Tom crook first draft script

Tom crook first draft script

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  Space Attack By Thomas Crook ThreeSpace-Naval officers being tracked by an Alien ship, Both worlds on the brink of war. Thomas Crook [email protected]
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  INT. SPACESHIP COCKPIT- OUTER SPACE The patter of feet on cold metal rang throughout the cockpit, The door suddenly swings open with a quick but load creak. Richie quickly walks into the cockpit area. RICHIE I think we are being followed, There has been a Zorgon ship following us through the past ten star systems. Captain Mcallister glances up at the worried soldier with a calm expression. CPT. MCALLISTER Richie I know, I am the one piloting this thing. I ordered Ralph to keep his eye on it. Richie breathes a sigh of relief, Captain Mcallister turns facing the vast dark outer reaches of space. RICHIE Permission to leave captain?. Richie body stiffens. CPT. MCALLISTER Permission granted try to get some sleep Richie, I think space is messing with you. Richie leaves the cockpit, The slow creak of the door closing can be heard behind him. CUT TO: INT. SPACESHIP DORMATORYS - OUTER SPACE Richie walks into the dormitory, Ralph shoots up. RALPH What I wasn’t sleeping captain!. He shouts, Richie looks over and groans. RICHIE It’s me you idiot, Just go back to sleep good god. (CONTINUED)
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  CONTINUED: 2. RALPH Well someonespit in your coco pops. Ralph chuckles to himself as he lays back down. Richie stands next to the window looking out onto space. RICHIE Ralph? Shouldn’t you be keeping you eye on that enemy ship?. RALPH It’s fine they’d have to be stupid to attack us, Like lets be serious. Ralph yawns, Richie looks towards him. RICHIE I guess. As Richie says that a loud alarm is sounded and the ship is put on lock down. INTERCOM All personal to the bridge, This is not a drill I repeat this is not a drill. The intercom whines through the ship. Ralph and Richie run to the bridge and look out onto to space, Laser and missiles launch around many explosions can be seen. RALPH Oh God...Doesn’t look good. Ralph mumbles. RICHIE Urm...Everything will be fine...the captain knows what he’s doing. Ralph and Richie run to the cock pit of the space ship and see the door locked. RALPH Captain! Captain! Ralph shouts, Few seconds pass loud explosion.