This document provides feedback on a student's assignment analyzing self-awareness in communication. It evaluates sections on introduction (15%), analysis of diagnostic tools linking theory and practice (25%), strategies for developing skills and goals for improvement (25%), conclusion summarizing key aspects (15%), referencing using APA style (10%), and presentation formatting (10%).
The feedback suggests expanding the introduction to discuss communication and states the essay will analyze communication. It advises only describing diagnostic tools if relevant to the argument and to always link theories discussed to self-awareness, communication skills, and other topics. For the strategies section, the feedback emphasizes making goals and strategies very clear. It concludes by noting the conclusion should cover implications and meaning