so 〈grandparents〉 is changed to 『Grandparents』 to start the independent sentence.", "error_sentence": "In the 7:00pm Linda and her family at home Linda is helping mother do housework grandparents are watching TV", "error_severity": 4, "error_type": "Punctuation Error", "index": 4 }, { "correct_sentence": "Grandparents are watching TV.", "correction": ".", "error": "", "error_description": "Punctuation Error: From the original sentence 〈grandparents are watching TV〉, it can be seen that this is an independent and complete sentence, and the following sentence 〈Her brother is playing computer games〉 is also a complete main clause. The original text joins two independent main clauses directly without a conjunction or punctuation between them, so a 『.』 needs to be added after 〈TV〉 to separate the two independent main clauses.", "error_sentence": "In the 7:00pm Linda and her family at home Linda is helping mother do housework grandparents are watching TV Her brother is playing computer games her mother is cooking her sister is listening to the radio they have a good time", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Punctuation Error", "index": 5 }, { "correct_sentence": "Her brother is playing computer games. Her mother is cooking.", "correction": ". Her", "error": "her", "error_description": "① Punctuation Error: From the original sentence 〈Her brother is playing computer games〉, it can be seen that this is an independent and complete sentence, and the following sentence 〈her mother is cooking〉 is also a complete main clause. The original text joins two independent main clauses directly without a conjunction or punctuation between them, so a 『.』 needs to be added after 〈Her brother is playing computer games〉 to separate the two independent main clauses; ② Case Error: Since the second sentence 〈her mother is cooking〉 is also a complete and independent sentence, the first letter of the first word needs to be capitalized, changing 〈her〉 to 『Her』.", "error_sentence": "Her brother is playing computer games her mother is cooking her sister is listening to the radio they have a good time", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Punctuation Error", "index": 6 }, { "correct_sentence": "Her mother is cooking. Her sister is listening to the radio.", "correction": ". Her", "error": "her", "error_description": "① Punctuation Error: From the original sentence 〈her mother is cooking〉, it can be seen that this is an independent and complete sentence, and the following sentence 〈her sister is listening to the radio〉 is also a complete main clause. The original text joins two independent main clauses directly without a conjunction or punctuation between them, so a 『.』 needs to be added after 〈her mother is cooking〉 to separate the two independent main clauses; ② Case Error: Since the second sentence 〈her sister is listening to the radio〉 is also a complete and independent sentence, the first letter of the first word needs to be capitalized, changing 〈her〉 to 『Her』.", "error_sentence": "Her brother is playing computer games her mother is cooking her sister is listening to the radio they have a good time", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Punctuation Error", "index": 7 }, { "correct_sentence": "Her sister is listening to the radio. They have a good time.", "correction": ". They", "error": "they", "error_description": "① Punctuation Error: From the original sentence 〈her sister is listening to the radio〉, it can be seen that this is an independent and complete sentence, and the following sentence 〈they have a good time〉 is also a complete main clause. The original text joins two independent main clauses directly without a conjunction or punctuation between them, so a 『.』 needs to be added after 〈her sister is listening to the radio〉 to separate the two independent main clauses; ② Case Error: Since the original sentence 〈they have a good time〉 is also a complete and independent sentence, the first letter of the first word needs to be capitalized, changing 〈they〉 to 『They』.", "error_sentence": "Her brother is playing computer games her mother is cooking her sister is listening to the radio they have a good time", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Punctuation Error", "index": 8 }, { "correct_sentence": "They have a good time.", "correction": ".", "error": "", "error_description": "Punctuation Error: According to English writing conventions, from the original sentence 〈they have a good time〉, it can be seen that this is an independent and complete sentence located at the end of the paragraph. The sentence lacks end punctuation 『.』 to conclude it, so a 『.』 needs to be added after 〈time〉 to comply with writing conventions.", "error_sentence": "Her brother is playing computer games her mother is cooking her sister is listening to the radio they have a good time", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Punctuation Error", "index": 9 } ], "index": 26, "question_id": 245297, "question_prompt": "Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. It is currently 7 PM. Based on the information provided by Linda below, use the present continuous tense to describe what Linda and her family are doing. Writing hints: Linda: help mother do housework; grandparents: watch TV; brother: play computer games; mother: cook; sister: listen to the radio.", "source": "In the 7:00pm Linda and her family at home Linda is helping mother do housework grandparents are watching TV Her brother is playing computer games her mother is cooking her sister is listening to the radio they have a good time", "summary": null, "target": "At 7:00 pm, Linda and her family are at home. Linda is helping her mother do housework. Grandparents are watching TV. Her brother is playing computer games. Her mother is cooking. Her sister is listening to the radio. They have a good time." }
{ "annotator": 10074, "digressive": null, "edits": [ { "correct_sentence": "Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is having a sale now.", "correction": "having a", "error": "on", "error_description": "Verb Choice Error: In English, when expressing commercial promotional activities, 〈have a sale〉 is a fixed verb phrase emphasizing the store's active initiation of the promotion, logically corresponding with the adverb of time 'now'. In contrast, 〈is on sale〉, as a linking verb structure, emphasizes a long-term state, creating a tense conflict when paired with 'now', failing to accurately convey the dynamic scene of 'the store is currently holding a promotion'. It should be replaced with the phrase containing a dynamic verb 『have a sale』. Therefore, the corrected sentence should be 『Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is having a sale now. 』.", "error_sentence": "Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is on sale now.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Verb Choice Error", "index": 0 }, { "correct_sentence": "They have great prices.", "correction": "They have great prices", "error": "It has a great price", "error_description": "① Pronoun Error: Although the preceding subject 〈Mr. Cool's Clothes Store〉 is a singular store name, in English commercial context, the plural pronoun 『They』 is typically used to refer to its collective staff or product collection (rather than the singular pronoun 〈It〉 referring to the physical building); ② Subject-Verb Agreement Error: When using the plural pronoun 『They』 as the subject, the predicate verb must maintain number agreement. Therefore, the singular form of the predicate verb 〈has〉 in this sentence needs to be corrected to the plural form 『have』, forming the correct structure 『They have』; ③ Noun Number Error: In the context of a store, multiple product pricing systems are usually involved. Therefore, when referring generally, the plural form 『prices』 (emphasizing the diversity of different products/prices) should be used, not the singular 〈price〉 (which could be easily understood as a single product price or total price concept). Additionally, the redundant article 〈a〉 should be deleted to comply with plural noun usage rules.", "error_sentence": "It has a great price.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Subject-Verb Agreement Error", "index": 1 }, { "correct_sentence": "It's only 30 yuan for sweaters in any color.", "correction": "sweaters", "error": "sweathers", "error_description": "Spelling Error: According to the original sentence, the intended meaning is 'sweaters in any color'. The word in the original sentence contains a spelling error. Therefore, 〈sweathers〉 should be changed to 『sweaters』 to correctly express the meaning.", "error_sentence": "It's only 30 yuan for sweathers in any color.", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Spelling Error", "index": 2 }, { "correct_sentence": "It's only 20 yuan for shorts.", "correction": "yuan", "error": "", "error_description": "Noun Error: In the context of expressing product prices, the number 〈20〉 as a cardinal number must be paired with a clear currency unit to form a complete price expression. The absence of the price unit 『yuan』 leads to semantic ambiguity, potentially causing readers to misjudge the currency type (e.g., dollars, euros, etc.) or question the nature of the value (e.g., whether it refers to a discount percentage, points value, etc.). According to English grammar rules, when a numerical value is used with a currency unit, the unit noun cannot be omitted. Thus, 『yuan』 should be added after 〈20〉 here.", "error_sentence": "It's only 20 for shorts.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Noun Error", "index": 3 }, { "correct_sentence": "Big handbags sell for 35 yuan while 20 yuan for small ones.", "correction": "sell for", "error": "are", "error_description": "Verb Choice Error: In English expression, when describing product pricing, 〈are〉 merely statically states the objective existence that 'Big handbags are 35 yuan'. However, in a commercial context, the transaction attribute needs to be clearly expressed. 『sell for』 dynamically emphasizes the 'selling price' of the goods through a verb phrase, which better fits the contextual logic. Therefore, 〈are〉 here needs to be changed to 『sell for』.", "error_sentence": "Big handbags are 35 yuan whille 20 yuan for small ones.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Verb Choice Error", "index": 4 }, { "correct_sentence": "Big handbags sell for 35 yuan while 20 yuan for small ones.", "correction": "while", "error": "whille", "error_description": "Spelling Error: From the original sentence, the intention here is to 'contrast the prices of large and small bags', connected by 『while』. It is thus evident that the word 〈whille〉 has a spelling error involving a redundant letter; the correct spelling should be the conjunction 『while』.", "error_sentence": "Big handbags are 35 yuan whille 20 yuan for small ones.", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Spelling Error", "index": 5 } ], "index": 27, "question_id": 246928, "question_prompt": "Using the information provided in Chinese and referring to the picture, write a short essay.\nMr. Cool's Clothes Store is having a big sale with great discounts. Sweaters in various colors are only 30 yuan, shorts are only 20 yuan, and shirts are only 25 yuan. Large bags sell for 35 yuan, and small bags for 20 yuan. There are also many beautiful shoes and skirts available. Welcome to shop.", "source": "Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is on sale now. It has a great price. It's only 30 yuan for sweathers in any color. It's only 20 for shorts. It's only 25 yuan for shirts. Big handbags are 35 yuan whille 20 yuan for small ones. There are many beautiful shoes and dresses. Welcome to our store.", "summary": null, "target": "Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is having a sale now. They have great prices. It's only 30 yuan for sweaters in any color. It's only 20 yuan for shorts. It's only 25 yuan for shirts. Big handbags sell for 35 yuan while 20 yuan for small ones. There are many beautiful shoes and dresses. Welcome to our store." }
