How to Write a Better Cold DM for SDRs

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Cold DM an SDR sent me: ''Chris - your business is the perfect fit for our B2B lead generation tool, are you available to sync on a short 30 minute demo before the new year so you can get 2025 off to the great start''? My Response: ''No, thank you but appreciate you reaching out and doing your SDR thing. Mind if I give you some tips to help you get better responses on LinkedIn''? SDR: Yes. The Feedback: 1. Remove the ''pitch'' around my biz being the perfect fit - it's too early and not believable. 2. Instead, mention a short observation about me that you've noticed like ''you're hiring 2 SDRs''. 3. Link the observation to a problem such as ''bet your thinking about how to get the best SDRs onboard''. 4. Finish with a permission based CTA like; mind if I ask a question or 2 on that to help? 5. Don't pitch in your first message, just focus on building trust and getting permission to ask questions. 6. It could look like this... ''Hi Chris - noticed your hiring 2 SDRs. Bet you're thinking about how to get the best candidates onboard. Mind if I ask a question or 2 on that''? --- Imagine if an SDR got ONE note like this a day. LinkedIn DMs would be a much better [and profitable] place. What do you think of the DM? Let's talk👇 ---- PS. ♻️ Repost if you'd like to share this with your network. And comment ''DM'' if you'd like some free templates proven to increase replies rates on LinkedIn. I'll send them on over. 📌 PS. Monday, my Outbound Accelerator goes live for early bird. Check it out!

Is LinkedIn run by bots? I've seen this post at least 40 times. Same kind of redaction, same call to action In this case it even says "start the 2025" like we're not almost in August. And the replies....oooh te mighty replies: "Wow this is so great man" "Yes I've been trying the same and it's amazing how it's working" "Oooh this is nice might as well give it a shot" This posts are 10000 times more automated than indian email starting with "hello dear sir/madam hope this email finds you well" Have a great Saturday.

Kevin Patrick (KP) 🤝

Helping B2B companies with PMF scale using strategic outbound | Booked calls with 85% of F500 | Co-founder at Astris Partners

3mo

Good one, I mean why would they care about how perfect your business is, if you are not telling them what you have for them 🤷♀️

Nick Palasz

Founder @ Slyleadz | I help startups build cold outbound systems that generate qualified meetings | 💌 slyleadz.us

3mo

The best dms need to create curiosity. One sharp insight can do more than a 3-line pitch ever will.

Mujtaba Qamar

Building and Nurturing Partnerships that Thrive | Business Development Executive at Tech Domain

3mo

LinkedIn genuinely needs to sort out this copy-pasting, AI generated redundancy - all I see is the same old posts copied, modified and bot-worded all over again. FYI July has ended and you're talking about starting 2025 =)

Sam Ackerman, (MBA Candidate)

Merchant Monitoring/Risk and Compliance

3mo

Love this, Chris

DIGVIJAY SINGH SHEKHAWAT

Business Development | SaaS & Sustainability | Salesforce SDR Certified | Driving Pipeline Growth

3mo

Really valuable advice, Chris! Building trust and asking permission before pitching is exactly what’s needed to improve LinkedIn outreach. Personalization like this turns cold DMs into meaningful conversations. Appreciate you sharing these insights! [DM]

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P. J.

Your Partner in Seamless Communication & Intelligent Business Systems | Channel Sales Head @ EasyComm Innovations

3mo

Love this, Chris

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Ashton Vista

IB Diploma Student | Founder & Developer | Academic Tutor | Aspiring AI/ML Innovator

3mo

This post is genuinely one of the most practical breakdowns I’ve seen on what makes a LinkedIn DM actually get read. So many SDRs default to that awkward “perfect fit” line, as if there’s a magic template that’ll bypass people’s filters. Your approach, start with a real, specific observation, tie it to a relevant pain point, and then ask for permission to go deeper, basically flips the usual pushy dynamic. The “mind if I ask a question or two” line is so much more human and less intrusive. Honestly, if every SDR adopted this (and actually did their homework), inboxes would be so much less painful. It’s not even about “tricks”, it’s just about not treating people like leads on an assembly line. This is the kind of advice I wish I’d been given when I first started networking on here, and it applies far beyond sales. Curious if you’ve seen any patterns in which industries or seniority levels respond best to this style, or if it’s universal? Either way, these are the exact DMs that get my attention.

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Hesitant to instantly give my feedback on it without trying it first!! Sequencing a few to go out tomorrow!

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Aashvi Shah

Odoo Partners | Outsourcing Partner | Ecommerce | Web and App Development | CRM & ERP | Salesforce | Custom Development

3mo

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