Writing Style forFormal Reports
Follow
company style
guide
Use
impersonal
tone
Use third-
person
pronouns
Vary sentence
lengths
Write short
paragraphs
Use consistent
verb tenses
No
contractions
Short Reports: Purpose
Informational
•answer questions
• present information
• no analysis
Analytical/Recommendation
• interpret data
• offer recommendation
• analysis and persuasion
Composing and Revising
Createan outline
Complete multiple drafts/revisions
Take a break before proofreading
Show changes to contributors for approval
15.
Using Graphics andVisuals
Clearly titled
and labelled
Uncluttered
and easy to
understand
Accurate,
functional,
and ethical
Included for a
purpose
Placed where
they make
sense
• Choose oneof the above Short Informational
Reports, review it with your peer and write
another sample of it.
• Exchange your report with another group and
ask for their feedback.
• A proposalis persuasive and aims to convince the reader to accept a proposed idea,
while a report is objective and focuses on analyzing a situation.
Purpose:
• A proposal's main goal is to persuade the reader to implement a proposed plan or
project, while a report's purpose is to relay information or analyze a situation.
Tone
• A proposal is persuasive and often written in the future tense, while a report is
objective and based on research or data.
Content
• A proposal includes a copy of the request for proposal, while a report includes an
authorization letter.
Audience
• A proposal can be internal or external, while a report is usually based on research or
data.
• Proposals are often used in business and engineering companies to get new contracts
or ensure the successful continuation of a business.
Proposals vs Reports!
Elements of InformalProposals
Introduction
Background
Proposal, method, and
schedule
Costs and budget
33.
Elements of InformalProposals (cont’d)
Staffing and Qualifications
Benefits
Request for Authorization
34.
Elements of FormalProposals
Front Matter
• Copy of RFP
• Cover letter/letter of transmittal
• Executive summary or Abstract
• Title page
• Table of contents
• List of figures/tables/illustrations
35.
Elements of FormalProposals (cont’d)
Body
• Introduction
• Background or Problem Statement
• Detailed proposal and method
• Schedule
• Budget or cost analysis
• Staffing
• Authorization
• Benefits and conclusion
36.
Elements of FormalProposals (cont’d)
Back Matter
• Appendix
• References
37.
Researching and CollectingData
What are you
looking for?
What are the best
ways to find the
information?
How much time do
you have?
How important is
the research for the
report?
38.
Where to FindInformation
Internet Databases Print Primary,
inhouse sources
Interviews Observations
39.
Conducting Interviews
Locate expertsKnow subject’s
background
Schedule in
advance
Prepare 3-4 Qs Ask Open Qs
Establish
boundaries
Record or take
detailed notes
Be patient with
interviewee
Be friendly &
objective
Finish with
appreciation
40.
Preparing to WriteFormal Reports
Purpose Content Audience Status
Length Formality
41.
Peer-Reviewing and TeamWriting
MINIMIZE DIFFERENCES IN
WRITING STYLES
ENSURE TEAM IS SATISFIED
WITH THE CONTENTS
TRACK CHANGES AND
COMMENTS
42.
Elements of FormalReports
Front Matter
• Cover
• Title page
• Letter of transmittal
• Table of contents
• List of figures/tables/illustrations
• Executive summary
43.
Elements of FormalReports (cont’d)
Body
• Introduction
• Findings
• Conclusion
• Recommendations
44.
Elements of FormalReports (cont’d)
Back matter
• Appendices
• References / works cited
• Glossary
45.
• Business proposalsare essential tools for
presenting viable solutions to challenges that
organizations face. They draw upon research
and strategic thinking to persuade stakeholders
of the proposed course of action. Proposals
encompass a variety of business aspects, and
this assignment is an opportunity to engage in
a real-world business communication scenario.
Why Business Proposals?
46.
• Refer towell-known companies such as Tim
Hortons, Starbucks, Walmart, Canadian Tire, or
areas of business activities like marketing, IT
systems, customer service, advertising, and
delivery. Imagine yourself as a line manager in
one of these companies and write a formal report
about a problem that seeks solution. Do some
research for the problem, as needed for formal
reports and provide infographics to support your
report. You will use this report for your next
assignment: writing a proposal.