{ "annotator": 10074, "digressive": null, "edits": [ { "correct_sentence": "It is now 3:00 in the afternoon.", "correction": "It is now", "error": "Now is", "error_description": "Sentence Structure Error: In English time expressions, the correct structure requires 『It』 as a formal subject. The original sentence incorrectly uses 〈Now〉 as the subject in a subject-verb-complement structure. It should be adjusted to 『It is now』 to fulfill the grammatical requirement of a formal subject, with the adverb 'now' modifying the linking verb as a time adverbial, and conforming to the standard English time expression.", "error_sentence": "Now is 3:00 in the afternoon.", "error_severity": 4, "error_type": "Sentence Structure Error", "index": 0 }, { "correct_sentence": "My mother is trying on the shoes, and my father is staying on the sofa to wait for my mom.", "correction": "on", "error": "", "error_description": "Preposition Error: According to the prompt, the phrasal verb 『try on』, meaning 'to put on clothes/shoes to see if they fit', is provided as a fixed expression. The original sentence connects 〈try〉 directly with the object 〈the shoes〉, forming the structure 〈trying the shoes〉. This usage might cause semantic ambiguity and does not meet the prompt's requirement. Therefore, the crucial preposition 『on』 needs to be added after 〈trying〉.", "error_sentence": "My mother is trying the shoes, and my father is staying on the sofa to wait for my mom.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Preposition Error", "index": 1 }, { "correct_sentence": "In the shop, a little girl is buying some food, and a young lady is looking at a dress.", "correction": "little", "error": "litter", "error_description": "Spelling Error: Based on the original sentence, the intended meaning is 'a small girl'. Thus, 〈litter〉 in the original sentence is a misspelling. 〈litter〉 as a noun means 'trash; stretcher; a brood of young animals', and as a verb means 'to scatter things untidily'. In contrast, 『little』 is an adjective meaning 'small; young'. The original sentence confused the spelling of these two words, so the correct form should change 〈litter〉 to 『little』.", "error_sentence": "In the shop, a litter girl is buying some food, and a young lady is looking at a dress.", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Spelling Error", "index": 2 } ], "index": 29, "question_id": 243010, "question_prompt": "Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. It is 3 PM. Based on the information provided below about Linda, use the present continuous tense to describe what Linda sees and hears at the mall:\nWriting hints:\nA little girl: buy some food\nA young lady: look at a dress\nLinda's mother: try on the shoes\nLinda's father: stay on the sofa; wait for", "source": "I am Linda. Now is 3:00 in the afternoon. My mother is trying the shoes, and my father is staying on the sofa to wait for my mom. In the shop, a litter girl is buying some food, and a young lady is looking at a dress.", "summary": null, "target": "I am Linda. It is now 3:00 in the afternoon. My mother is trying on the shoes, and my father is staying on the sofa to wait for my mom. In the shop, a little girl is buying some food, and a young lady is looking at a dress." }
{ "annotator": 10478, "digressive": null, "edits": [ { "correct_sentence": "I like to listen to music.", "correction": "to", "error": "", "error_description": "Nonfinite Verb Form Error: When a verb follows the verb 〈like〉, the infinitive form 'to do' is usually required, not the base form 〈listen〉; 'like to do something' is also a fixed English expression. Thus, there is a nonfinite verb form error here. 〈I like listen〉 should be changed to 『I like to listen』 to comply with English grammar rules.", "error_sentence": "I like listen to music.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Nonfinite Verb Form Error", "index": 0 }, { "correct_sentence": "Because it makes me happy.", "correction": "Because", "error": "Becase", "error_description": "Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, the intention here is to express 'because'. The word 〈Becase〉 in the original sentence is misspelled and should be corrected to 『Because』 to conform to standard English spelling rules.", "error_sentence": "Becase it makes me happy.", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Spelling Error", "index": 1 }, { "correct_sentence": "Linda likes reading story books.", "correction": "reading", "error": "read", "error_description": "Nonfinite Verb Form Error: The verb 〈likes〉 is followed by the gerund form to express a habitual action. Therefore, there is a nonfinite verb form error here. 〈read〉 needs to be changed to 『reading』, forming 『likes reading』 to comply with English grammar rules.", "error_sentence": "Linda likes read story books.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Nonfinite Verb Form Error", "index": 2 }, { "correct_sentence": "Jack likes to play basketball.", "correction": "to", "error": "", "error_description": "Nonfinite Verb Form Error: When a verb follows the verb 〈likes〉, the infinitive form 'to do' is usually required, not the base form 〈play〉. Therefore, there is a nonfinite verb form error here. 〈likes play〉 should be changed to 『likes to play』 to comply with English grammar rules.", "error_sentence": "Jack likes play basketball.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Nonfinite Verb Form Error", "index": 3 } ], "index": 30, "question_id": 245237, "question_prompt": "Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay.\nBased on the information provided by Tina below, assume you are Tina. Describe the hobbies of the three of you (Tina, Linda, and Jack) and explain the reasons.\nWriting hints:\nTina: listen to music\nLinda: read story books\nJack: play basketball", "source": "I'm Tina. I like listen to music. Becase it makes me happy. Linda likes read story books. Because she has many toys. Jack likes play basketball. Because he is a sunshine boy.", "summary": null, "target": "I'm Tina. I like to listen to music. Because it makes me happy. Linda likes reading story books. Because she has many toys. Jack likes to play basketball. Because he is a sunshine boy." }
{ "annotator": 10478, "digressive": null, "edits": [ { "correct_sentence": "Goods in Mr. Cool's Store are very cheap.", "correction": "Goods in", "error": "", "error_description": "Sentence Structure Error: 〈Store〉 as a building cannot be described as 'cheap', so it cannot be the subject here; according to the semantics, it should refer to 'the goods in the store are cheap', so the subject is missing; therefore, adding 『Goods in』 before 〈Mr, Cool's〉 as the subject makes the sentence structure complete and clearly expresses that the store's goods are cheap.", "error_sentence": "Mr. Cool's Store is very cheap.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Sentence Structure Error", "index": 0 }, { "correct_sentence": "Goods in Mr. Cool's Store are very cheap.", "correction": "are", "error": "is", "error_description": "Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject here is the collective noun 'Goods', which requires a plural verb form; therefore, there is a subject-verb agreement error, and 〈is〉 needs to be changed to 『are』 to comply with English grammar rules.", "error_sentence": "Mr. Cool's Store is very cheap.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Subject-Verb Agreement Error", "index": 1 }, { "correct_sentence": "All kinds of different colored sweaters only sell for 30 yuan.", "correction": "colored", "error": "colours'", "error_description": "PoS Confusion Error: The adjective form of color should be used here to modify sweaters, meaning 'colored sweaters'; in the original text, the noun possessive 〈colours'〉 is misused as an adjective, resulting in a morphology error; therefore, it should be changed to the adjective 『colored』 to modify the noun 〈sweaters〉.", "error_sentence": "All kinds of different colours' sweaters only sell 30 yuan.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "PoS Confusion Error", "index": 2 }, { "correct_sentence": "All kinds of different colored sweaters only sell for 30 yuan.", "correction": "for", "error": "", "error_description": "Preposition Error: The verb 〈sell〉 needs to be paired with the preposition 'for' to form the fixed phrase 〈sell for + price〉 to indicate the price; therefore, a preposition is missing in this sentence, and 『for』 needs to be added after 〈sell〉 to conform to the English fixed phrase.", "error_sentence": "All kinds of different colours' sweaters only sell 30 yuan.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Preposition Error", "index": 3 }, { "correct_sentence": "Shorts sell for only 20 yuan.", "correction": "sell for only", "error": "only sell", "error_description": "① Preposition Error: In English, the verb 〈sell〉 needs to be paired with the preposition 'for' to form the fixed phrase 〈sell for + price〉 to indicate the price; therefore, a preposition is missing in this sentence, and 〈sell〉 needs to be changed to 『sell for』 to conform to the English fixed phrase; ② Word Order Error: The adverb 〈only〉 should be placed after the prepositional phrase and before the specific price to clearly modify the price; therefore, this sentence should be changed to 『sell for only』 to conform to the standard order of modification in English.", "error_sentence": "Shorts only sell 20 yuan.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Word Order Error", "index": 4 }, { "correct_sentence": "T-shirts sell for only 25 yuan.", "correction": "shirts sell for only", "error": "shirt only sell", "error_description": "① Noun Number Error: As a countable noun, 〈T-shirt〉 should be in the plural form 『T-shirts』 here to express a general sense, conforming to English expression habits; ② Word Order Error: 〈only〉 should be placed before the specific price 〈25 yuan〉 to emphasize the cheapness of the price; therefore, 『only』 should be added before 〈25 yuan〉 to conform to the standard order of modification in English; ③ Preposition Error: In English, the verb 〈sell〉 needs to be paired with the preposition 'for' to form the fixed phrase 'sell for + price' to indicate the price; therefore, a preposition is missing in this sentence, and 〈sell〉 needs to be changed to 『sell for』 to conform to the English fixed phrase.", "error_sentence": "T-shirt only sell 25 yuan.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Word Order Error", "index": 5 }, { "correct_sentence": "Big bags sell for 35 yuan and small bags sell for 20 yuan.", "correction": "for", "error": "", "error_description": "Preposition Error: In English, the verb 〈sell〉 needs to be paired with the preposition 'for' to form the fixed phrase 〈sell for + price〉 to indicate the price; therefore, a preposition is missing in this sentence, and 〈sell〉 needs to be changed to 『sell for』 to conform to the English fixed phrase.", "error_sentence": "Big bags sell 35 yuan and samll bags sell 20 yuan.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Preposition Error", "index": 6 }, { "correct_sentence": "Big bags sell for 35 yuan and small bags sell for 20 yuan.", "correction": "small", "error": "samll", "error_description": "Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, the intention here is to express 'small'; therefore, the word 〈samll〉 is misspelled and should be changed to 『small』 to fit the semantics.", "error_sentence": "Big bags sell 35 yuan and samll bags sell 20 yuan.", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Spelling Error", "index": 7 }, { "correct_sentence": "Big bags sell for 35 yuan and small bags sell for 20 yuan.", "correction": "for", "error": "", "error_description": "Preposition Error: In English, the verb 〈sell〉 needs to be paired with the preposition 'for' to form the fixed phrase 〈sell for + price〉 to indicate the price; therefore, a preposition is missing in this sentence, and 〈sell〉 needs to be changed to 『sell for』 to conform to the English fixed phrase.", "error_sentence": "Big bags sell 35 yuan and samll bags sell 20 yuan.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Preposition Error", "index": 8 }, { "correct_sentence": "There are many beautiful shoes and skirts.", "correction": "skirts", "error": "skirt", "error_description": "Noun Number Error: In this sentence, 〈and〉 connects two parallel components, whose number needs to be consistent; the preceding noun is plural 〈shoes〉, so 〈skirt〉, as a countable noun, also needs to be in the plural form; therefore, there is a noun number error here, and the singular noun 〈skirt〉 needs to be changed to the plural noun 『skirts』 to conform to English grammar rules.", "error_sentence": "There are many beautiful shoes and skirt.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Noun Number Error", "index": 9 }, { "correct_sentence": "Welcome to the store.", "correction": "the store", "error": "here", "error_description": "Noun Error: Here, 〈here〉 is an adverb, and an adverb cannot directly serve as the object of the preposition 〈to〉; according to the context, it refers to 'the store'; therefore, 〈here〉 needs to be replaced with a corresponding noun or pronoun; since it specifically refers to 'that store', 〈here〉 should be changed to 『the store』 to conform to English grammar rules and contextual meaning.", "error_sentence": "Welcome to here.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Noun Error", "index": 10 } ], "index": 31, "question_id": 246928, "question_prompt": "Using the information provided in Chinese and referring to the picture, write a short essay.\nMr. Cool's Clothes Store is having a big sale with great discounts. Sweaters in various colors are only 30 yuan, shorts are only 20 yuan, and shirts are only 25 yuan. Large bags sell for 35 yuan, and small bags for 20 yuan. There are also many beautiful shoes and skirts available. Welcome to shop.", "source": "Mr. Cool's Store is very cheap. All kinds of different colours' sweaters only sell 30 yuan. Shorts only sell 20 yuan. T-shirt only sell 25 yuan. Big bags sell 35 yuan and samll bags sell 20 yuan. There are many beautiful shoes and skirt. Welcome to here.", "summary": null, "target": "Goods in Mr. Cool's Store are very cheap. All kinds of different colored sweaters only sell for 30 yuan. Shorts sell for only 20 yuan. T-shirts sell for only 25 yuan. Big bags sell for 35 yuan and small bags sell for 20 yuan. There are many beautiful shoes and skirts. Welcome to the store." }
