TUGAS DUA

BAHASA INGGRIS
MKWI4201

NAMA: Rahmat Antasari

PROGRAM STUDI ILMU HUKUM

1. Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.

Rachel Gomez, Sr. Project Manager

555-555-5555 |[email protected] | Seattle, Washington98128

July 1, 2023

Vincent Prasad, Sr. Data Analyst

123-456-7890 | [email protected] | New Orleans, Louisiana 70122

1 Dear Vincent Prasad,

It's my pleasure to strongly recommend Ashley Singer for the Jr. Data Analyst role with
Clouddatanow Tech. I'm Rachel Gomez, a project manager at Asomtech Solutions. I have
12 years of experience working in the tech industry and have seen many young people
come and go. Ashley Singer is one individual I have worked with who has always
distinguished herself as a team member.

During our time together, Ashley displayed great talents in data analytics. When we first
met, I felt immediately impressed with Ashley. During the time we worked together, her
understanding of analyzing data to achieve results for our company grew far more than
that of her peers.
2
It's not just her technical skills that impress me. Ashley was a joy to work with because of
her amazingly positive attitude and ability to communicate across teams. Her focus and
attention to detail were also necessary and valued not just by me, but also by her peers,
who often relied on her to get the job done. I'm absolutely confident that Ashley would be
a great fit at Clouddatanow Tech. She can bring the skills and experiences you're looking
for in a candidate, and she can quickly become an asset and help your company grow.

If you need more information or specific examples, please don't hesitate to contact me. As
a recommendation letter likely only provides a snapshot of her talents and achievements,
I'd be happy to further elaborate on my time working with her.

Sincerely,

3 Rachel Gomez

Sr. Project Manager

Pertanyaan / Questions
 Identifikasi bagian surat yang ditandai oleh nomor 1-3. / Please identify the part of the letter
numbered 1-3.(@5 pts)

Jawaban.
1. Bagian Pembukaan
Bagian ini mencakup sapaan formal kepada penerima surat, diikuti oleh pengenalan singkat
tentang tujuan penulisan. Pentingnya menekankan langsung pada inti tujuan surat agar efisien
dan efektif.
2. Isi Surat
Penulis menyampaikan informasi utama atau pesan inti. Dalam konteks surat rekomendasi,
bagian ini memuat penilaian terhadap kualifikasi atau keahlian individu yang direkomendasikan.
Pentingnya menggaris bawahi penyusunan kalimat yang jelas dan mendukung argumen utama.
3. Penutup Surat
Bagian akhir surat biasanya menyimpulkan pesan dan menawarkan tindak lanjut atau dukungan
tambahan, diakhiri dengan salam penutup yang formal. Di bagian ini harus ditulis dengan nada
profesional dan memberikan kesan yang positif.
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2. Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.

March 15th, 2024

Customer Service Department

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with a recent order I placed with your company. On
January 24th, I ordered 5 boxes of vegetables (Order Number: SPX35672980). Unfortunately,
the delivery was significantly delay, arriving on February 13rd, well past the expected date.

Moreover, upon inspection of the vegetables, I found that several items were in poor condition.
Many of the vegetables were wilted, discolored, and showed signs of spoilage. This is
acceptable, as I had expected fresh and high-quality produce based on your company's
reputation.

I request a full refund for the damaged items or a replacement of the affecting vegetables.
additionally, I would appreciate an explanation for the delay and steps that will be taken to
prevent such issues in the future.

Please contact me at your earliest convenience to resolve this matter. I look forward to your
prompt response and a satisfactory resolution.

Sincerely,
Pamela Taylor

Pertanyaan / Questions
Identifikasi 5 (lima) kesalahan pada surat di atas. / Please identify 5 (five) errors in the letter
above. (@5 pts)

Jawaban.

Berdasarkan panduan korespondensi, lima kesalahan yang ditemukan dalam surat di atas adalah
sebagai berikut.
1. Kesalahan dalam tanggal
Tertulis "February 13rd". Seharusnya penulisan tanggal dalam bahasa Inggris adalah
"February 13th".
2. Kata sifat yang tidak sesuai konteks
Pada kalimat "This is acceptable", seharusnya "This is unacceptable" untuk
menyampaikan ketidakpuasan.
3. Tata bahasa yang kurang tepat
Kalimat "the affecting vegetables" tidak tepat secara tata bahasa. Harusnya "the affected
vegetables".
4. Kesalahan huruf besar
Pada kata "additionally" di paragraf ketiga, huruf awal harus menggunakan huruf besar
karena berada di awal kalimat.
5. Detail alamat yang tidak lengkap
Alamat di awal surat tidak mencantumkan kode pos lengkap. Berdasarkan standar surat
resmi, alamat harus mencakup kode pos yang benar.
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3. Anda adalah ketua panitia sebuah seminar internasional dan mengundang pakar di bidangnya.
Salah satu pakar yang hadir menjadi narasumber adalah Prof. Allen Smith. Tulislah email
ucapan terima kasih untuk Prpf. Allen Smith yang bersedia menjadi narasumber di seminar
internasional Anda. Email Anda harus berisi 100-150 kata.
(60 pts)

You are chairman of the committee for an international seminar and invite experts in the field.
One of the experts who attended as a guest speaker was Prof. Allen Smith. Write a thank-you
email for Prof. Allen Smith who is willing to be a guest speaker at your international seminar.
Your email should be 100-150 words long.

Jawaban.
Subject: Gratitude for Your Participation as a Guest Speaker
Dear Prof. Allen Smith,
On behalf of the organizing committee, I would like to extend our heartfelt gratitude for your
valuable contribution as a guest speaker at our recent international seminar. Your presentation on
investment was both insightful and inspiring, leaving a profound impact on the audience.
Your expertise and engaging delivery truly elevated the quality of our event, and the feedback
from participants has been overwhelmingly positive. We deeply appreciate the time and effort
you dedicated to sharing your knowledge and insights with us.
Once again, thank you for your support, and we look forward to future opportunities to
collaborate. Please do not hesitate to reach out if we can assist you in any way.

Warm regards,
Rahmat Antasari
Chairman, joni
089752656900