Individual Project
Editor's Notes
#2 business report: A document in which factual information is compiled and organized for a specific purpose and audience.
essential form of corporate communication
help departments to coordinate initiatives and activities
help managers to stay in touch with and on top of changing circumstances
let management see the big picture to respond quickly and decisively to minor personnel, business, and technical difficulties before they become major problems
over years, reports form an extended and permanent corporate journal that tracks trends and includes accounts of incidents, actions, decisions, and policies
legal documents that can be used as evidence in court, so they must be accurate, complete, and objective
#3 Table 12.1 Informal vs. Formal Reports: Quick-Reference Chart (Formal reports are discussed in detail in Chapter 12)
informal report: A report using a letter or memo format, usually ranging from a few paragraphs to ten pages in length.
formal report: A multi-page business document based on extensive research and following a prescribed format or pattern that includes elements such as a title page, transmittal or cover letter, table of contents, and abstract.
#4 Introduction: The first section in the body of a report, which provides readers with the information they need in order to understand and evaluate the report itself; it must include either the report’s purpose or a statement of the problem the report addresses.
Introductory statement
States the purpose of the report; may also link that with recommendations
Previews key points
Outlines data collection methods
Findings: The most substantial part of a report, in which qualitative and numeric data is presented and organized by time, convention, order of importance, or component.
Findings
Organizes the data by subheadings
Chronological/alphabetical
Comparisons
Component parts/evaluative criteria
Discussion/analysis
Interprets findings
Summary: The closing or second-last section of a report that briefly restates its main points.
conclusions and recommendations: The closing section of an analytical or a recommendation report in which specific actions are proposed to solve a problem or aid decision- making.
Summary/conclusions/recommendations
Restates main points
Conclusions
Objective analysis of findings
Recommendations
Suggests actions to solve problem
#6 Periodic Reports:
Written at regular intervals (weekly, monthly, etc.)
Describe recurring/ongoing activities (monthly sales calls, customer service volumes, etc.)
Record data and outcomes
Help management monitor situations and stay informed on status quo
Situational Reports:
Non-routine, case-by-case
Business trip/conference reports
Project progress reports
#7 Accounts of major projects (10+ pages); e.g., development of new products or services; reorganization at departmental, divisional, or company-wide levels; or analysis of competing products or alternative methods
In-depth analysis and extensive research
Follow prescribed structure: front matter, body, back matter)
Organizations may have a “house” style
#9 Incident
Document unexpected or unusual problems/occurrences that affect day-to-day operations
Provide complete and accurate details of what happened
Answer Who, What, Where, When, How, Why?
Investigative
Evaluate problems or situations
Usually in response to one-time request for information
May or may not present conclusions and recommendations
Compliance
disclose information to governing bodies and government agencies in compliance with laws and regulations
Summaries
Compress and condense longer information to just what management needs to know—primary ideas, conclusions, and recommendations
To-file
permanent, written record of decisions, discussions, and directives; left on file for future reference
summarize decisions made and list the individuals involved in making them
#10 informational report: A short report that collects data related to a routine activity without offering analysis or recommending action; its three parts are introduction, findings, and summary/conclusion
readers of this type of report are in a neutral or receptive frame of mind: they want to know certain facts without being persuaded of anything
analytical report (or recommendation report): A report that interprets and analyzes information and offers recommendations based on findings
persuasion may be
greater thought has to be given to how readers might respond and to how the pros and cons of each alternative should be weighed, presented, and discussed
#11 memorandum report: A short, internal report presented in memo format.
letter report: A short, external report presented in letter format.