{ "annotator": 10478, "digressive": null, "edits": [ { "correct_sentence": "I go to school at 8:00.", "correction": "", "error": "will", "error_description": "Verb Tense Error: According to the context, the time adverbial 〈at 8:00〉 indicates a 'daily routine/habit', which is typically expressed using the simple present tense in English. Therefore, there is a verb tense error; the simple future tense 〈will go〉 should be changed to the simple present tense 『go』 to better conform to English expression habits.", "error_sentence": "I will go to school at 8:00.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Verb Tense Error", "index": 0 }, { "correct_sentence": "I begin class.", "correction": "begin", "error": "am begin to", "error_description": "① Auxiliary Error: As a verb, 〈begin〉 in the simple present tense does not require the auxiliary verb 〈am〉; therefore, 〈am begin〉 should be changed to 『begin』 to comply with English grammar rules; ② Nonfinite Verb Form Error: 〈begin〉 can be directly followed by a noun to mean 'start something'; thus, 'start class' can be expressed directly as begin class, so 〈to class〉 should be changed to 『class』 to better conform to English grammar norms.", "error_sentence": "I am begin to class.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Nonfinite Verb Form Error", "index": 1 }, { "correct_sentence": "I have four classes in the morning and four classes in the afternoon.", "correction": "classes", "error": "class", "error_description": "Noun Number Error: The numeral 〈four〉 should be followed by a plural noun; therefore, the countable noun 〈class〉 needs to be in its plural form, changed to 『classes』 to maintain number agreement according to English grammar.", "error_sentence": "I have four class in the morning, the four class in the afteroon.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Noun Number Error", "index": 2 }, { "correct_sentence": "I have four classes in the morning and four classes in the afternoon.", "correction": "and four classes", "error": ", the four class", "error_description": "① Conjunction Error: The two parallel objects in this sentence need to be connected by the conjunction 〈and〉 to maintain coherence; therefore, 〈, the〉 should be changed to 『and』 to comply with English grammar; ② Noun Number Error: The numeral 〈four〉 should be followed by a plural noun; therefore, the countable noun 〈class〉 needs to be in its plural form, changed to 『classes』 to maintain number agreement according to English grammar.", "error_sentence": "I have four class in the morning, the four class in the afteroon.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Conjunction Error", "index": 3 }, { "correct_sentence": "I have four classes in the morning and four classes in the afternoon.", "correction": "afternoon", "error": "afteroon", "error_description": "Spelling Error: According to the sentence's meaning, the intention is to express 'afternoon'; therefore, 〈afteroon〉 in the original sentence is a spelling error and should be corrected to the proper spelling 『afternoon』 to comply with English spelling conventions.", "error_sentence": "I have four class in the morning, the four class in the afteroon.", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Spelling Error", "index": 4 }, { "correct_sentence": "I have lunch in the school canteen at 12:00.", "correction": "in the", "error": "on", "error_description": "① Preposition Error: In English, when expressing 'eating in the canteen', the preposition 『in』 should be used instead of 〈on〉, so 〈on〉 must be changed to 『in』 to conform to the standard collocation for this prepositional phrase; ② Determiner Error: In English, when referring to a specific item, a definite article is needed before it; therefore, the definite article 『the』 should be added before the singular countable noun 〈school canteen〉 to specify the school canteen and satisfy the usage rules for countable nouns.", "error_sentence": "I have lunch on school canteen at 12:00.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Preposition Error", "index": 5 }, { "correct_sentence": "I go home after school.", "correction": "", "error": "am", "error_description": "Auxiliary Error: According to the context, the simple present tense is required here. The redundant auxiliary verb 〈am〉 combined with the base form verb 〈go〉 forms an incorrect structure; therefore, there is an auxiliary error, and 〈am〉 needs to be deleted to form the correct simple present tense 『go』 according to English grammar.", "error_sentence": "I am go home at after school.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Auxiliary Error", "index": 6 }, { "correct_sentence": "I go home after school.", "correction": "", "error": "at", "error_description": "Word Redundancy Error: In English, 〈after school〉 means 'after school' and is a fixed phrase, typically used as a time adverbial at the end of a sentence; therefore, the redundant preposition 〈at〉 needs to be deleted to conform to the fixed English expression for 'after school'.", "error_sentence": "I am go home at after school.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Word Redundancy Error", "index": 7 } ], "index": 32, "question_id": 244244, "question_prompt": "Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Assume you are Tina; introduce your Monday routine to everyone. Writing hints: get up; have breakfast; go to school; begin; have lunch; go home.", "source": "I get up at 7:00. I wash my head and face . I have breakfast at 7:25. I will go to school at 8:00. I am begin to class. I have four class in the morning, the four class in the afteroon. I have lunch on school canteen at 12:00. I am go home at after school.", "summary": null, "target": "I get up at 7:00. I wash my head and face. I have breakfast at 7:25. I go to school at 8:00. I begin class. I have four classes in the morning and four classes in the afternoon. I have lunch in the school canteen at 12:00. I go home after school." }
{ "annotator": 10478, "digressive": null, "edits": [ { "correct_sentence": "Last Sunday, my friends and I went on a picnic in the park.", "correction": ", my friends and I went", "error": ". I and my friend go", "error_description": "① Punctuation Error: 〈Last Sunday〉 is a time adverbial and should be followed by a comma, not a period, when preceding the main clause; change 〈.〉 to 『,』.; ② Word Order Error: English convention places others before 'I' for politeness; change 〈I and my friend〉 to 『my friends and I』.; ③ Noun Number Error: The prompt implies plural friends, so the singular noun 〈my friend〉 should be changed to the plural 『my friends』.; ④ Verb Tense Error: The context describes a past event, requiring the simple past tense; change the verb 〈go〉 to its past form 『went』.", "error_sentence": "Last Sunday. I and my friend go on a picnic in the park.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Word Order Error", "index": 0 }, { "correct_sentence": "In the afternoon, it was rainy.", "correction": "the afternoon, it was", "error": "afternoon is", "error_description": "① Determiner Error: The fixed phrase is 'in the afternoon', requiring the definite article 『the』 before 〈afternoon〉.; ② Punctuation Error: When the time adverbial 『In the afternoon』 starts a sentence, it should be followed by a comma 『,』.; ③ Pronoun Error: The prepositional phrase 〈In afternoon〉 cannot be the subject; the sentence lacks a subject. Add the formal subject 『it』 before 〈is〉.; ④ Verb Tense Error: The context is past tense, so the verb 〈is〉 should be changed to its past form 『was』.", "error_sentence": "In afternoon is rainy.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Verb Tense Error", "index": 1 }, { "correct_sentence": "I didn't have an umbrella.", "correction": "didn't have an", "error": "haven't got", "error_description": "① Verb Tense Error: Describing a past event requires the simple past tense; change the present perfect 〈haven't got〉 to the simple past 『didn't have』.; ② Verb Choice Error: 'have got' is present tense and cannot be negated with 『didn't』; change 〈haven't got〉 to 『didn't have』.; ③ Determiner Error: The singular countable noun 〈umbrella〉 requires the indefinite article 『an』.", "error_sentence": "I haven't got umbrella.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Verb Choice Error", "index": 2 }, { "correct_sentence": "I got wet.", "correction": "got", "error": "", "error_description": "Verb Choice Error: The intended meaning is 'I got wet', but the sentence lacks a predicate verb; add 『got』 to form the structure 〈get wet〉 for a complete sentence according to English syntax.", "error_sentence": "I wet.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Verb Choice Error", "index": 3 }, { "correct_sentence": "I felt very cold and had a headache.", "correction": "felt", "error": "feel", "error_description": "Verb Tense Error: The context indicates a past event, requiring the simple past tense; change the simple present verb 〈feel〉 to the simple past 『felt』 to match the tense.", "error_sentence": "I feel very cold and headache.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Verb Tense Error", "index": 4 }, { "correct_sentence": "I felt very cold and had a headache.", "correction": "had a", "error": "", "error_description": "① Verb Choice Error: The fixed phrase is 'have a headache'; the verb 'have' is missing. The context requires the past tense, so add 『had a』 before 〈headache〉 to form a complete verb-object structure and match the tense.; ② Determiner Error: The countable noun 〈headache〉 requires the indefinite article 『a』 as per grammar rules and the fixed phrase.", "error_sentence": "I feel very cold and headache.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Verb Choice Error", "index": 5 } ], "index": 33, "question_id": 254637, "question_prompt": "Based on the given hints and referring to the picture, write a short essay.\nLast Sunday, I went for a picnic in the park with my friends. It started raining in the afternoon. I forgot my umbrella and got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to go home and rest well.\nWriting hints: picnic; rain; umbrella; get wet; hospital; fever; medicine.", "source": "Last Sunday. I and my friend go on a picnic in the park. In afternoon is rainy. I haven't got umbrella. I wet. I feel very cold and headache.", "summary": null, "target": "Last Sunday, my friends and I went on a picnic in the park. In the afternoon, it was rainy. I didn't have an umbrella. I got wet. I felt very cold and had a headache." }
{ "annotator": 9759, "digressive": null, "edits": [ { "correct_sentence": "I'm going to do homework on the weekend.", "correction": "on", "error": "in", "error_description": "Preposition Error: According to English fixed expressions, 'on the weekend' is typically used to mean '在周末', not 〈in the weekend〉.", "error_sentence": "I'm going to do homework in the weekend.", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Preposition Error", "index": 0 }, { "correct_sentence": "On Saturday, I will clean the house.", "correction": "On", "error": "", "error_description": "Preposition Error: 〈Saturday〉 cannot function alone as a time adverbial in the sentence; it requires the preposition 『On』 before it. Therefore, 『On』 is added to complete the adverbial phrase structure and comply with English grammar rules.", "error_sentence": "I'm going to do homework in the weekend. Saturday, It is do cleaning the home.", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Preposition Error", "index": 1 }, { "correct_sentence": "On Saturday, I will clean the house. On Sunday morning, we will visit my grandparents.", "correction": "I will clean the house. On", "error": "It is do cleaning the home.", "error_description": "① Sentence Structure Error: An English sentence can only have one main verb. The original sentence 〈It is do cleaning〉 has a double verb structure and lacks a logical subject. Therefore, the subject 『I』 is added, and following the prompt's requirement for future tense, the structure is changed to the clear subject-verb form 『I will clean』.; ② Noun Error: The common phrase for '清洁房子' is 'clean the house'. 〈home〉 is an uncountable noun and does not fit the intended meaning here; the specific noun 『house』 should be used.; ③ Preposition Error: 〈Sunday morning〉 cannot function alone as a time adverbial; it requires the preposition 『On』 before it. Therefore, 『On』 is added to complete the time adverbial structure and comply with English grammar rules.", "error_sentence": "Saturday, It is do cleaning the home.", "error_severity": 4, "error_type": "Sentence Structure Error", "index": 2 }, { "correct_sentence": "On Sunday morning, we will visit my grandparents.", "correction": ", we will", "error": ". We", "error_description": "① Punctuation Error: 〈Sunday morning〉 acts as a time adverbial modifying the main clause 〈We visit...〉; they should not be separated by a period but connected with a comma. Therefore, the period 〈.〉 is incorrectly used and should be changed to a comma 『,』.; ② Case Error: Because there is a preceding time adverbial phrase, 〈We visit my grandparents〉 is not a standalone sentence, so 〈We〉 should not be capitalized and needs to be changed to lowercase 『we』.; ③ Verb Tense Error: 〈We visit my grandparents〉 is in the simple present tense. According to the prompt's requirement, it should be changed to the simple future tense, hence corrected to 『we will』.", "error_sentence": "Sunday morning. We visit my grandparents.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Verb Tense Error", "index": 3 }, { "correct_sentence": "At night, I will fly a kite.", "correction": "At night,", "error": "In night.", "error_description": "① Preposition Error: In English, 『At night』 is a fixed expression meaning '在晚上'; there is no such expression as 〈In night〉. Therefore, 〈In night〉 should be changed to 『At night』.; ② Punctuation Error: 『At night』 is a time adverbial and should be separated from the following main clause by a comma 『,』, not a period.", "error_sentence": "In night.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Preposition Error", "index": 4 }, { "correct_sentence": "This weekend, I am going to have a good time.", "correction": ", I am going to", "error": "is", "error_description": "① Punctuation Error: The preceding adverbial phrase 〈This weekend〉 should be separated from the following sentence 『I am going to have a good time』 by a comma for structural clarity. Therefore, a comma 『,』 is added after 〈This weekend〉.; ② Sentence Structure Error: The sentence 〈This weekend is have a good time〉 is a run-on sentence with a confused structure, containing two verbs 〈is〉 and 〈have〉, which violates grammatical rules. The subject 『I』 needs to be added, and considering the overall future tense context, it should be changed to 『I am going to have a good time』 to express the complete intended action.", "error_sentence": "This weekend is have a good time.", "error_severity": 4, "error_type": "Sentence Structure Error", "index": 5 } ], "index": 35, "question_id": 270915, "question_prompt": "The weekend is coming. Classmates, what are you planning to do? Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay of about 60 words about your plans for the weekend.\nWriting hints: be going to; do cleaning; visit grandparents; have a good time", "source": "I'm going to do homework in the weekend. Saturday, It is do cleaning the home. Sunday morning. We visit my grandparents. In night. I will fly a kite. This weekend is have a good time.", "summary": null, "target": "I'm going to do homework on the weekend. On Saturday, I will clean the house. On Sunday morning, we will visit my grandparents. At night, I will fly a kite. This weekend, I am going to have a good time." }
