Positives:

 Well Synced
 Used Green Screen (Adds Creativity)
 Editing Pace suits song
 Narrative so far


                 Negatives:

× Reduce amount of ‘lip’ shots
× Need to add more narrative so the story is
__clearer.
× Keep referring to examples of Pop videos to
__stay with the genre


                 Need to do:

 Change middle bit of song
 Reduce Lip Videos
 Sort out arms on Green Screen Clips (they
__disappear)
 Finish Entire Song!

Initial screening feedback

  • 1.
    Positives:  Well Synced Used Green Screen (Adds Creativity)  Editing Pace suits song  Narrative so far Negatives: × Reduce amount of ‘lip’ shots × Need to add more narrative so the story is __clearer. × Keep referring to examples of Pop videos to __stay with the genre Need to do:  Change middle bit of song  Reduce Lip Videos  Sort out arms on Green Screen Clips (they __disappear)  Finish Entire Song!