List of formats goes from least formal (top) to most formal (bottom)
Memorandum:
appropriate for circulating data internally
Under 10 pages
Informal, conversational style
1- to 11/4-inch (2.54- to 3.18-centimetre) side margins
standard guidewords TO, FROM, DATE, and SUBJECT
single-spaced paragraphs separated by two blank lines
Prepared form report:
forms with standardized headings
useful for recording repetitive data or describing routine activities
internal
Letter:
short, informal reports
prepared by one organization and sent to another
on company stationery
all the elements usually found in a letter (date, inside address, return address, salutation, complimentary close)
PowerPoint Report:
short written reports, especially periodic reports such as progress reports
best to use notes in a printed slide deck in order to provide adequate explanation of the text and graphics on each slide
Formal report:
usually prepared in manuscript format
printed on plain paper
have headings and subheadings
#12 Scope
Resources
Time
Budget
Personnel
Special services
Responsibilities
Create a work plan and timeline
#13 essential to evaluate data to decide what portion of it is usable
analytical reports require analysis and tabulation of data—spotting trends and relationships among gathered facts and numerical data, identifying logical patterns, and being prepared to back them up with illustrations
keep track of data sources:
the title of the document, web page, article, periodical, book, and/or other work from which it was taken
the author’s name
the publisher/web address
the publication date/web access date
establish a system for storing the information you collect
#14 alphanumeric outline: An outlining system that combines numbers and letters to differentiate levels of headings.
decimal outline (or numeric outline): An outlining system that uses a combination of numbers and decimal points to differentiate levels of headings.
#15 visual aids Materials such as charts, graphs, tables, and illustrations that present information in visually appealing ways to show trends and relationships, represent numbers and quantities, and make abstract concepts concrete
may replace words
make numerical information meaningful
clarify and simplify complex data
provide extra emphasis
Table: present exact figures
Matrix: present qualitative info
Pie chart: show proportions of a whole
Bar chart: compare one item with others
Line chart: changes in numerical data over time
Flow chart: show a procedure
Organizational chart: show structure/hierarchy of company
#16 Table 11.1 Commonly Used Graphics: Quick Reference Chart
table A chart that presents data, usually numerical, in a compact and systematic arrangement of rows and columns
Can be simple (2 columns) or complex (multiple columns)
Use the table above to illustrate the features of a table:
useful for drawing attention to specific numbers and drawing comparisons between them
Fit onto 1 page
Heading with table number and an appropriate title/caption; number tables sequentially within report, separate from figures
Label all parts
Clearly identify units in which figures are given
Use N/A, row of dots, or a dash to show missing data
Improve readability by shading alternate rows
#17 matrix A word table that presents qualitative information in a rectangular format or arrangement
Qualitative information rather than numerical data
Used to consolidate complex information in a page or less
#18 pie chart A circular chart divided into sections, where each section represents a numerical proportion of the whole
Whole circle = 100%
Each slice represents a percentage
Useful to compare a segment to the whole
#19 bar chart A visual consisting of parallel horizontal or vertical bars of varying lengths, each representing a specific item for comparison.
Bars can be segmented, divided or stacked
Bars arranged in logical or chronological order
Bars should be the same width, close enough together to make comparison easy
Data should be properly scaled to fill the entire chart, not just squeezed into one corner
#20 picture graph A visual that uses pictorial symbols to represent quantities of particular items.
Arranged in bars that can then be labelled with total quantity
#21 line graph A visual that uses lines on a grid to show trends according to the relationship between two variables or sets of numbers.
grouped line graph A line graph that makes comparisons between two or more items.
show the relationship between two variables on a grid, plotted by connecting the dots to form a continuous line
useful for showing trends, fluctuations, or progressions over a period of time
quantities (e.g., litres, dollars, percentages) go on the vertical y axis; time always goes on the horizontal x axis.
to draw attention to values, mark small dots at intersection points
to emphasize the difference between two lines, shade between the lines
presentation of data needs to be free of distortion and all data distributed equally over the graph (graphs above compare ineffective graph with effective graph—scale distortion on left, accurate scale on right)
as needed, include a key that explains lines and symbols
#22 Gantt chart A bar chart that is used to show a schedule
Used for planning and scheduling projects
Useful for blocking out periods of time, e.g., what stage a project has reached or when staff will be on vacation
#23 flow chart A diagram that maps out procedures, processes, or sequences of movement.
Use captioned symbols of different geometrical shapes (called ISO symbols) joined by lined arrows
Each shape represents a particular stage in the process
Help to clarify procedures and make complex systems understandable
#24 organizational chart A diagram that shows how various levels or sectors of an organization are related to one another
Map out the structure of a company
Show chains of command and channels of communication
Make it clear who reports to whom
#25 infographic A visual display that conveys data or information in a quick, clear, and engaging way
Visual displays to represent data and information
Communicate complex information to a large audience
Draw connections and highlight patterns
Use good visual design
Can be designed using apps
keep in mind the principles of visual design: balance, proximity, alignment, repetition, contrast, and use of space
unity can be achieved through the repetition of elements within the design, such as a row of icons or a series of caption balloons
bright colours draw viewers’ attention
contrast between colours helps viewers differentiate components
#26 Charts for comparisons
Graphs for trends
Symbols for products
Floating balloons for percentages
#27 Incident
Document unexpected or unusual problems/occurrences that affect day-to-day operations
Provide complete and accurate details of what happened
Answer Who, What, Where, When, How, Why?