{ "annotator": 9759, "digressive": null, "edits": [ { "correct_sentence": "On Saturday, Tom will do his homework at 9:30.", "correction": "will do", "error": "does", "error_description": "Verb Tense Error: The prompt requires the use of the simple future tense to describe Tom's activities next weekend, but the original sentence uses the simple present tense, which is a tense error. According to the prompt's requirement, the simple present tense 〈does〉 needs to be changed to the future tense 『will do』.", "error_sentence": "On Saturday , Tom does his homework at 9:30 .", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Verb Tense Error", "index": 0 }, { "correct_sentence": "At 11:00, he will watch TV.", "correction": "will", "error": "", "error_description": "Auxiliary Error: The prompt requires the use of the simple future tense to describe Tom's activities next weekend. The sentence only has the verb 〈watch〉 after the subject, lacking the auxiliary verb 〈will〉 to form the simple future tense structure. Therefore, 『will』 needs to be added before 〈watch〉 to complete the tense conversion.", "error_sentence": "At 11:00 , he watch TV .", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Auxiliary Error", "index": 1 }, { "correct_sentence": "He will go to the park in the afternoon.", "correction": "will", "error": "", "error_description": "Auxiliary Error: The prompt requires the use of the simple future tense to describe Tom's activities next weekend. The sentence only has the verb 〈go〉 after the subject, lacking the auxiliary verb 〈will〉 to form the simple future tense. Therefore, 『will』 needs to be added before 〈go〉 to complete the tense conversion.", "error_sentence": "He go to park in the afternoon .", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Auxiliary Error", "index": 2 }, { "correct_sentence": "He will go to the park in the afternoon.", "correction": "the", "error": "", "error_description": "Determiner Error: In English, countable nouns need to be modified by a determiner. This sentence specifically refers to 'a certain park', so 『the』 needs to be added before 〈park〉, changing it to 『go to the park』.", "error_sentence": "He go to park in the afternoon .", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Determiner Error", "index": 3 }, { "correct_sentence": "On Sunday, he will clean his room.", "correction": "will clean", "error": "cleans", "error_description": "Verb Tense Error: The prompt requires the use of the simple future tense to describe Tom's activities next weekend, but the verb in the original sentence uses the simple present tense, which is a tense error. According to the prompt's requirement, the simple present tense verb 〈cleans〉 needs to be changed to the simple future tense 『will clean』.", "error_sentence": "On Sunday , he cleans his room .", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Verb Tense Error", "index": 4 }, { "correct_sentence": "He will play basketball at 14:00.", "correction": "will", "error": "", "error_description": "Auxiliary Error: The prompt requires the use of the simple future tense to describe Tom's activities next weekend. The sentence only has the verb 〈play〉 after the subject, lacking the auxiliary verb 〈will〉 to form the simple future tense. Therefore, 『will』 needs to be added before 〈play〉 to complete the tense conversion.", "error_sentence": "He play basketball at 14:00 .", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Auxiliary Error", "index": 5 }, { "correct_sentence": "Finally, he will have a bath at 18:00.", "correction": "Finally", "error": "Finaly", "error_description": "Spelling Error: According to English spelling rules, the word 〈Finaly〉 is misspelled; it is missing the letter l before 〈y〉. The correct spelling should be 『Finally』 'lastly'.", "error_sentence": "Finaly , he has a bath at 18:00 .", "error_severity": 1, "error_type": "Spelling Error", "index": 6 }, { "correct_sentence": "Finally, he will have a bath at 18:00.", "correction": "will have", "error": "has", "error_description": "Verb Tense Error: The prompt requires the use of the simple future tense to describe Tom's activities next weekend, but the verb in the original sentence uses the simple present tense 〈has〉, which is a tense error. According to the prompt's requirement, the simple present tense verb 〈has〉 needs to be changed to the simple future tense 『will have』.", "error_sentence": "Finaly , he has a bath at 18:00 .", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Verb Tense Error", "index": 7 } ], "index": 37, "question_id": 246671, "question_prompt": "Written Expression.\nUsing the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay.\nBased on the information provided by Tom below, and referring to the picture, describe Tom's activities for next weekend using the simple future tense:\nWriting hints:\nOn Saturday: do his homework 9:30; watch TV 11:00; go to the park in the afternoon\nOn Sunday: clean his room 10:00; play basketball 14:00; have a bath 18:00", "source": "On Saturday , Tom does his homework at 9:30 . At 11:00 , he watch TV . He go to park in the afternoon . On Sunday , he cleans his room . He play basketball at 14:00 . Finaly , he has a bath at 18:00 .", "summary": null, "target": "On Saturday, Tom will do his homework at 9:30. At 11:00, he will watch TV. He will go to the park in the afternoon. On Sunday, he will clean his room. He will play basketball at 14:00. Finally, he will have a bath at 18:00." }
{ "annotator": 9759, "digressive": null, "edits": [ { "correct_sentence": "My classmate wears a beautiful shirt and pink shoes.", "correction": "wears a", "error": "wear", "error_description": "① Subject-Verb Agreement Error: In English, when the subject is third-person singular, the present simple verb usually takes an '-s' or '-es' ending (i.e., use the third-person singular form). Here the subject 〈My classmate〉 is singular, therefore using the base form of the verb causes a subject-verb agreement error; 〈wear〉 needs to be changed to the third-person singular form 『wears』; ② Determiner Error: In English, countable nouns require a determiner. Here the noun 〈shirt〉 is a singular countable noun, it needs the article 『a』 before it to mean 'a shirt'.", "error_sentence": "My classmate wear beautiful shirt and pink shoes.", "error_severity": 4, "error_type": "Subject-Verb Agreement Error", "index": 0 }, { "correct_sentence": "She likes her shirt and shoes very much.", "correction": "likes", "error": "like", "error_description": "Subject-Verb Agreement Error: In English, when the subject is third-person singular, the present simple verb usually takes an '-s' or '-es' ending (i.e., use the third-person singular form). Here the subject 〈She〉 is singular, therefore using the base form of the verb 〈like〉 causes a subject-verb agreement error; 〈like〉 needs to be changed to the third-person singular form 『likes』.", "error_sentence": "She like her shirt and shoes are very much.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Subject-Verb Agreement Error", "index": 1 }, { "correct_sentence": "She likes her shirt and shoes very much.", "correction": "", "error": "are", "error_description": "Auxiliary Error: One of the basic structures of an English simple sentence is subject-verb-object. The original sentence already has the verb 〈likes〉; using the linking verb 〈are〉 afterwards leads to a sentence structure error. The correct expression is to directly use the verb 〈likes〉 followed by the object; the redundant auxiliary verb 〈are〉 needs to be deleted to conform to the English simple sentence structure.", "error_sentence": "She like her shirt and shoes are very much.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Auxiliary Error", "index": 2 } ], "index": 38, "question_id": 255734, "question_prompt": "Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.\nWriting hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like", "source": "My classmate wear beautiful shirt and pink shoes. Her shirt is white. She like her shirt and shoes are very much.", "summary": null, "target": "My classmate wears a beautiful shirt and pink shoes. Her shirt is white. She likes her shirt and shoes very much." }
{ "annotator": 9759, "digressive": null, "edits": [ { "correct_sentence": "Hi, I am Tina.", "correction": ",", "error": ".", "error_description": "Punctuation Error: In English, 〈Hi〉 is usually followed by a comma, which represents a natural pause in speech and fits the flow of conversation better than a period. Using a period, as in 〈Hi. I am Tina.〉, can make the tone seem more abrupt, formal, or cold, similar to sending two separate messages. However, in formal writing, a comma is still recommended. Therefore, 〈Hi〉 should be followed by a comma 『,』 instead of a period 〈.〉.", "error_sentence": "Hi.", "error_severity": 1, "error_type": "Punctuation Error", "index": 0 }, { "correct_sentence": "I get up at 6 o'clock, have breakfast at 7 o'clock and then go to school.", "correction": "then", "error": "than I want to", "error_description": "① Conjunction Error: The English word 〈than〉 means 'compared to...' and is a conjunction used for comparison. Here it is misused for the adverb 『then』, which indicates time sequence, so it should be changed to 『then』; ② Word Redundancy Error: 〈I want to〉 is unnecessary in this context and should be deleted, allowing 〈and then go to school〉 to form a parallel structure with the preceding phrases 〈get up at 6 o'clock, have breakfast at 7 o'clock〉.", "error_sentence": "I get up at 6 o'clock, have breakfast at 7 o'clock and than I want to go to school.", "error_severity": 4, "error_type": "Word Redundancy Error", "index": 1 }, { "correct_sentence": "I read books, draw cartoons and play tennis.", "correction": "books, draw cartoons", "error": "book, drow cantoo", "error_description": "① Noun Number Error: In English, countable nouns typically require a determiner. 〈book〉 is a singular countable noun and needs a determiner. 〈read book〉 is incorrect; it should be changed to 『read a book』 or 『read books』. Using 『read books』 indicates reading multiple books; ② Spelling Error: 〈drow〉 is misspelled; the correct spelling is 『draw』; ③ Spelling Error: 〈cantoo〉 is misspelled; the correct spelling is 『cartoon』. The plural form 〈cartoons〉 is used here to maintain parallelism with 『books』.", "error_sentence": "I read book, drow cantoo and play tinis.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Noun Number Error", "index": 2 }, { "correct_sentence": "I read books, draw cartoons and play tennis.", "correction": "tennis", "error": "tinis", "error_description": "Spelling Error: 〈tinis〉 is misspelled; the correct spelling is 『tennis』, meaning '网球'. 〈play tennis〉 is a fixed phrase meaning 'play tennis'.", "error_sentence": "I read book, drow cantoo and play tinis.", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Spelling Error", "index": 3 }, { "correct_sentence": "I go home at 5 o'clock and play with my toys.", "correction": "home", "error": "hame", "error_description": "Spelling Error: According to English spelling rules, 〈hame〉 is misspelled; the correct spelling is 『home』, meaning '家'.", "error_sentence": "I go hame at 5 o'clock and play with my tow.", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Spelling Error", "index": 4 }, { "correct_sentence": "I go home at 5 o'clock and play with my toys.", "correction": "toys", "error": "tow", "error_description": "Spelling Error: 〈tow〉 is misspelled; the correct spelling is 『toys』, meaning '玩具'. This is a spelling error. 『play with my toys』 is a fixed phrase meaning 'play with toys'.", "error_sentence": "I go hame at 5 o'clock and play with my tow.", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Spelling Error", "index": 5 }, { "correct_sentence": "How about you?", "correction": "about", "error": "are", "error_description": "Other Error: 〈How are you?〉 is typically used for initial greetings or asking about someone's current condition. 『How about you?』 is used to ask the same question back to the other person. In this context, the intention is to ask about the other person's Monday routine, so 『How about you?』 should be used for comparative inquiry, not 〈How are you?〉 which asks about their well-being. Therefore, this is an error related to fixed expressions based on meaning.", "error_sentence": "How are you?", "error_severity": 4, "error_type": "Other Error", "index": 6 } ], "index": 39, "question_id": 244244, "question_prompt": "Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Assume you are Tina; introduce your Monday routine to everyone. Writing hints: get up; have breakfast; go to school; begin; have lunch; go home.", "source": "Hi. I am Tina. Today is Monday. I get up at 6 o'clock, have breakfast at 7 o'clock and than I want to go to school. I read book, drow cantoo and play tinis. I go hame at 5 o'clock and play with my tow. I go to bed at 8 o'clock. This is my Monday. How are you?", "summary": null, "target": "Hi, I am Tina. Today is Monday. I get up at 6 o'clock, have breakfast at 7 o'clock and then go to school. I read books, draw cartoons and play tennis. I go home at 5 o'clock and play with my toys. I go to bed at 8 o'clock. This is my Monday. How about you?" }
