This document provides suggestions for improving a fan-made sci-fi trailer aimed at children. It recommends making the trailer more serious and focused on danger by showing divisions between factions more violently. It also suggests explaining the science behind the "Sparticle Project" and using fade transitions to increase drama. Potential dramatic electronic music tracks are listed to match the revised faster pace and tone. An outline for a potential 3-episode series introduces characters and plots, including the introduction of an antagonist and dangers faced by the children.