Investigative
Evaluate problems or situations
Usually in response to one-time request for information
May or may not present conclusions and recommendations
Compliance
disclose information to governing bodies and government agencies in compliance with laws and regulations
Summaries
Compress and condense longer information to just what management needs to know—primary ideas, conclusions, and recommendations
To-file
permanent, written record of decisions, discussions, and directives; left on file for future reference
summarize decisions made and list the individuals involved in making them
#31 Proposal: A business document that suggests a method for solving a problem or that seeks approval for a plan.
internal proposal: A persuasive document that attempts to convince management to spend money or to implement plans to improve the organization.
external proposal: A proposal issued to governmental or private industry clients outside an organization as a means of generating income.
request for proposals (RFP): A detailed document requesting proposals and bids on specific projects.
#32 Introduction
overview of proposal, scope and highlights of your qualifications
Background
Details problem to be solved or opportunity to be addressed
Proposal, Method, and Schedule
Products and services offered
Feasibility
Work plan
Materials and resources
Project timeline
Costs and Budget
Carefully break down costs for entire project (if applicable, for each phase of project)
Legal contract—care is crucial; be realistic and note any costs that are impossible to estimate
#33 Staffing and Qualifications
Expertise and credentials of project leaders
Special resources and facilities
Include only the contact information you have permission to disclose
Benefits
Summarize reasons for accepting the proposal
Move client to action
Request for Authorization
Closing request
Stipulate the time period in which the proposal is valid
Express
confidence in the solution
appreciation for the opportunity to submit the proposal
willingness to provide further information if required
#34 Formal proposals differ from informal proposals in length and format
Have additional elements that sort complex details into easy-to-understand units with customized headings
Front matter elements above are optional in informal reports
Front matter and back matter sandwich the body of the proposal
front matter: The parts of a proposal or report that are included before the main body and contain introductory information.
Cover Letter or Letter of Transmittal
bound inside the proposal as its first page and addressed to the person responsible for making the final decision
explains the proposal’s purpose, major features, and tangible benefits
either refer to the RFP or mention how you learned about the client needs
mention when the proposal expires
Executive Summary or Abstract
Executive summary is intended for decision-makers; gives the proposal’s highlights in persuasive, non-technical language
Abstract summarizes proposal’s highlights in specialized, technical language
Title Page
Include:
proposal title and subtitle in boldfaced type or upper-case letters
name of the client organization and/or the decision-maker to whom the proposal is directed
RFP reference number
name and title of the proposal writer and company
date of submission
Table of Contents (TOC)
Included with longer proposals
List all 1st and 2nd level heads in proposal, with pages numbers
List of Tables/Figures/Illustrations
Include if proposal contains more than 6 graphic elements
Provide page number for each
#36 back matter: The parts of a proposal or report that follow the main body and contain supplemental information
Appendix
Specialized supplemental materials (e.g., graphics, statistical analyses, tables, generic resumés of project leaders, product photographs, and examples of previous projects)
Keeps them out of body of proposal—declutters
References
Formal documentation style
Lists the source material for ideas and information included in your proposal or consulted in its preparation
APA or MLA style (more detail on this later in chapter)
#37 Formal reports often involve extensive research
Sources of info:
• in-house: e.g., internal files, memos, reports, or company databases or records
• publicly available: e.g., consultants, experts, websites, books, or magazines
• restricted: e.g., websites with paywalls, research by other companies and organizations
2 types of research:
• Primary research: depends on first-hand sources; you generate the data you need, based on your own ideas and observations, by conducting interviews and surveys.