{ "annotator": 10520, "digressive": null, "edits": [ { "correct_sentence": "On Sunday, he is going to clean his room first at 10:00 a.m. At 14:00, he is going to play basketball for half an hour.", "correction": "first at 10:00 a.m. At 14:00", "error": "frist at 10:00a.m.At14:00", "error_description": "① Spelling Error: According to English spelling rules, the English word for '首先', 〈frist〉, is misspelled; it needs to be corrected to 『first』 to conform to English spelling rules. ② Space Error: The time expression 〈10:00a.m.〉 should have a space between the specific time and the time marker abbreviation; change it to 『10:00 a.m.』. ③ Space Error: The time adverbial 〈At14:00〉 lacks a space; a space should be added between the preposition and the specific time, changing it to 『At 14:00』 to conform to English expression norms.", "error_sentence": "On Sunday, he is going to clean his room frist at 10:00a.m. At14:00, he is going to play basketball for half an hour.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Spelling Error", "index": 0 }, { "correct_sentence": "In the evening, he is going to have a bath at 18:00 and go to bed early.", "correction": "at 18:00", "error": "at18:0o", "error_description": "① Space Error: According to English syntax rules, words need to be separated by spaces; the time adverbial 〈at18:00〉 lacks a space after the preposition; it should be changed to 『at 18:00』 to conform to English syntax rules. ② Spelling Error: According to English spelling rules, in the time expression 〈18:0o〉, the numeral 〈0〉 is mistakenly written as the letter 〈o〉; it should be changed to 『18:00』 to conform to correct English time expression spelling rules.", "error_sentence": "In the evening, he is going to have a bath at18:0o and go to the bed ealy.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Spelling Error", "index": 1 }, { "correct_sentence": "In the evening, he is going to have a bath at 18:00 and go to bed early.", "correction": "bed early", "error": "the bed ealy", "error_description": "① Determiner Error: According to the English fixed phrase, 'go to bed' means '去睡觉'; the fixed phrase 〈go to bed〉 does not require the article 〈the〉; therefore, the redundant 『the』 should be deleted to conform to the English fixed phrase. ② Spelling Error: According to English spelling rules, the word 'early' means '早一点'; here, 〈ealy〉 is misspelled; it should be changed to 『early』 to conform to English spelling rules.", "error_sentence": "In the evening, he is going to have a bath at18:0o and go to the bed ealy.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Determiner Error", "index": 2 } ], "index": 40, "question_id": 246671, "question_prompt": "Written Expression.\nUsing the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay.\nBased on the information provided by Tom below, and referring to the picture, describe Tom's activities for next weekend using the simple future tense:\nWriting hints:\nOn Saturday: do his homework 9:30; watch TV 11:00; go to the park in the afternoon\nOn Sunday: clean his room 10:00; play basketball 14:00; have a bath 18:00", "source": "Tom has a plan for next weekend . On Saturday, he is going to do his homework at 9:30 in the morning. He is going to relax by watching TV at 11:00. In the afternoon he's going to the park with his friends. On Sunday, he is going to clean his room frist at 10:00a.m.At14:00, he is going to play basketball for half an hour. In the evening, he is going to have a bath at18:0o and go to the bed ealy.", "summary": null, "target": "Tom has a plan for next weekend. On Saturday, he is going to do his homework at 9:30 in the morning. He is going to relax by watching TV at 11:00. In the afternoon he's going to the park with his friends. On Sunday, he is going to clean his room first at 10:00 a.m. At 14:00, he is going to play basketball for half an hour. In the evening, he is going to have a bath at 18:00 and go to bed early." }
{ "annotator": 10520, "digressive": null, "edits": [ { "correct_sentence": "The clothes in Mr. Cool's Clothes Store are very cheap.", "correction": "The clothes in Mr. Cool", "error": "Mr. cool", "error_description": "① Case Error: According to English writing conventions and the prompt, 〈Mr. cool's Clothes Store〉 is a proper noun, and the first letter of 〈cool〉 in the proper noun 〈Mr. cool〉 should be capitalized; 〈cool〉 needs to be changed to 『Cool』 to comply with English writing conventions; ② Sentence Structure Error: The original sentence structure is incomplete; according to the prompt, it refers to \"the clothes in the store are very cheap,\" where the subject is \"clothes,\" not \"the store\"; 〈Mr. cool's Clothes Store〉 needs to be changed to 『The clothes in Mr. Cool's Clothes Store』 to clarify the subject and complete the sentence structure.", "error_sentence": "Mr. cool's Clothes Store is very cheep , The kind of clothes is 30 dorllers.", "error_severity": 4, "error_type": "Sentence Structure Error", "index": 0 }, { "correct_sentence": "The clothes in Mr. Cool's Clothes Store are very cheap. All kinds of sweaters are 30 yuan each. Shorts are 20 yuan each.", "correction": "are very cheap. All kinds of sweaters are 30 yuan each. Shorts are 20 yuan each", "error": "is very cheep , The kind of clothes is 30 dorllers. short is 20 dorller", "error_description": "① Subject-Verb Agreement Error: As seen in the original sentence, the subject 〈The clothes〉 is plural, so the verb should not be 〈is〉; it should be changed to 『are』 to maintain subject-verb agreement; ② Spelling Error: The English word \"cheap\" means \"inexpensive\"; there is a spelling error here, so 〈cheep〉 needs to be changed to 『cheap』; ③ Space Error: According to English writing conventions, there should be no space between the final word and the end punctuation; therefore, 〈cheep ,〉 should be changed to 『cheap.』; ④ Punctuation Error: From the original sentence, the comma 〈,〉 connects two complete main clauses, so a comma alone cannot connect them; it needs to be changed to 『cheap.』; ⑤ Determiner Error: According to the prompt, the subject of this sentence is \"sweaters in various colors\"; the original phrase 〈The kind of clothes〉 is vague and does not express \"various kinds,\" so it needs to be changed to 『All』; ⑥ Noun Number Error: According to English determiner-noun agreement, when \"all\" modifies the countable noun 〈kind〉, it needs to be pluralized; it should be corrected to 『All kinds』 to specify the object clearly according to the prompt; ⑦ Noun Error: According to the prompt, this should mean \"sweaters in various colors\"; the original word 〈clothes〉 means \"clothing,\" which does not fit the meaning, so it should be changed to 『sweaters』 to match the prompt; ⑧ Subject-Verb Agreement Error: As seen in the original sentence, the subject 『sweaters』 is plural, so the verb should not be 〈is〉; it should be changed to 『are』 to maintain subject-verb agreement; ⑨ Noun Error: According to the prompt, the price unit here is not \"dollars\" but the Chinese currency unit \"yuan,\" so 〈dorllers〉 needs to be changed to 『yuan』; ⑩ Adverb Error: According to the prompt, the meaning here is \"each sweater costs only 30 yuan\"; the original sentence lacks a unit quantifier, so the adverb 『each』 needs to be added after the specific price, changing it to 『All kinds of sweaters are 30 yuan each.』 to clarify the quantity unit and make the meaning clearer; ⑪ Case Error: According to English writing conventions, 〈short〉 is at the beginning of an independent sentence, so its first letter needs to be capitalized; it should be changed to 『Shorts』 to comply with English syntax rules; ⑫ Noun Number Error: To refer to \"shorts\" sold in the store, the plural form is needed for generalization; therefore, 〈short〉 should be changed to 『Shorts』 to fit the meaning and syntax rules; ⑬ Subject-Verb Agreement Error: As seen in the original sentence, the subject 『Shorts』 is plural, so the verb should not be 〈is〉; it should be changed to 『are』 to maintain subject-verb agreement; ⑭ Noun Error: According to the prompt, the price unit here is not \"dollars\" but the Chinese currency unit \"yuan,\" so 〈dorllers〉 needs to be changed to 『yuan』; ⑮ Adverb Error: According to the prompt, the meaning here is \"each pair of shorts costs only 20 yuan\"; the original sentence lacks a unit quantifier, so the adverb 『each』 needs to be added after the specific price, changing it to 『Shorts are 20 yuan each』 to clarify the quantity unit and make the meaning clearer.", "error_sentence": "Mr. cool's Clothes Store is very cheep , The kind of clothes is 30 dorllers. short is 20 dorller.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Subject-Verb Agreement Error", "index": 1 }, { "correct_sentence": "T-shirts are 25 yuan each. Big bags are 35 yuan each. Small bags are 20 yuan each. And it has many shoes and skirts.", "correction": "shirts are 25 yuan each. Big bags are 35 yuan each. Small bags are 20 yuan each. And it has", "error": "shirtis 25 dorllers. big bag is 35 dorllers. smallbag is 20 dorslers, and have got", "error_description": "① Noun Number Error: According to the sentence meaning, it indicates \"the price of shirts\"; in English, this generally refers to the category rather than a single item, so the plural form \"shirts\" is needed; 〈T-shirtis〉 should be changed to 『T-shirts』; ② Space Error: According to English writing conventions, a standard single space should be kept between the subject and the verb; therefore, 〈shirtis〉 needs to be changed to 『shirts are』; ③ Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈T-shirts〉 is plural, so the verb should be 『are』 instead of 〈is〉 to maintain subject-verb agreement; ④ Noun Error: According to the prompt, the price unit here is not \"dollars\" but the Chinese currency unit \"yuan,\" so 〈dorllers〉 needs to be changed to 『yuan』; ⑤ Adverb Error: According to the prompt, this refers to \"the price of each shirt\"; the original sentence lacks a unit quantifier, so the adverb 『each』 needs to be added after the specific price, changing it to 『shirts are 25 yuan each.』 to clarify the quantity unit and make the meaning clearer; ⑥ Case Error: 〈big bags〉 is at the beginning of an independent sentence, so its first letter needs to be capitalized; it should be changed to 『Big bags』 to comply with English syntax rules; ⑦ Noun Number Error: According to the sentence meaning, it indicates \"the price of big bags\"; in English, this generally refers to the category rather than a single item, so the plural form \"bags\" is needed; 〈big bag〉 should be changed to 『Big bags』; ⑧ Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 『Big bags』 is plural, so the verb should be 『are』 instead of 〈is〉 to maintain subject-verb agreement; ⑨ Noun Error: According to the prompt, the price unit here is not \"dollars\" but the Chinese currency unit \"yuan,\" so 〈dorllers〉 needs to be changed to 『yuan』; ⑩ Adverb Error: According to the prompt, this refers to \"the price of each big bag\"; the original sentence lacks a unit quantifier, so the adverb 『each』 needs to be added after the specific price, changing it to 『Big bags are 35 yuan each.』 to clarify the quantity unit and make the meaning clearer; ⑪ Case Error: According to English writing conventions, 〈smallbag〉 is at the beginning of an independent sentence, so its first letter needs to be capitalized; it should be changed to 『Small bags』 to comply with English syntax rules; ⑫ Space Error: According to English writing conventions, a standard single space should be kept between the adjective and the noun; therefore, 〈smallbag〉 needs to be changed to 『Small bags』 to comply with writing conventions; ⑬ Noun Number Error: According to the sentence meaning, it indicates \"the price of small bags\"; in English, this generally refers to the category rather than a single item, so the plural form \"bags\" is needed; 〈smallbag〉 should be changed to 『Small bags』; ⑭ Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 『Small bags』 is plural, so the verb should be 『are』 instead of 〈is〉 to maintain subject-verb agreement; ⑮ Noun Error: According to the prompt, the price unit here is not \"dollars\" but the Chinese currency unit \"yuan,\" so 〈dorslers〉 needs to be changed to 『yuan』; ⑯ Punctuation Error: According to English syntax rules, two independent main clauses need to be connected by a period, not just a comma; therefore, 〈, and〉 needs to be changed to 『. And』; ⑰ Pronoun Error: From the original text, the subject of this sentence is \"Mr. Cool's Clothes Store,\" but the original sentence has a missing subject causing a run-on sentence; 〈and have got〉 lacks a clear subject, so the pronoun 『it』 needs to be added as the subject to refer to the store; ⑱ Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the added subject pronoun 『it』 is singular, so the verb should not be 〈have〉; it should be changed to 『has』 to maintain subject-verb agreement; ⑲ Word Redundancy Error: According to English grammar conventions, this sentence intends to express \"the clothing store has many shoes and skirts\"; the verb 〈have〉 itself indicates the state of \"possession,\" so the extra verb 〈got〉 is unnecessary and should be deleted to conform to the grammatical structure.", "error_sentence": "T-shirtis 25 dorllers. big bag is 35 dorllers. smallbag is 20 dorslers, and have got many shoes, skirt.