Question 3- What have you learned
  from your audience feedback?



            Trupti Patel
From audience feedback the features of the video were said to work well such
     as the variety within the camera angles that were used, some of the
     transitions and the narrative as a whole. Many viewers enjoyed the different
     angles as it was interesting for them to watch. Feedback was also given to our
     two performers; Zein and Sandhya who played their roles exceedingly well
     throughout the whole video and this was done through facial expressions and
     fitting in with the genre. The audience also commented on how our performers
     worked well together showing that they were both comfortable with each other
     when it came to acting portraying a narrative that was real and believable.
      However we faced some criticisms which outweighed the positive feedback.
•      The audience said they would like to see the video to have more flow and
     would have liked to see more scenes of the artist singing.
•      The fire scene was said to be good but quite dark in terms of lighting.
     However reasons for this are the follows:

The first time we shot this scene   The location
we lost the footage due to a        was a one off     The atmosphere suited well
corrupted CD. From this I learnt    setting as it     to what we were trying to
that problems occur when it         was hard for us   imply (a scene at the artists
comes to shooting and that back     to get hold of.   house).
up equipment is always required.
•    During the first few times of shooting and converting the footage after this
    there were a few issues the audience noticed as well as me and my group.
    This criticism was that the bag in the opening shot was different in another
    shot . However both these shots were in the same scene therefore was
    noticeable. The audience did not mention it was a major thing to be noticed
    however my group and I felt that after looking back at the footage a several
    times, it was something we had to change.

•   From peer assessment, audience and focus group feed back, our group
    realised that many scenes had different clothing which was not kept
    consistent in terms whether the scene was a flashback or not.

•    The student peer to peer evaluation was very useful to get an insight on
    peoples opinions on the video. We were expecting criticism as this not only
    made our work stronger but allowed us to take these comments into deeper
    consideration.
Talking to peers individually said that         Getting a variety of feedback
these worked well:                              allowed my group and I to make
                   Lip Synching                 transformations to the video:

                         Stop Motion
           Transitions
Camera                                     For the ending of the scene, we had
Angles                                     difficulties shooting last minute
  However some criticisms we got           because of time consumption and our
  were:                                    performer, Nikhil, was unable to come
                                           and also clothing was also an issue. To
                    The ending of the
                                           make changes we took the advice of
                    narrative was
                                           the audience and added a zoom to see
 Fire scene         quite confusing
                                           Nikhil's face in order for our target
 was too dark       for some people
                                           audience to develop a clearer
                    as they did not
                                           understanding of the end part of the
                    recognise it was a
                                           narrative.
                    different guy;
                    Nikhil.


         Through these changes made I learnt that little things can affect the
         whole music video therefore I am pleased we made these changes.
Composition Of Shots

From the audience feedback and after looking over the edits a several times,
there was a lack of consideration of the composition of the shot in the
argument scene. We did not make the two characters fit the frame therefore
to improve we cropped our a little of the background and zoomed in to ensure
the two characters filled up the frame.
Distributing the video on YouTube raised great
              awareness for our music video.

                                                                                     Audiences
                                                                                     enjoyed the
 Specific
                                                                                     camera
 Timings in
                                                                                     angles used
 which this
                                                                                     in the video.
 user
 enjoyed
 watching.



                                                                                  This user
                                                                                  also liked
                                                                                  the camera
                                                                                  angles.
From the comments shown,it can show we have targeted a large audience varying in gender and
age groups. From this I learnt that YouTube is a very large broadcasting website that can gain a
increasingly high number of viewers through distributing on many social networking sites. I also
learnt that YouTube online is not only where people view videos but view on their mobile phones
and this could be a reason why the viewers were a high figure.
Ancillary Production (Audience Feed back)
Old
                     Some feedback was given to the information
                     present on the magazine advert. The text in
                     the older version on the left, didn't seem to fit
                     in with the whole production of other ancillary
                     texts and. Therefore we were told to change
                     this so it fits well not only to the artist but with
                     the genre aswel.

                     Language of the text
New

                     After taking the feedback into consideration
                     we looked again at other magazines for
                     conventions we could add and we replaced
                     the words to ‘ The Best Selling Debut Album’.
                     The positives for this change is that the words
                     would engage the audience.
With the CD ancillary products, I learnt
      that through the opinions and feedback
      given, it was noticed that the first attempt
      of the CD back cover did not flow with the
      front cover to make it look like a music
      album. From the previous CD back cover
      image, people argued this linked more
      with our music video than the other
      ancillary products. Also we realised it was
      not very conventional of a back cover in
      terms of the image therefore we made
Old   several changes.

      The image of the front cover was also
      placed for the back cover and dimensions
      were adjusted so everything flowed
      nicely. The feedback was useful as I
      learnt to stick to conventional features of
      a CD back cover. We also added more
New   features on the back cover and made the
      font bold as previously viewers claimed it
      was not clear enough.
The inlay cards were also criticised because
      they felt the old version was very simple and
      quite boring and did not fit within the album
      theme and genre. My group and I also
Old   noticed this and were gradually going to make
      changes.




