Candidate Outreach
Optimization
Best practice compilation by Susanna Frazier
@ohsusannamarie
Verbiage & Tone
● Keep word count to 50-125 for an average response rate of over 50%.
● Write at a 3rd grade level, which have the highest response rates at 53%
when compared with emails written at high school and college level.
○ http://readability-score.com
● Fully personalize your messaging for a 6x higher transaction rate (open &
responses) than generic emails.
● Appeal to candidate emotion.
○ Some of the strongest emotions for driving engagement include: Amusement, interest,
humor, surprise, happiness, and delight.
● Keep character count to 40.
○ 35% of email recipients open email based solely on the subject line.
● Use your candidate’s name in the subject line.
○ This could increase open rates by as much as 26%.
○ “[FIRSTNAME], This job is better than a Fri PM at [insert popular bar where prospect went to
college]”
“[FIRSTNAME], Picture yourself creating [insert a work product from their LinkedIn profile here]
at Universal Music Group
Subject Line
● Include the first name of the recipient in your Greeting.
○ This will increase your open rate by as much as 26%.
● 1st Paragraph: Incorporate “Show Me You Know Me” content.
○ Tell them how you found them, you did your homework, & you know what they work on.
■ “I was researching XYZ_Company and noticed that you XYZ_responsibilities.”
○ Mention any common connections, groups, companies, education, company followers,
interests, etc..
■ You’re 21% more likely to get a response from someone who shares a group with you.
■ Referencing a mutual former employer increases response rates by 27%.
■ People who follow your company are 61% more likely to respond.
● 2nd Paragraph: Align ambition & create an information gap.
○ Introduce yourself and why you’re contacting them. Briefly explain why working together
would benefit both sides. Position the candidate into the big picture of your company’s
mission.
○ Highlight the Employee Value Proposition.
Greeting & Body
Closing
● Create a sense of urgency.
○ Ask for their time over the next 2-3 days.
● Sign-off with “Thanks in advance...”
○ This specific sign-off increases response rates to 66%.
● Use a P.S. as a direct-mail technique - people almost always read it!
○ “P.S. Since you are one of only a few hand-selected candidates for this role, I will be following
up within the next couple days. Whether you are interested or not, please reply back to let us
know.”
When to Send
● Send outreach between 9am and 10am local time for the recipient, on a
Thursday.
○ You’re about 12% more likely to get a response at that time of day than on a Friday afternoon.
○ Messages sent on Saturdays are 16% less likely to get a response compared to those sent
earlier in the work week.

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Candidate Outreach Optimization - Recruitment Marketing

  • 1. Candidate Outreach Optimization Best practice compilation by Susanna Frazier @ohsusannamarie
  • 2. Verbiage & Tone ● Keep word count to 50-125 for an average response rate of over 50%. ● Write at a 3rd grade level, which have the highest response rates at 53% when compared with emails written at high school and college level. ○ http://readability-score.com ● Fully personalize your messaging for a 6x higher transaction rate (open & responses) than generic emails. ● Appeal to candidate emotion. ○ Some of the strongest emotions for driving engagement include: Amusement, interest, humor, surprise, happiness, and delight.
  • 3. ● Keep character count to 40. ○ 35% of email recipients open email based solely on the subject line. ● Use your candidate’s name in the subject line. ○ This could increase open rates by as much as 26%. ○ “[FIRSTNAME], This job is better than a Fri PM at [insert popular bar where prospect went to college]” “[FIRSTNAME], Picture yourself creating [insert a work product from their LinkedIn profile here] at Universal Music Group Subject Line
  • 4. ● Include the first name of the recipient in your Greeting. ○ This will increase your open rate by as much as 26%. ● 1st Paragraph: Incorporate “Show Me You Know Me” content. ○ Tell them how you found them, you did your homework, & you know what they work on. ■ “I was researching XYZ_Company and noticed that you XYZ_responsibilities.” ○ Mention any common connections, groups, companies, education, company followers, interests, etc.. ■ You’re 21% more likely to get a response from someone who shares a group with you. ■ Referencing a mutual former employer increases response rates by 27%. ■ People who follow your company are 61% more likely to respond. ● 2nd Paragraph: Align ambition & create an information gap. ○ Introduce yourself and why you’re contacting them. Briefly explain why working together would benefit both sides. Position the candidate into the big picture of your company’s mission. ○ Highlight the Employee Value Proposition. Greeting & Body
  • 5. Closing ● Create a sense of urgency. ○ Ask for their time over the next 2-3 days. ● Sign-off with “Thanks in advance...” ○ This specific sign-off increases response rates to 66%. ● Use a P.S. as a direct-mail technique - people almost always read it! ○ “P.S. Since you are one of only a few hand-selected candidates for this role, I will be following up within the next couple days. Whether you are interested or not, please reply back to let us know.”
  • 6. When to Send ● Send outreach between 9am and 10am local time for the recipient, on a Thursday. ○ You’re about 12% more likely to get a response at that time of day than on a Friday afternoon. ○ Messages sent on Saturdays are 16% less likely to get a response compared to those sent earlier in the work week.