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Word Redundancy Error", "index": 2 }, { "correct_sentence": "And it has many shoes and skirts.", "correction": "and skirts", "error": ", skirt", "error_description": "① Punctuation Error: According to English grammar and syntax rules, the last two elements in a parallel structure within the same sentence should be connected by a conjunction without a preceding comma; the comma 〈,〉 needs to be deleted to comply with English grammar and syntax rules; ② Conjunction Error: According to English grammar and syntax rules, the last two elements in a parallel structure within the same sentence should be connected by a conjunction; 〈, 〉 needs to be changed to 『and』 to comply with English grammar and syntax rules; ③ Noun Number Error: According to the prompt, this refers to \"many beautiful shoes and skirts\"; the plural form of the countable noun is required, so 〈skirt〉 needs to be changed to the plural 『skirts』 to match the prompt.", "error_sentence": "smallbag is 20 dorslers, and have got many shoes, skirt.", "error_severity": 4, "error_type": "Conjunction Error", "index": 3 } ], "index": 41, "question_id": 246928, "question_prompt": "Using the information provided in Chinese and referring to the picture, write a short essay.\nMr. Cool's Clothes Store is having a big sale with great discounts. Sweaters in various colors are only 30 yuan, shorts are only 20 yuan, and shirts are only 25 yuan. Large bags sell for 35 yuan, and small bags for 20 yuan. There are also many beautiful shoes and skirts available. Welcome to shop.", "source": "Mr. cool's Clothes Store is very cheep , The kind of clothes is 30 dorllers. short is 20 dorller. T-shirtis 25 dorllers. big bag is 35 dorllers. smallbag is 20 dorslers, and have got many shoes, skirt.", "summary": null, "target": "The clothes in Mr. Cool's Clothes Store are very cheap. All kinds of sweaters are 30 yuan each. Shorts are 20 yuan each. T-shirts are 25 yuan each. Big bags are 35 yuan each. Small bags are 20 yuan each. And it has many shoes and skirts." }
{ "annotator": 10520, "digressive": null, "edits": [ { "correct_sentence": "Gao Feng is a football fan.", "correction": "Feng", "error": "Fong", "error_description": "Spelling Error: According to the prompt, the Chinese name here is '高峰'. Based on the Pinyin transliteration, the corresponding English name should be 'Gao Feng'. Therefore, there is a spelling error here. 〈Fong〉 needs to be changed to 『Feng』 to conform to the original prompt and the correct Pinyin transliteration rules for Chinese names.", "error_sentence": "Gao Fong is a football fan, he has 4 football, and many footballor's photo.", "error_severity": 1, "error_type": "Spelling Error", "index": 0 }, { "correct_sentence": "Gao Feng is a football fan. He has 4 footballs and many football players' photos.", "correction": ". He", "error": ", he", "error_description": "① Punctuation Error: According to English writing conventions, the original sentences 〈Gao Feng is a football fan〉 and 〈he has...〉 contain independent subject-verb structures and can stand alone as sentences. Therefore, 〈, he has...〉 needs to be changed to 〈. He has...〉 to form two independent sentences; ② Case Error: According to English writing conventions, when two independent clauses are separated by a period, the first letter of the first word in the second sentence should be capitalized. 〈he〉 should be changed to 『He』 to comply with English writing conventions.", "error_sentence": "Gao Fong is a football fan, he has 4 football, and many footballor's photo.", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Punctuation Error", "index": 1 }, { "correct_sentence": "He has 4 footballs and many football players' photos.", "correction": "footballs", "error": "football,", "error_description": "Noun Number Error: According to English grammar rules, the number 〈4〉 should be followed by the plural form of a countable noun. There is a noun number error here. 〈football〉 needs to be changed to its plural form 『footballs』 to match the sentence meaning and English grammar rules.", "error_sentence": "Gao Fong is a football fan, he has 4 football, and many footballor's photo.", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Noun Number Error", "index": 2 }, { "correct_sentence": "He has 4 footballs and many football players' photos.", "correction": "football players' photos", "error": "footballor's photo", "error_description": "① Noun Error: According to English expression norms, 〈footballor〉 is an incorrectly formed word; the correct expression for 'soccer star' is 'football player'. The original text refers to 'many soccer stars', so the plural form of the countable noun is needed. 〈footballor〉 should be changed to 『football players』 to conform to English expression norms; ② Noun Possessive Error: According to English writing conventions, the possessive form of a plural noun ending in 's' is formed by adding an apostrophe 『'』 after the word. It needs to be changed to 『football players'』 to comply with English writing conventions; ③ Noun Number Error: According to the prompt, this refers to 'many photos'. The countable noun 〈photo〉 needs to be changed to its plural form 『photos』 to conform to the original prompt.", "error_sentence": "Gao Fong is a football fan, he has 4 football, and many footballor's photo.", "error_severity": 4, "error_type": "Noun Error", "index": 3 }, { "correct_sentence": "But he doesn't play football.", "correction": "doesn't", "error": "dosen't", "error_description": "Spelling Error: According to English spelling rules, the negative auxiliary verb for the third-person singular in the simple present tense is 'doesn't'. There is an auxiliary verb spelling error here. 〈dosen't〉 needs to be changed to 『doesn't』 to comply with English spelling rules.", "error_sentence": "But he dosen't play football, he only watch football teams in TV.", "error_severity": 1, "error_type": "Spelling Error", "index": 4 }, { "correct_sentence": "But he doesn't play football. He only watches football games on TV.", "correction": ". He only watches football games on", "error": ", he only watch football teams in", "error_description": "① Punctuation Error: According to English writing conventions, the original sentences 〈But he doesn't play football〉 and 〈he only...〉 contain independent subject-verb structures and can stand alone as sentences. Therefore, 〈, he only...〉 needs to be changed to 〈. He only...〉 to form two independent sentences; ② Case Error: According to English writing conventions, when two independent clauses are separated by a period, the first letter of the first word in the second sentence should be capitalized. 〈he〉 should be changed to 『He』 to comply with English writing conventions; ③ Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The third-person singular subject 〈he〉 requires the third-person singular form of the verb. The base form 〈watch〉 needs to be changed to the simple present third-person singular form 『watches』 to adhere to the principle of subject-verb agreement; ④ Noun Error: Based on the prompt and context, this refers to watching football games on TV, not 'football teams'. 〈football teams〉 needs to be changed to 『football games』 to better fit the context; ⑤ Preposition Error: The fixed English expression for 'on TV' is 'on TV'. There is a preposition error here. 〈in〉 needs to be changed to 『on』 to conform to the fixed English phrase.", "error_sentence": "But he dosen't play football, he only watch football teams in TV.", "error_severity": 4, "error_type": "Subject-Verb Agreement Error", "index": 5 }, { "correct_sentence": "He has 2 friends, Mike and Dave.", "correction": "has", "error": "have", "error_description": "Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the third-person singular subject 〈He〉 requires the third-person singular form of the verb. There is a subject-verb agreement error here. The base form 〈have〉 needs to be changed to the simple present third-person singular form 『has』 to align with the context's tense and the principle of subject-verb agreement.", "error_sentence": "He have 2 friends, Mike and Dave.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Subject-Verb Agreement Error", "index": 6 }, { "correct_sentence": "Mike likes to play basketball, but he thinks ping-pong is very boring.", "correction": "to", "error": "", "error_description": "Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, 'to like doing something' is expressed with the fixed phrase 'like to do something'. The verb 〈likes〉 should be followed by an infinitive structure to express doing something. Therefore, there is a nonfinite verb form error here. The base form 〈play〉 needs to be changed to 『to play』 to comply with English grammar rules.", "error_sentence": "Mike likes play basketball, but he think ping-pong is very boring.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Nonfinite Verb Form Error", "index": 7 }, { "correct_sentence": "Mike likes to play basketball, but he thinks ping-pong is very boring.", "correction": "thinks", "error": "think", "error_description": "Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the third-person singular subject 〈he〉 requires the third-person singular form of the verb. There is a subject-verb agreement error here. The base form 〈think〉 needs to be changed to the simple present third-person singular form 『thinks』 to align with the context's tense and the principle of subject-verb agreement.", "error_sentence": "Mike likes play basketball, but he think ping-pong is very boring.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Subject-Verb Agreement Error", "index": 8 }, { "correct_sentence": "Dave likes to play soccer, but he thinks baseball is very difficult.", "correction": "to", "error": "", "error_description": "Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, 'to like doing something' is expressed with the fixed phrase 'like to do something'. The verb 〈likes〉 should be followed by an infinitive structure to express doing something. Therefore, there is a nonfinite verb form error here. The base form 〈play〉 needs to be changed to 『to play』 to comply with English grammar rules.", "error_sentence": "Dave likes play soccer, but he think baseball is very difficult.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Nonfinite Verb Form Error", "index": 9 }, { "correct_sentence": "Dave likes to play soccer, but he thinks baseball is very difficult.", "correction": "thinks", "error": "think", "error_description": "Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the third-person singular subject 〈he〉 requires the third-person singular form of the verb. There is a subject-verb agreement error here. The base form 〈think〉 needs to be changed to the simple present third-person singular form 『thinks』 to align with the context's tense and the principle of subject-verb agreement.", "error_sentence": "Dave likes play soccer, but he think baseball is very difficult.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Subject-Verb Agreement Error", "index": 10 } ], "index": 43, "question_id": 253341, "question_prompt": "Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the table, write a short essay.\nGao Feng is a football fan. He owns four footballs and many photos of soccer stars, but he never plays football; he only watches games on TV. He has two friends, Mike and Dave. Based on the table hints, introduce the hobbies of Gao Feng and his two friends in about 50 words.\n________\n________\n________\n________", "source": "Gao Fong is a football fan, he has 4 football, and many footballor's photo. But he dosen't play football, he only watch football teams in TV. He have 2 friends, Mike and Dave. Mike likes play basketball, but he think ping-pong is very boring. Dave likes play soccer, but he think baseball is very difficult.", "summary": null, "target": "Gao Feng is a football fan. He has 4 footballs and many football players' photos. But he doesn't play football. He only watches football games on TV. He has 2 friends, Mike and Dave. Mike likes to play basketball, but he thinks ping-pong is very boring. Dave likes to play soccer, but he thinks baseball is very difficult." }
