TUGAS TUTORIAL ONLINE 2
MATA KULIAH
BAHASA INGGRIS (MKWI 4201)
DISUSUN OLEH :
NAME : ANANDA GLEN SASKI
NIM : 052327185
CLASS CODE : 214
BACHELOR OF LAWS STUDY PROGRAM
FACULTY OF LAW SOCIAL AND POLITICAL SCIENCES
UPBJJ KENDARI
UNIVERSITAS TERBUKA
1. Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.
Rachel Gomez, Sr. Project Manager
555-555-5555 |[email protected] | Seattle, Washington98128
July 1, 2023
Vincent Prasad, Sr. Data Analyst
123-456-7890 | [email protected] | New Orleans, Louisiana
70122
1 Dear Vincent Prasad,
It's my pleasure to strongly recommend Ashley Singer for the Jr. Data
Analyst role with Clouddatanow Tech. I'm Rachel Gomez, a project
manager at Asomtech Solutions. I have 12 years of experience working in
the tech industry and have seen many young people come and go. Ashley
Singer is one individual I have worked with who has always distinguished
herself as a team member.
During our time together, Ashley displayed great talents in data analytics.
When we first met, I felt immediately impressed with Ashley. During the
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time we worked together, her understanding of analyzing data to achieve
results for our company grew far more than that of her peers.
It's not just her technical skills that impress me. Ashley was a joy to work
with because of her amazingly positive attitude and ability to
communicate across teams. Her focus and attention to detail were also
necessary and valued not just by me, but also by her peers, who often
relied on her to get the job done. I'm absolutely confident that Ashley
would be a great fit at Clouddatanow Tech. She can bring the skills and
experiences you're looking for in a candidate, and she can quickly become
an asset and help your company grow.
If you need more information or specific examples, please don't hesitate to
contact me. As a recommendation letter likely only provides a snapshot of
her talents and achievements, I'd be happy to further elaborate on my time
working with her.
Sincerely,
3 Rachel Gomez
Sr. Project Manager
Pertanyaan / Questions
Identifikasi bagian surat yang ditandai oleh nomor 1-3. / Please identify the part
of the letter numbered 1-3.(@5 pts)
Answer :
1. Dear Vincent Prasad, this section is the opening part of the letter which shows
greetings to the recipient of the letter, so it is clear that this letter was written to
Vincent Prasad.
2. In the second part, which is the body of a recommendation letter, in the body of
this letter, it is explained that Rachel Gomez introduces herself as a project manager
at Asomtech Solutions. Additionally he recommended Ashley for the role of Jr. Data
Analyst at Clouddatanow Tech Rachel explained that Ashley was a former
employee and worked very well in her place, therefore she recommended Ashley
Singer to help Vincent Prasad's company grow.
3. Rachel Gomez, this section is a series of closing parts of the letter which shows
that Rachel Gomez is the sender of the letter.
2. Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.
March 15th, 2024
Customer Service Department
Greenery
Oatside Road 35
New York, 356
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with a recent order I placed with your
company. On January 24th, I ordered 5 boxes of vegetables (Order Number:
SPX35672980). Unfortunately, the delivery was significantly delay, arriving on
February 13rd, well past the expected date.
Moreover, upon inspection of the vegetables, I found that several items were in
poor condition. Many of the vegetables were wilted, discolored, and showed
signs of spoilage. This is acceptable, as I had expected fresh and high-quality
produce based on your company's reputation.
I request a full refund for the damaged items or a replacement of the affecting
vegetables. additionally, I would appreciate an explanation for the delay and steps
that will be taken to prevent such issues in the future.
Please contact me at your earliest convenience to resolve this matter. I look
forward to your prompt response and a satisfactory resolution.
Sincerely,
Pamela Taylor
Pertanyaan / Questions
Identifikasi 5 (lima) kesalahan pada surat di atas. / Please identify 5 (five) errors
in the letter above. (@5 pts)
Answer :
First, check for grammar mistakes. For example:
1. "February 13rd" should actually be "February 13th."
2. Next, look for spelling issues; "This is acceptable" should really be "This is
unacceptable."
3. Then, spot any punctuation problems, like needing a comma after "New York,
356" to separate the city from the postal code.
4. After that, check for formatting errors; "Oatside Road 35" should be correctly
capitalized as "Oatside Road 35" if it's a proper name.
5. Finally, watch out for logical inconsistencies; saying "This is acceptable" goes
against the overall tone of the letter, which shows dissatisfaction.
3. Anda adalah ketua panitia sebuah seminar internasional dan mengundang
pakar di bidangnya. Salah satu pakar yang hadir menjadi narasumber adalah
Prof. Allen Smith. Tulislah email ucapan terima kasih untuk Prof. Allen Smith
yang bersedia menjadi narasumber di seminar internasional Anda. Email Anda
harus berisi 100-150 kata.
(60 pts)
You are chairman of the committee for an international seminar and invite
experts in the field. One of the experts who attended as a guest speaker was
Prof. Allen Smith. Write a thank-you email for Prof. Allen Smith who is willing
to be a guest speaker at your international seminar. Your email should be 100-
150 words long.
Answer :
Hey Prof. Allen Smith,
I just wanted to extend a huge thank you for agreeing to be a speaker at our
international seminar. We really appreciate your expertise and contributions in this
field.
Having you as an expert at our seminar will provide valuable insights for the
attendees and make the event a success. We're confident that your knowledge and
experience will have a significant positive impact on everyone involved.
Thanks again for taking the time and effort to share your insights with us. We
hope this event serves as a great opportunity for you to connect with other
professionals and academics in the field.
Once more, thank you so much for your participation in our international seminar.
We look forward to collaborating with you in the future and building a stronger
relationship.
Best regards,
Ananda Glen Saski
REFERENCE
- Ashadi, dkk. (2023). MKWI4201 Bahasa Inggris. Tanggerang Selatan:
Universitas Terbuka.