    Developing upon the criticism, there was a
    change made to the back ground so that it
    would be consistent in terms of the colour
    scheme and adhere to dark colours of R&B.
New With these changes, I learnt that colour is a
    significant contribution for making the album
    look professional.

Question 3

  • 1.
    Question 3- Whathave you learned from your audience feedback? Trupti Patel
  • 2.
    From audience feedbackthe features of the video were said to work well such as the variety within the camera angles that were used, some of the transitions and the narrative as a whole. Many viewers enjoyed the different angles as it was interesting for them to watch. Feedback was also given to our two performers; Zein and Sandhya who played their roles exceedingly well throughout the whole video and this was done through facial expressions and fitting in with the genre. The audience also commented on how our performers worked well together showing that they were both comfortable with each other when it came to acting portraying a narrative that was real and believable. However we faced some criticisms which outweighed the positive feedback. • The audience said they would like to see the video to have more flow and would have liked to see more scenes of the artist singing. • The fire scene was said to be good but quite dark in terms of lighting. However reasons for this are the follows: The first time we shot this scene The location we lost the footage due to a was a one off The atmosphere suited well corrupted CD. From this I learnt setting as it to what we were trying to that problems occur when it was hard for us imply (a scene at the artists comes to shooting and that back to get hold of. house). up equipment is always required.
  • 3.
    During the first few times of shooting and converting the footage after this there were a few issues the audience noticed as well as me and my group. This criticism was that the bag in the opening shot was different in another shot . However both these shots were in the same scene therefore was noticeable. The audience did not mention it was a major thing to be noticed however my group and I felt that after looking back at the footage a several times, it was something we had to change. • From peer assessment, audience and focus group feed back, our group realised that many scenes had different clothing which was not kept consistent in terms whether the scene was a flashback or not. • The student peer to peer evaluation was very useful to get an insight on peoples opinions on the video. We were expecting criticism as this not only made our work stronger but allowed us to take these comments into deeper consideration.
  • 4.
    Talking to peersindividually said that Getting a variety of feedback these worked well: allowed my group and I to make Lip Synching transformations to the video: Stop Motion Transitions Camera For the ending of the scene, we had Angles difficulties shooting last minute However some criticisms we got because of time consumption and our were: performer, Nikhil, was unable to come and also clothing was also an issue. To The ending of the make changes we took the advice of narrative was the audience and added a zoom to see Fire scene quite confusing Nikhil's face in order for our target was too dark for some people audience to develop a clearer as they did not understanding of the end part of the recognise it was a narrative. different guy; Nikhil. Through these changes made I learnt that little things can affect the whole music video therefore I am pleased we made these changes.
  • 5.
    Composition Of Shots Fromthe audience feedback and after looking over the edits a several times, there was a lack of consideration of the composition of the shot in the argument scene. We did not make the two characters fit the frame therefore to improve we cropped our a little of the background and zoomed in to ensure the two characters filled up the frame.
  • 6.
    Distributing the videoon YouTube raised great awareness for our music video. Audiences enjoyed the Specific camera Timings in angles used which this in the video. user enjoyed watching. This user also liked the camera angles. From the comments shown,it can show we have targeted a large audience varying in gender and age groups. From this I learnt that YouTube is a very large broadcasting website that can gain a increasingly high number of viewers through distributing on many social networking sites. I also learnt that YouTube online is not only where people view videos but view on their mobile phones and this could be a reason why the viewers were a high figure.
  • 7.
    Ancillary Production (AudienceFeed back) Old Some feedback was given to the information present on the magazine advert. The text in the older version on the left, didn't seem to fit in with the whole production of other ancillary texts and. Therefore we were told to change this so it fits well not only to the artist but with the genre aswel. Language of the text New After taking the feedback into consideration we looked again at other magazines for conventions we could add and we replaced the words to ‘ The Best Selling Debut Album’. The positives for this change is that the words would engage the audience.
  • 8.
    With the CDancillary products, I learnt that through the opinions and feedback given, it was noticed that the first attempt of the CD back cover did not flow with the front cover to make it look like a music album. From the previous CD back cover image, people argued this linked more with our music video than the other ancillary products. Also we realised it was not very conventional of a back cover in terms of the image therefore we made Old several changes. The image of the front cover was also placed for the back cover and dimensions were adjusted so everything flowed nicely. The feedback was useful as I learnt to stick to conventional features of a CD back cover. We also added more New features on the back cover and made the font bold as previously viewers claimed it was not clear enough.
  • 9.
    The inlay cardswere also criticised because they felt the old version was very simple and quite boring and did not fit within the album theme and genre. My group and I also Old noticed this and were gradually going to make changes. Developing upon the criticism, there was a change made to the back ground so that it would be consistent in terms of the colour scheme and adhere to dark colours of R&B. New With these changes, I learnt that colour is a significant contribution for making the album look professional.