{ "annotator": 10520, "digressive": null, "edits": [ { "correct_sentence": "Gao Feng is a soccer fan.", "correction": "Gao Feng", "error": "GaoFen", "error_description": "① Spelling Error: According to the prompt, the Chinese name is “高峰”, which transliterates to “Gao Feng” in Pinyin. 〈Fen〉 should be 『Feng』 to match the prompt and correct Pinyin spelling rules; therefore, it should be 『Gao Feng』 to comply with English writing conventions; ② Spelling Error: Chinese names in English should separate the surname and given name according to standard Pinyin format; thus, 〈GaoFen〉 is corrected to 『Gao Feng』.", "error_sentence": "GaoFen is a soccer fan.", "error_severity": 1, "error_type": "Spelling Error", "index": 0 }, { "correct_sentence": "He has four soccer balls and many soccer stars' pictures.", "correction": "soccer balls", "error": "soccers", "error_description": "Noun Error: According to the prompt, this refers to “4个足球” (four footballs), requiring a plural countable noun. 〈soccer〉 is an uncountable noun for the sport and has no plural form; the word “ball” must be added to specify the physical object. Thus, 〈soccers〉 is incorrect and should be changed to 『soccer balls』 to clearly refer to footballs.", "error_sentence": "He has four soccers and many soccer stars pictures.", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Noun Error", "index": 1 }, { "correct_sentence": "He has four soccer balls and many soccer stars' pictures.", "correction": "'", "error": "", "error_description": "Noun Possessive Error: According to the prompt, this means “很多球星的照片” (many pictures of soccer stars), requiring the possessive form to indicate ownership. According to English grammar rules, the possessive of a plural noun ending in “s” is formed by adding only an apostrophe 『'』. Therefore, 〈stars〉 should be changed to 『stars’』 to follow English grammar rules.", "error_sentence": "He has four soccers and many soccer stars pictures.", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Noun Possessive Error", "index": 2 }, { "correct_sentence": "But he never plays soccer.", "correction": "plays", "error": "play", "error_description": "Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the third-person singular subject 〈he〉 requires the third-person singular verb form. The base form 〈play〉 should be changed to the simple present third-person singular form 『plays』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.", "error_sentence": "But he never play soccer.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Subject-Verb Agreement Error", "index": 3 }, { "correct_sentence": "He has two friends, Mike and Dave.", "correction": ",", "error": "", "error_description": "Punctuation Error: According to English syntax rules, the appositive 〈Mike and Dave〉, which provides additional explanation, should be separated from the preceding noun 〈friends〉 by a comma. A comma 『,』 should be added after 〈friends〉 to set off the appositive, following English punctuation rules.", "error_sentence": "He has two friends Mike and Dave.", "error_severity": 1, "error_type": "Punctuation Error", "index": 4 }, { "correct_sentence": "Dave likes to play soccer too, but he can't play basketball.", "correction": "likes to", "error": "like", "error_description": "① Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The third-person singular subject 〈Dave〉 requires the third-person singular verb form; 〈like〉 should be changed to the simple present third-person singular form 『likes』 for subject-verb agreement; ② Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar, the structure \"like to do something\" is used; the verb 〈likes〉 should be followed by the infinitive form of the verb. Therefore, the base form 〈play〉 should be changed to 『to play』.", "error_sentence": "Dave like play soccer too, but he can't play basketball.", "error_severity": 4, "error_type": "Nonfinite Verb Form Error", "index": 5 }, { "correct_sentence": "Mike likes basketball, but he can't play ping-pong.", "correction": "likes", "error": "like", "error_description": "Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the third-person singular subject 〈Mike〉 requires the third-person singular verb form. The base form 〈like〉 should be changed to the simple present third-person singular form 『likes』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.", "error_sentence": "Mike like basketball, but he can't play ping-pong.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Subject-Verb Agreement Error", "index": 6 } ], "index": 44, "question_id": 253341, "question_prompt": "Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the table, write a short essay.\nGao Feng is a football fan. He owns four footballs and many photos of soccer stars, but he never plays football; he only watches games on TV. He has two friends, Mike and Dave. Based on the table hints, introduce the hobbies of Gao Feng and his two friends in about 50 words.\n________\n________\n________\n________", "source": "GaoFen is a soccer fan. He has four soccers and many soccer stars pictures. But he never play soccer. He has two friends Mike and Dave. Dave like play soccer too, but he can't play basketball. Mike like basketball, but he can't play ping-pong.", "summary": null, "target": "Gao Feng is a soccer fan. He has four soccer balls and many soccer stars' pictures. But he never plays soccer. He has two friends, Mike and Dave. Dave likes to play soccer too, but he can't play basketball. Mike likes basketball, but he can't play ping-pong." }
{ "annotator": 10479, "digressive": null, "edits": [ { "correct_sentence": "Linda is helping her mother do housework.", "correction": "her", "error": "", "error_description": "Pronoun Error: Based on the sentence's meaning, it intends to express 'Linda is helping her mother do housework'. As a countable noun, 'mother' cannot stand alone; 『her』 needs to be added to indicate possession, i.e., 'Linda's mother', making the sentence complete.", "error_sentence": "Linda is helping mother do housework.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Pronoun Error", "index": 0 }, { "correct_sentence": "Her brother is playing computer games.", "correction": "brother", "error": "brather", "error_description": "Spelling Error: Based on the sentence's meaning, it should be 'brother' 『brother』. The original text has 〈brather〉, which is a spelling error and should be corrected to 『brother』.", "error_sentence": "Her brather is playing computer games.", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Spelling Error", "index": 1 }, { "correct_sentence": "Her mother is cooking.", "correction": "mother", "error": "mather", "error_description": "Spelling Error: Based on the sentence's meaning, it should be 'mother' 『mother』. The original text has 〈mather〉, which is a spelling error and should be corrected to 『mother』.", "error_sentence": "Her mather is cooking.", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Spelling Error", "index": 2 } ], "index": 47, "question_id": 245297, "question_prompt": "Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. It is currently 7 PM. Based on the information provided by Linda below, use the present continuous tense to describe what Linda and her family are doing. Writing hints: Linda: help mother do housework; grandparents: watch TV; brother: play computer games; mother: cook; sister: listen to the radio.", "source": "It is seven o'clock. Linda is helping mother do housework. Her grandparents are watching TV. Her brather is playing computer games. Her mather is cooking. Her sister is listening to the radio.", "summary": null, "target": "It is seven o'clock. Linda is helping her mother do housework. Her grandparents are watching TV. Her brother is playing computer games. Her mother is cooking. Her sister is listening to the radio." }
{ "annotator": 10478, "digressive": null, "edits": [ { "correct_sentence": "It is seven o'clock.", "correction": "seven", "error": "Seven", "error_description": "Case Error: The English cardinal number 〈Seven〉 indicating time should be lowercase when not at the beginning of a sentence, thus there is a case error here; it should be changed to 『seven』 to comply with English writing conventions.", "error_sentence": "It is Seven o'clock.", "error_severity": 1, "error_type": "Case Error", "index": 0 }, { "correct_sentence": "I am helping my mother do housework.", "correction": "my mother do", "error": "mother doing", "error_description": "① Pronoun Error: The subject of this sentence is I, so it refers to 'my mother'; the determiner 『my』 should be added before the noun 〈mother〉 to clarify the possessive relationship; ② Nonfinite Verb Form Error: In English, 'help somebody do sth' is a fixed phrase meaning 'help someone do something', therefore the verb 〈doing〉 should be changed to 『do』 to conform to the fixed English phrase.", "error_sentence": "I am helping mother doing housework.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Pronoun Error", "index": 1 }, { "correct_sentence": "My brother is playing computer games.", "correction": ".", "error": "", "error_description": "Punctuation Error: 〈My brother is playing computer games〉 and 〈My mom is cooking〉 are two independent main clauses that need to be separated by a period, thus there is a missing punctuation mark here. A 『.』 should be added before 〈My mom is cooking〉 to comply with English syntax rules.", "error_sentence": "My brother is playing computer games My mom is cooking.", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Punctuation Error", "index": 2 }, { "correct_sentence": "My sister is listening to radio.", "correction": "to", "error": "", "error_description": "Preposition Error: The verb listen is an intransitive verb and must be followed by the preposition to connect to an object; therefore, 『to』 needs to be added before 〈radio〉 to form the complete phrase 『listen to radio』 to comply with English grammar rules.", "error_sentence": "My sister is listening radio.", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Preposition Error", "index": 3 } ], "index": 50, "question_id": 245297, "question_prompt": "Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. It is currently 7 PM. Based on the information provided by Linda below, use the present continuous tense to describe what Linda and her family are doing. Writing hints: Linda: help mother do housework; grandparents: watch TV; brother: play computer games; mother: cook; sister: listen to the radio.", "source": "It is Seven o'clock. I am helping mother doing housework. My grandparents are watching TV. My brother is playing computer games My mom is cooking. My sister is listening radio. My family is happy.", "summary": null, "target": "It is seven o'clock. I am helping my mother do housework. My grandparents are watching TV. My brother is playing computer games. My mom is cooking. My sister is listening to radio. My family is happy." }
{ "annotator": 10478, "digressive": null, "edits": [ { "correct_sentence": "My friend likes to wear a red shirt.", "correction": "likes to wear a", "error": "like wear", "error_description": "① Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The third-person singular subject 〈friend〉 requires the third-person singular form of the verb, 『likes』; therefore, 〈like〉 needs to be changed to 『likes』 to comply with the English subject-verb agreement rule; ② Nonfinite Verb Form Error: In English, \"like to do something\" is commonly used to express \"enjoy doing something\"; therefore, the verb 〈wear〉 following \"like\" as an object needs to be in the infinitive form 『to wear』; ③ Determiner Error: As a countable noun, 〈shirt〉 in its singular form requires a determiner; the context means \"the friend likes to wear a red shirt\", so according to the semantics, the indefinite article 『a』 needs to be added before 〈red〉 to comply with English grammar rules.", "error_sentence": "My friend like wear red shirt.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Nonfinite Verb Form Error", "index": 0 }, { "correct_sentence": "Because he thinks it is very beautiful.", "correction": "thinks it is", "error": "think", "error_description": "① Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈he〉 is third-person singular, so the predicate verb 〈think〉 needs to be in the third-person singular form 『thinks』 to comply with subject-verb agreement grammar; ② Sentence Structure Error: 〈very beautiful〉 is a component of the object clause following 〈think〉; therefore, the subject and linking verb 『it is』 need to be added before 〈very〉 to form a complete subject-predicate-object structure as the object clause for 〈think〉.", "error_sentence": "Because he think very beautiful.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Sentence Structure Error", "index": 1 }, { "correct_sentence": "And he likes to wear purple and white shoes.", "correction": "to wear purple and white shoes", "error": "wear pule white shoe", "error_description": "① Nonfinite Verb Form Error: In English, \"like to do something\" is commonly used to express \"enjoy doing something\"; the verb 〈wear〉 needs to be in the infinitive form 『to wear』 to comply with English grammar rules; ② Spelling Error: The word 〈pule〉 here is the adjective \"purple\", which is misspelled; it should be changed to 『purple』; ③ Conjunction Error: In English, two parallel adjectives in a sentence need to be connected by the conjunction \"and\"; therefore, 『and 』 needs to be added before 〈white〉 to comply with English grammar rules; ④ Noun Number Error: The meaning here is \"the friend likes to wear purple and white shoes\"; therefore, the countable noun 〈shoe〉 needs to be in the plural form 『shoes』 to match the meaning.", "error_sentence": "And he likes wear pule white shoe.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Conjunction Error", "index": 2 }, { "correct_sentence": "He thinks they are very pretty.", "correction": "thinks they are", "error": "think", "error_description": "① Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈he〉 is third-person singular, so the predicate verb 〈think〉 needs to be in the third-person singular form 『thinks』 to comply with the subject-verb agreement principle; ② Sentence Structure Error: 〈very pretty〉 is a component of the object clause following 〈think〉; therefore, a subject and linking verb need to be added before 〈very〉 to form a complete subject-predicate-object structure as the object clause for 〈think〉. According to the preceding text, this refers to \"the friend thinks the purple and white shoes are very pretty\", so the subject of the object clause refers to the preceding plural noun 『shoes』; thus, the subject and linking verb 『they are』 should be added before 〈very pretty〉.", "error_sentence": "He think very pretty.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Sentence Structure Error", "index": 3 }, { "correct_sentence": "I like his shirt and shoes very much.", "correction": "", "error": "very", "error_description": "Word Order Error: When the adverb 〈very〉 modifies the verb 〈like〉, it should be placed at the end of the sentence using the structure 『like something very much』; therefore, there is a word order error here. The sentence order should be adjusted to 『I like...very much』, which requires deleting 〈very 〉 and adding 『very much』 after 〈shoe〉.", "error_sentence": "I very like his shirt and shoe.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Word Order Error", "index": 4 }, { "correct_sentence": "I like his shirt and shoes very much.", "correction": "shoes very much", "error": "shoe", "error_description": "Noun Number Error: According to the preceding text, this refers to \"the friend likes his shirt and shoes very much\". The shoes here are definitely more than one; therefore, there is a noun number error here. The countable noun 〈shoe〉 needs to be in the plural form 『shoes』 to match the preceding context's semantics.", "error_sentence": "I very like his shirt and shoe.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Noun Number Error", "index": 5 } ], "index": 51, "question_id": 255734, "question_prompt": "Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.\nWriting hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like", "source": "My friend like wear red shirt. Because he think very beautiful. And he likes wear pule white shoe. He think very pretty. I very like his shirt and shoe.", "summary": null, "target": "My friend likes to wear a red shirt. Because he thinks it is very beautiful. And he likes to wear purple and white shoes. He thinks they are very pretty. I like his shirt and shoes very much." }