• Secondary research: the retrieval of existing information based on what others have observed and experienced, by conducting a library or an online search
#38 Online
Current articles, online databases, company news, mission statements and directories, company profiles, product facts, government information, scientific reports, sound and video files, library resources, online newspapers and magazines, press releases, job banks, and employment information
Use Boolean operators for searches:
AND—using and between your search terms will give you titles of articles containing
all of the specified words (e.g., organization AND communication AND
systems)
OR—linking search terms with or will yield documents containing at least
one of the specified words (e.g., collaborative OR group OR communication)
NOT—using not will exclude articles containing the specified term
Databases
E.g., Ovid, Dialog, LexisNexis, and ABI/INFORM
Print
Computerized periodical indexes (e.g., Readers’ Guide to Periodical Literature and Business Periodicals Index)
Book indexes, encyclopedias, directories, almanacs, and online catalogues
Academic articles, abstracts, newspaper articles, government documents, and specialty and reference books
Primary, in-house sources
Company internal files and records
Network within your company to find in-house experts who may have prepared earlier reports
Interviews
By phone or in person
Expert or seasoned corporate veteran can yield valuable information
Observations
Can be quite subjective and very open to interpretation
Observations that are reported in terms of measurable results and outcomes may be perceived as more objective and credible
#40 Before writing, think about:
Purpose: Why are you writing the report? What will it be used for?
Content: What is it about?
Audience: Who is it for?
Status: Is it a periodic/interim report (to be followed by another after a period of time) a or a special-projects report (one-time analysis written on request)?
Length: How long should it be?
Formality: How should it look and sound?
#41 team writing: The practice of multiple writers working together to produce a single document.
Reports often have multiple authors
Requires careful collaboration
Before writing establish clear guidelines for tone, sentence and paragraph length, and word choice
Writing styles
Agree on style points before you start
Tidy the draft to smooth out contrasts in writing styles between sections
#42 Front matter
Cover
Title page
centred and spaced evenly on the page:
full title of report, in boldface and/or uppercase letters but not enclosed in quotation marks
name of the person and group or organization for which the report was prepared, prefaced by Prepared for, Presented to, or Submitted to
names of the writer(s) or compiler(s), along with their job title(s) and the name of their organization, prefaced by Prepared by or Submitted by
date of submission or date report is to be distributed
Letter of transmittal
officially introduces the report and provides permanent record of document delivery
written on company stationery
memo form for insiders, letter form for outsiders
Contents:
begins with statement indicating topic and the fact that the report is being transmitted: Here is the report on privacy issues you requested on November 3 . . .
refers to report’s purpose and authorization under which it was written
briefly describes report and highlights its conclusions and recommendations
expresses appreciation for assignment and for special help received from others in its preparation
closes with follow-up action and an offer of assistance in answering questions or with looking forward to discussing the report’s details
Table of contents
Lists all sections or headings of report in order of appearance, giving initial page number for each
Front matter numbered using lower case Roman numerals
Word-processing programs allow you to generate a table of contents automatically
List of figures/tables/illustrations
If report has a few, list in section at bottom of TOC
If many, list on page following TOC
number tables and figures independently and consecutively with Arabic numbers (i.e., could be a Table 1 and a Figure 1)
Executive summary
Roughly 10 per cent of length of report
Overview of report’s most important information
Usually written after report
#43 Body
Introduction
Purpose statement—1 to 2 sentences (to explain, to recommend)
Scope—lay out boundaries of report
Background—puts report in perspective; brief review of events that created problem or description of solutions that failed
Organization—maps out report’s structure
Sources and methods—outline procedures for any primary source research you did
Discussion of findings
Most substantial section
Discusses results on which recommendations are based, with careful interpretation and analysis of data and research
Use headings to guide reader through the section logically to build your case
Conclusions
What the findings mean
Restates main points of report
May be combined with recommendations
Recommendations
What steps to take next
Feasible and appropriate
Presented 1 at a time as numbered list
Start each one with a verb
#44 Back matter
Appendices
Supplementary information too lengthy or detailed to include in body
Can be more than 1 appendix
Each appendix contains only 1 type of information: tables, diagrams, illustrations, etc.
References or works cited
Avoid plagiarism, support assertions, help reader access source material
APA documentation: author-date-page parenthetical in-text citations (refer to Table 12.2 in text)
MLA documentation: author-date parenthetical in-text citations (refer to Table 12.3 in text)
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