{ "annotator": 10478, "digressive": null, "edits": [ { "correct_sentence": "Li Sa is wearing a black shirt.", "correction": "is wearing a", "error": "'s wear", "error_description": "① Contraction Error: According to the semantics, this refers to 'Li Sa is wearing a black shirt now'. 〈's〉 indicates noun possessive relationship and is misused as a verb here; therefore, to avoid this contraction error, the predicate verb should be fully spelled out and the present continuous tense 『is wearing』 should be used to express 'Li Sa is wearing a black shirt now'. ② Determiner Error: The countable noun 〈shirt〉 here refers to 'a black shirt' and needs to be in singular form; thus, the countable noun 〈shirt〉 requires a necessary article for limitation. Therefore, adding the indefinite article 『a』 before 〈black shirt〉 conforms to English grammar rules.", "error_sentence": "Li Sa's wear black shirt.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Contraction Error", "index": 0 }, { "correct_sentence": "His shoes are beautiful.", "correction": "His", "error": "He's", "error_description": "Pronoun Error: According to the semantics, this refers to 'his shoes', requiring a possessive pronoun before 〈shoes〉 for limitation. 〈He's〉 is the contraction of 'He is', but a possessive pronoun indicating ownership is needed here; thus, there is a pronoun error, and 〈He's〉 should be changed to 『His』 to modify 〈shoes〉 to fit the semantic and grammatical rules.", "error_sentence": "He's shoes are beautiful I like it", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Pronoun Error", "index": 1 }, { "correct_sentence": "His shoes are beautiful.", "correction": ".", "error": "", "error_description": "Punctuation Error: The sentences 〈His shoes are beautiful〉 and 〈I like it〉 are two independent main clauses, so they need to be separated by a period; there is a missing punctuation mark here. A period 『. 』 should be added after 〈beautiful〉 to separate them into two complete sentences to conform to English syntactic rules.", "error_sentence": "He's shoes are beautiful I like it", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Punctuation Error", "index": 2 }, { "correct_sentence": "I like them.", "correction": "them.", "error": "it", "error_description": "Pronoun Error: The pronoun here refers to the preceding plural countable noun 〈shoes〉, so the pronoun must also be in plural form; the pronoun 〈it〉 does not agree in number with the plural noun 〈shoes〉. Thus, there is a pronoun error; the pronoun 〈it〉 should be changed to the plural pronoun 『them』 to maintain consistent reference.", "error_sentence": "He's shoes are beautiful I like it", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Pronoun Error", "index": 3 } ], "index": 53, "question_id": 255734, "question_prompt": "Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.\nWriting hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like", "source": "Li Sa's wear black shirt. Li Yiyang's shoes are pink and blue. He's shoes are beautiful I like it", "summary": null, "target": "Li Sa is wearing a black shirt. Li Yiyang's shoes are pink and blue. His shoes are beautiful. I like them." }
{ "annotator": 10478, "digressive": null, "edits": [ { "correct_sentence": "The weekend is coming. My classmates have many things to do this weekend.", "correction": "The weekend is coming. My", "error": "Weekends will come, my", "error_description": "① Noun Number Error: The weekend here is specific, so the plural form should not be used; it requires the structure \"determiner + singular countable noun\", thus 〈Weekends〉 should be changed to 『The weekend』 to conform to the specific usage of countable nouns in English.; ② Auxiliary Error: In English, \"something is coming\" is commonly used to indicate \"something is about to happen\"; the verb here needs to be in the present continuous tense to express the future, which can be seen as a fixed expression. Here, 〈The weekend〉 is equivalent to \"something\", so the following verb should use the present continuous tense to indicate an upcoming event. Based on the subject, the auxiliary verb \"be\" in its third-person singular form \"is\" is needed, thus 〈will come〉 should be changed to 『is coming』 to conform to English expression habits.; ③ Punctuation Error: The sentences 『The weekend is coming』 and 〈my classmates have...〉 should be two independent main clauses, but they are incorrectly connected by a comma; a period should be used to connect the two sentences, thus 〈,〉 should be changed to 『.』.; ④ Case Error: 〈my classmates have...〉 is an independent main clause, and the first letter of the first word should be capitalized, thus 〈my〉 needs to be changed to 『My』 to conform to English syntax rules.", "error_sentence": "Weekends will come, my classmates have more things in this weekend.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Auxiliary Error", "index": 0 }, { "correct_sentence": "My classmates have many things to do this weekend.", "correction": "many things to do", "error": "more things in", "error_description": "① Determiner Error: 〈more〉 implies comparison \"more\", but there is no object of comparison in the context. According to the meaning, it refers to \"having many things to do on the weekend\", so it needs to be changed to 『many』 to modify the plural noun 〈things〉.; ② Sentence Structure Error: According to the meaning, this sentence intends to express \"having many things to do on the weekend\", but it doesn't reflect \"to do\", making the sentence structure incomplete. An infinitive 『to do』 needs to be added after 〈things〉 as a post-modifier to conform to English syntax rules.; ③ Word Redundancy Error: 〈this weekend〉 is often placed at the end of the sentence as a time adverbial for the entire sentence and does not require a preposition before it. Therefore, the redundant preposition 〈in〉 should be deleted here to conform to English expression norms.", "error_sentence": "Weekends will come, my classmates have more things in this weekend.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Sentence Structure Error", "index": 1 }, { "correct_sentence": "Charles is my best friend.", "correction": "is", "error": ",", "error_description": "Sentence Structure Error: According to the meaning, the intention is to express \"Charles is my best friend\". Therefore, this sentence lacks a predicate verb, resulting in an incomplete sentence structure. Since the subject is third-person singular, 〈, 〉 needs to be replaced with 『is』 to add the predicate verb and form a complete sentence.", "error_sentence": "Charles, my best friend's, he is going to visits his grandparents.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Sentence Structure Error", "index": 2 }, { "correct_sentence": "Charles is my best friend. He is going to visit his grandparents.", "correction": ". He", "error": "'s, he", "error_description": "① Noun Possessive Error: In the sentence \"Charles is my best friend\", the noun \"friend\" does not have a possessive relationship, so the possessive form is not needed. Therefore, 〈friend's〉 should be changed to the singular countable noun form 『friend』.; ② Punctuation Error: The comma after the possessive structure causes a run-on sentence. After correcting the previous part, the thought group is complete. Therefore, 〈he is going to visits his grandparents〉 should be an independent main clause, and a period should be used to separate the two independent main clauses. So, 〈friend's, he〉 should be changed to 『friend. He』 to conform to syntax rules.", "error_sentence": "Charles, my best friend's, he is going to visits his grandparents.", "error_severity": 4, "error_type": "Noun Possessive Error", "index": 3 }, { "correct_sentence": "He is going to visit his grandparents.", "correction": "visit", "error": "visits", "error_description": "Nonfinite Verb Form Error: The structure 〈be going to〉 should be followed by the base form of the verb. Therefore, there is an error in the nonfinite verb form after the auxiliary verb. Thus, the third-person singular form 〈visits〉 should be changed to the base form 『visit』 to conform to English grammar rules.", "error_sentence": "Charles, my best friend's, he is going to visits his grandparents.", "error_severity": 3, "error_type": "Nonfinite Verb Form Error", "index": 4 }, { "correct_sentence": "He says they haven't seen each other for a long time.", "correction": "says they haven't seen each other for a long time", "error": "say they are loot time no see", "error_description": "① Subject-Verb Agreement Error: When the third-person singular subject 〈He〉 is used, the predicate verb needs to be the third-person singular form 『says』, not the base form 〈say〉, to conform to English grammar rules.; ② Spelling Error: 『long time no see』 is a Chinglish expression for \"haven't seen for a long time\". 〈loot time no see〉 contains a spelling error; 〈loot〉 should be changed to 『long』 to conform to English expression norms.; ③ Sentence Structure Error: According to the meaning, the intention is to express \"haven't seen each other for a long time\". 〈they are loot time no see〉 is the object clause following 〈says〉. Therefore, the clause lacks a predicate verb; \"see\" needs to be used as the predicate here, and an object should be added after \"see\". \"Haven't seen for a long time\" implies a continuous action, requiring the present perfect tense. Also, 『for a long time』 should be placed at the end of the sentence as a time adverbial. Thus, 〈they are loot time no see〉 should be changed to 『haven't seen each other for a long time』 to conform to semantic and syntactic rules.", "error_sentence": "He say they are loot time no see.", "error_severity": 5, "error_type": "Sentence Structure Error", "index": 5 }, { "correct_sentence": "Luang is going to finish his homework.", "correction": "his", "error": "", "error_description": "Pronoun Error: The uncountable noun 〈homework〉 needs a possessive determiner before it to indicate possession. Therefore, a possessive determiner is missing here. According to the meaning, the pronoun 『his』 needs to be added before it to clarify that it is 〈Luang〉's homework, conforming to semantic and grammatical rules.", "error_sentence": "Luang is going to finish homework.", "error_severity": 2, "error_type": "Pronoun Error", "index": 6 } ], "index": 54, "question_id": 270915, "question_prompt": "The weekend is coming. Classmates, what are you planning to do? Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay of about 60 words about your plans for the weekend.\nWriting hints: be going to; do cleaning; visit grandparents; have a good time", "source": "Weekends will come, my classmates have more things in this weekend. Charles, my best friend's, he is going to visits his grandparents. He say they are loot time no see. Luang is going to finish homework. Jo is going to help her mother do housework. What a busy weekend!", "summary": null, "target": "The weekend is coming. My classmates have many things to do this weekend. Charles is my best friend. He is going to visit his grandparents. He says they haven't seen each other for a long time. Luang is going to finish his homework. Jo is going to help her mother do housework. What a busy weekend!" }
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The Fine-grained Error ANalysis for English Learners (FEANEL) dataset aims to advance research in fine-grained error analysis. The benchmark includes a large-scale dataset of 1,000 essays written by K-12 students, with 500 essays from elementary school students and 500 from secondary school students, covering a wide range of age groups and proficiency levels. Each error analysis has been meticulously annotated with an error type, severity level, and explanation, guided by a taxonomy co-developed with language education experts.

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